Date: Jun 07, 2016 04:19 pm Title: ::Ch. 9::
I can relate to Amber and her broken relationship with her father. She has a right to be anger since he left her and her mother. I feel for her greatly! I was also cheering for Michael when he stood up to him. Calling a grown man a boy is very disrespectful!
Great chapter, Lorry! You definitely capture the emotion in this chapter! Also congratulations on your nominations for Remember MJfiction awards!
I'm glad your able to relate to how Amber felt though out the whole chapter poor girl, yeeees mj jumping the gun for his woman can't blame him no wants to be seen as a boy when he clearly isn't smh. Let's hope the relationship progresses over time between them.Thanks for the nomination Kara! That was really sweet of you! And congrats to you too!
Date: Apr 05, 2016 05:10 pm Title: ::Ch. 9::
It was a shame that he got Amber's mother all wrapped up in him when he had a wife. It wasn't fair to Amber, her mother, or Cherri his wife or Junior.
I agree why put everyone thought that then just leave just like that? selfish and uncalled for effecting everyone involved in the circle.
Date: Apr 05, 2016 03:11 am Title: ::Ch. 9::
Im sure it'll take some time before Amber and her dad can be civil with each other
Love how Michael protects his wife and child, it proves how much he loves her
Author's Response: Yes indeed it will, everything takes time but Andy shouldn't give up at least!. Ikr Michael is such a papa bear it's adorable 😄