[Report This]Date: Sep 20, 2015 10:11 pm Title: Blurred Lines
It sounds like ur busy, busy, busy love...I will be sure 2 read ur other story also. U have talent my friend and I need u 2 know that, if u don't know anything else plz know that I love, l love, love ur stories. U take me 2 so many places and all I ask is that u keep up the fantastic work...I want mj and her 2 have make it official and stop playing!! As far as lisa goes, she's outta there baby!! But that might cause problems, but that girl is worth it, she's just plain gorgeous! Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Your comments make me smile. Thank you so much for your kind comments. Yeah Lisa is gone for now But she may be back :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2015 07:28 pm Title: Blurred Lines
You have just created the story that is going to become my new favorite. Great first chapter, I loved how you introduced the story. I really want to know what happened after the patron took affect. Also, Gabi seems like really nice girl for Michael.
Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you luv I have really enjoyed all of the comments that I have received and your comment made me smile. More is coming :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2015 05:32 am Title: Blurred Lines
Hey there, I'm sorry, u don't have a banner 4 ur story and I thought u did my bad, guess I didn't c that 1 either lol. It's great 2 hear from u. How did u come u with this story btw? Have u thought about doing a banner? I wish I could do 1. Hope 2 hear from u soon.
Author's Response:
Well this idea had been in my head for awhile now. But it just needed time to come together as all of the ideas for it weren't clear. And I knew that Michael was in Vegas b4 so I thought why don't I do a story while his does something that he wouldn't do if his were sober. And so I decided to write this story and give him a different love interest than Lisa. Idk how to do a banner. I can do collages but that will look tacky. I'm not really sure how I want the banner to look like either luv :)
Date: Sep 18, 2015 10:49 pm Title: Blurred Lines
Lisa is so whack for not wanting to stay with Michael, I'd stay with his ass. But I'm hooked, keep going :)
Author's Response:
lol I like that and I would too girl. I will have more on Sunday :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 04:21 pm Title: Blurred Lines
I am so here for this!
Author's Response:
Thank you girl and more is coming soon :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 04:04 pm Title: Blurred Lines
Omg!! This is a great story!! I love it, I'm glad him and Lisa are over goodbye! That pic of her is gorgeous! She looks better than Lisa in a lot of ways, but I'm in love with this story. Plz write more honey. U did that! Lol. Hope 2 hear from u soon!
Author's Response:
Wow thank you *blushing* I really appreciate your comment and I will have more coz I just got started with this story frfr :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 03:56 pm Title: Blurred Lines
Awe yeah. Good fucking bye Lisa. Good riddance to bad rubbish on the real. It's her loss.
Now Mr Jackson sure bounced back quick. That patron took control Lmaooo. It will be interesting to see where they go from here.
Love it so far. More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Lmao she was wrong for wat she did. That was straight trifling frfr. Lol yeap once he drank it; it was on. I will have more soon XD
Date: Sep 18, 2015 10:58 am Title: Blurred Lines
Love it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you. I will have more soon :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 09:32 am Title: Blurred Lines
I love this story.You've got me hooked.
Author's Response:
Really? Well I hope that you stick around and fasten your seatbelt coz its going to be a bumpy ride :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2015 08:44 am Title: Blurred Lines
Great start! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you luv :)
Date: Sep 18, 2015 05:59 am Title: Blurred Lines
Damn that was really heartless of Lisa
lol at Chris he's too funny, glad Michael has his two best friends with hi
Love this story already, can't wait to see where it's going
Author's Response:
She was wrong for doing that to him. Poor Michael :( But on the bright side his sees her as she really is now. Awww..thank you. That means a lot to me :)