[Report This]Date: Aug 24, 2016 02:07 pm Title: Dangerous Deals
Ugh times a damn million. This bitch!!! And by bitch I'm talking about Michael at this point. I'm sure there are other options for him not to have to take this route. Move, find another job and quit. Just because she's beautiful doesn't mean shit. She's not even in love with him. That's not love on ANY level. Obsession is dangerous and even if she gets a divorce and things work out for him on his job what kind of life will he have with her? I don't see any sanity coming from this relationship on any level.
Poor Trashae.
Now he's going to keep fucking her to keep her in line? No love can come from this.
As upset as Nutella makes me. Is as good as this story is LMAO. We all gonna need counseling after this.
More soon girl!!! I miss you!!!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Aug 23, 2016 08:02 pm Title: Dangerous Deals
I really hope he doesn't sleep with her
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2016 10:01 am Title: You've Been Warned
Nutella is fucking nuts. Why would Trashae not working at EM anymore have to do with her and Michael?!?? She doesn't cease to exist outside the job crazy ass!!!! Michael could continue seeing her outside of work. Plus he's sure to know that it was Nuts on a stick that set his girl up. Ugh!!!! Can she just get caught already. A part of just wants Michael to just tell her damn husband already!!!!
I'm hooked and you know it!!! More soon! <333
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2016 07:40 pm Title: You've Been Warned
Okay I though she was going to come up with some better shit than slipping her damn million dollar bracelet into Trashae's drawer. I overestimated her, she's wack, but I will admit it probably will get Trashae's Fired but that's not going to stop Michael from seeing her. They can still date and I hope Lil's ass comes to that realization. Michael don't want you hoe, but she not understanding. Ooohh this makes my skin boil so freaking much. Trashae didn't deserve this. somebody set fire under her ass, PLEASE.
update soon please!
Author's Response:
There's only so much that Liliana can really do and get away with under her husband's nose, so even though it was petty, it is just the beginning lol.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2016 07:31 pm Title: Just When You Think It's Safe...
I am sitting over here rolling! I finally Mrs. Melendez as a straight JOKE that it's hilarious. I really like how you switched this up. Its different from the usual Michael dates girl and has a crazy ex or crazy girl that wants to get with him. it's a different atmosphere and I love it! but then again I hate it because this bitch is really crazy. If you get to the point where you try to ruin the career of another woman to get a man is when you need some psychological help. but I love it. on to the next chapter! and btw I said ten stars before I mean five, although I believe you deserve 10.
[Report This]Date: May 29, 2016 07:22 pm Title: Game Over
she took the food! lmao! I don't understand why she thought she could continue this life. it's just so dumb for her to believe that she could fool him. I'm glad she came clean though before Michael started buying the more expensive stuff like car seats and strollers, shoot even a crib! I'm a little devastated though because you could tell he was excited about the baby and here she come ruining stuff smh. ten stars girl!
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2016 04:08 am Title: Just When You Think It's Safe...
*Sings..."It's gonna take a miracle..." For me to believe Michael legit falls in love with this psychopath. Hostage situation? Yes...but legit love? Nah fam. The girl is in-fucking-sane. Yes Michael thought about her but it wasn't with more than lust, fear, and nervous anticipation. If only he could file a restraining order. I hope he at least gets some loving from Trashae. He deserves that peice of mind.
Lawd jebus!!!!!! :((((((
More soon. I don't think our internet love could get any creepier!!! <333
[Report This]Date: May 15, 2016 05:12 pm Title: Mr. Brown Eyes
Omg I'm loving this!
[Report This]Date: May 13, 2016 04:33 pm Title: Just When You Think It's Safe...
holy shiz-ni-E! I didn't think you were still writing this! I definitely have to catch up!
Author's Response:
I took a long beak from it but it's BAACK!!!!
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2015 03:47 pm Title: Game Over
Ummh uh.Hyeelll naw. This is not cute in the slightest. This looks a whole lot better on Michael Ealy in that movie. She's been pissing me off since the second chapter.
And Michael is just as stupid and infuriating as she is. He's getting all in his feelings when, a bitch he himself has confirmed as crazy, plays him like a fiddle to accompany the mood of his sad poor boohoo life. Ugh!why am I getting worked up over him. Sigh. And he's gonna go back to her, why? Because they always freaking do.Uggggghhh Michaeeeel. I want to "beat!" his ass.
But you're still a good writer cause im still gonna keep reading.
[Report This]Date: Nov 09, 2015 07:31 am Title: Game Over
I really hope he doesn't fall or go back to that crazy bitch. The fact that she would lie and deceive him like that was beyond cruel yet proves how psychotic she really is. She seriously needs to give it up and leave him alone for good at this point not only because he deserves so much better then that but because she did the ultimate no-no,the worst thing you could ever do to a man. I actually cringed when she came up with this ideal I was like I know this hoe is not about to do that to him but I'm glad he finally caught on to her game.
[Report This]Date: Nov 08, 2015 02:55 pm Title: Game Over
Will you look at that. Selfish to the end. Bitch took the food!!!!! Michael should start looking for another job and leave that state ASAP. This crazy bitch is not going to be easy to shake. He deserves any and every thing he gets when, and I say when because I know his dumb ass gonna go back to her and her psychotic bullshit. That line can never be uncrossed. AT ALL!!
I kinda wished he had not cried in front of her. I don't even know how to get the words out that I feel about this chick. Lawd help me I would kick her ass in the shins.
Lawd help me but I can't wait for More so soon soon!! <333
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 12:34 pm Title: Under his Skin
First off, I am so happy that I'm caught up.
Secondly, Liya is still crazy-- Michael put it best. Her "looney tune ass..."
Thirdly, Trashae is so understanding which makes me angry because Liya is going to go and do something stupid. She's bringing more people into an already messy situation. Someone is going to end up severely hurt and this "pregnancy" is going to backfire on her ass. I know it and I can't wait for it to happen.
This might be horrible but Michael and Liya do have some cute scenes though sometimes, I won't even lie, lmao.
Author's Response:
They are cute sometimes when Liya isn't being crazy LOL.
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 12:27 pm Title: Sinners
At least Liya will be going down to hell with you Michael. Not that you need any more of her companionship anyway...
[Report This]Date: Oct 25, 2015 12:20 pm Title: New Endings and New Beginnings
It's one thing to like someone, it's another thing to be obsessed with them. But faking a pregnancy is on a whole. other. level! On top of that she's all in his phone sending out dismissal tests to Trashae who I was rooting for to say yes to Michael when he asked her out. I admit I thought that Michael was being harsh in the beginning of the story but as it's been going on I can see that Liya is getting out of control. I don't know what's wrong with her but she needs to get it together. Michael has a life to live. She's got a husband, who actually cares, and money set for days. She needs to give Michael a chance at happiness and not try and seduce him every chance she gets so she can ruin his life.
Even though we know she isn't pregnant, for Michael sake he should ask her to take another one.
I cannot deal.