[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 12:11 pm Title: Guilty Pleasures
Ooooohhh bitch, she spit in her coffee? I'm DONE. Liya is crazy. Does she have some sort of unstabled background that has made her come to this or something? Lol. She's almost ruining Michael's life and now she's trying to kill people off the island (chocolate legs) smh.
Btw, in the last review for the last chapter I meant to say how I laughed at Liya trying to cook. I will also add that I love Michael's personality in this story. ;D
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 12:01 pm Title: Hospitality at its Finest
Michael has once again fallen into the trap!
Lord, HELP HIM, because if this continues he's in for a lot of trouble.
Liya has no type of self control, but the thrill she gets from sleeping with Michael is obviously what's driving her.
Can't wait to find out what happens next!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 11:48 am Title: White Hot Christmas
Oh Michael what are we going to do with you?
Lust is apart of the seven deadly sins and Michael is just getting himself wrapped up in something that he knows he won't be able to get out of. When you do something wrong it feels right and even though you think you'll be able to control yourself you won't.
Michael. Michael. Michael.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 09:41 am Title: Under his Skin
She is craaaazy!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 07:35 am Title: Under his Skin
Michael better not go round fucking that psycho all week with no rubber. He likely to impregnat her ass for real. That's the last thing I'll be able to stomach. Ugh. He'll never have an out then.
Does she really think him being led by his dick could actually mean love? Uuuuuggggghhhhhhh!!!!!!! He's a Stockholm victim on the realest of real. I can't wait till he finds out and go straight Super Saiyan on her ass. (Shit I was looking forward to that happening ASAP!!)
Now she got Trashae in her cross hairs again. Michael better do something before this fucking Hazelnet get that girl fired or worst hurt her. I don't put it past her maniacal ass.
More soon!!!!<333
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 06:43 am Title: Under his Skin
Wow. Thats all I really have to say about her. But like I said, the only way out.....miscarriage. miscarriages can really bring people closer. I don't even know why im tryin to help her lol.
[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2015 07:18 pm Title: The Rejected
So do not text me, do not call me, and do fuck with me on my job, am I clear?"
LOL
I'm still not liking Liya. Why did she tell all that stuff to Michael? She doesn't know him....she's just thirsty as hell. Yet I'm laughing, as sadly, she reminds me of someone I know.
Author's Response:
ROFL! Omg how did I not see that! It's fixed now, you know what he meant!
That was her justifying her right to fool around on her husband, trying to gain Michael's sympathy, even though he doesn't really care. There are LOTS of crazy ass Liya's lurking around. I know plenty! (Not quite as bold, but still!)
[Report This]Date: Oct 13, 2015 07:40 pm Title: The Moment of Truth or the Beginning of the Lie
She's too much. Her behavior isn't just flirtatious, it's composed of the kinds of actions that could easily cause her legal problems. Michael would be a moron to follow up on her invitation.
Author's Response:
She's not quite all there to put it simply. Lol and she's lived too much of a priveliged life to ever think about facing consequences like those Michael COULD impose on her if he really wanted to.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 06:56 pm Title: A Night Not Remembered
Of course, try and piss off your boss' wife, Michael. That's a smart move. He's too damn impulsive.
Author's Response:
That was really impulsive cause she could have reacted any kind of way. Like going back to her husband and claiming Michael took advantage of HER.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2015 06:46 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
What do you mean you don't own Carter? 
Author's Response:
LOL you know, just trying to keep things legal here...
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 02:33 pm Title: Sinners
Al I can say is she better lie and say she miscarried the baby cause thats the only way I see her getting out of this. She dug herself a hole. She still wrong for what she doing. She is a sex craved psycho who cares nothing about adultery. She needs a reality check quick. She is actually starting to get on my nerves lol. Poor mike.
Author's Response:
RIGHT! Because Michael is going to straight set her ass on fire when he finds out she bold face lied to him. She'll get her reality check, don't worry.
[Report This]Date: Oct 11, 2015 12:34 pm Title: Sinners
So what? She's going to try and get pregnant for real in the next week? I'm completely disgusted. "Neglected woman" my ass. If the way you discribed her before her marriage there is no way she's that naive. She wasn't under any thumbs growing up so she wasn't sheltered. Going out and doing dirt and she doesn't know what she's doing is beyond fucked up? Nope not beleiveing that in least bit. NOPE!! She's a million miles from Naive She's a sociopath plain and simple and that would explain how she's even laughing at all at any of this.
Now he's allowing her to concoct some stupid separation from her husband to justify this fake ass pregnancy? All she wants is the time to be with Michael and be up under him.
Michael is just as dumb for even going along with this. I see his Ronald rules his world too. At this point it's Stockholm syndrome. That's the only way he's going feel for her. Raped and held mentally hostage on the real.
Lawd give me strength.
Did he even check the text she sent Trashae and apologize for even going through with all that?
This story is like too much icecream on a diet.
More soon. <333
Author's Response:
She was sneaky and rebellious before she settled down to get married, but at the same time with rich parents she never had to pay for her actions so she's still naive in the sense of dealing with any type of consequences. And poor Michael - when he's not thinking about sex - ALL he can think of are the consequences because he's been in affairs and knows what happens.
And EXACTY this whole pregnancy thing is just a way to get closer to Michael. (an extreme psychotic way)
Ronald... you just made me think about BEB Mike and it gave me a chill of disgust!
He checked the text, but Trashae never answered it so he didn't bother with an apology he's just going to let that dream slip away (for now since he thinks he's about to be a dad)
and LOL!
Date: Oct 11, 2015 11:13 am Title: New Endings and New Beginnings
She needs help for faking a pregnancy. Really queen?
Date: Oct 11, 2015 11:10 am Title: Sinners
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH, SOMETHING IS FIXING TO HAPPEN! I AM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT!
Author's Response:
lol lot of things are about to go down!
[Report This]Date: Oct 10, 2015 05:10 am Title: New Endings and New Beginnings
Wow that is low........ok I was on her team but faking a pregnancy is taking it to the extreme. Poor mike. I just hope she knows what goes around comes around. Im starting to lean towards team trashae now. He should make her take one in front of him. Then he will know and be furious lol, but mike aint so innocent, maybe the first time but he has gave in to her a lot. He played a role in this as well. This is a story where I cant predict an outcome lol I love it, keep going.
Author's Response:
Faking a pregnancy is extreme especially to someone like Michael who LOVES kids and has been wanting a family. She doesn't know that about him though so she really has no idea how deep this is bout to cut him. but right! Michael did give into her TWICE so he is playing the role whether he wants to admit it or not.