Date: Mar 04, 2017 06:40 am Title: 4. 'Try Me, Try Bey!'
Hi :) Just found your story while browsing the website and I'm so glad I did. Girl you made me laugh so hard reading this chapter, you should never mess with Bey hahahaha. I like how you changed the backgrounds of the characters and I love bold Michael and the relationship between him and Bey ... Much love
Author's Response: Welcome to the story! Thank you for taking time out of your day to review! I really do appreciate it. It makes me so happy
Date: Mar 02, 2017 01:22 pm Title: 12. 'Liz'
Wow she got to meet Elizabeth Taylor talk about legendary one of the perks of befriending Michael Jackson lol.They are really coming along the bubble fight how cute was that.And MJ did say when you visit Neverland your bound to get wet haha he really did say that by the way lol.And her setting up the Christmas surprise for him is wonderful hes going to love but the perk for him is being with her I'm sure its gonna be great.
Author's Response: Yes Yes Yes!
Date: Mar 02, 2017 01:12 pm Title: 13. 'Toche'
Please try not to feel too dicouraged I know sometimes not enough feedback is annoying at best.And there are times when readers don't leave comments I'm guilty of that being a silent reader.But don't take offense its just times when things get in the way.I love all your stories and would like you to continue but at the same time its up to you.Sometimes you lose motivation or get writers block but if you've got more plots fot the story then keep it coming girly lol do whatevers in your heart.
Author's Response: Thank you! You have been with me since the very begging and I appreciate that. I love you so much. You guys are my motivation. I am Back and ready to snatch wigs, frontals, and closures. Next Chapter tomorrow night. I love you! Thank you so much for believing in me
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 12:27 pm Title: 13. 'Toche'
Girl l love bout of your story it get me though the day at work l don't have time to write review so please keep it coming l want to see this relationship go
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to know that you actually enjoy it, I love writing this story I was just feeling down. You and others have lifted my spirits up, thank you so much.
Chapter update 2morrow!
[Report This]Date: Mar 02, 2017 01:09 am Title: 13. 'Toche'
I forgot to rate...
Author's Response: You're the best!
Date: Mar 02, 2017 12:50 am Title: 13. 'Toche'
Honestly, I love it and I hope you continue to write this story. 😊 I look forward to seeing how their relationship develops. If you don't mind me asking, what is causing you to lose motivation?
Author's Response: Ehh. I haven't heard a lot of feedback and I'm not sure if y'all like it.
Date: Feb 16, 2017 04:46 pm Title: 11. 'Day 1'
YAAASSSSSS Girl love it !!! Marathonnnn coming through lol Beyonce looks so cute in her lil white dress.Michael is as sweet as can be they spending some much needed time together and at Neverland,can it get any better.And Momma Tina killed me with the safe sex comment so funny.Can't wait for more girl.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! Keep reading and Loving
Date: Jun 11, 2016 04:53 pm Title: 9. 'Be Mine'
Things were going down in the elevator yesss!!!! Michael is something else I tell you.But I do think Bey was right tho give yourselves a little grace period before you start in another relationship.But once that's over Neverland here I come LOL it's on so excited for their reunion loved it girl can't wait for more.
Author's Response: trust me it's about to go downnnnnn. n yes girl she nobody fall back! Cant wait to hear more feedback !
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2016 08:30 am Title: 9. 'Be Mine'
I can't wait fo dat chapter, you're an amazing writer and thank you for reading my story!
Author's Response: lol trust me I can't wait either. and I'm def going to read the next chapter of yours I got pretty busy The last few days
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2016 06:35 pm Title: 9. 'Be Mine'
the sparks are flying hope you dont leave me waiting long on the next amazing chapter
Author's Response: thank you babes. Much love. I love you and your reviews thank you!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2016 10:45 pm Title: 8. 'Setting Spray'
lol lisa got owned loved this chapter cant wait to read so much more of this amazing story
Author's Response: Lmao yes girl look for another update tonight or tomorrow d84;a039; Thank you for the review it keeps me motivated
[Report This]Date: Jun 08, 2016 05:44 pm Title: 7. 'R'
Lol this is killing me💏🙌😂😁
Author's Response: It killed me too girllllll💪🏽
Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:55 pm Title: 7. 'R'
I enjoy reading your story. Please continue to write more chapters! I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I love the fuck out of your reviews. YOU keep me motivated God damn I can't help but smile.
Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:53 pm Title: 7. 'R'
Lisa is going to get into an arguement with Mike or Bey.
Date: Jun 08, 2016 04:43 pm Title: 6. 'Flaunt It Los Olivos!'
Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you!