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Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Sep 12, 2015 03:06 pm Title: About Me

HI I'm mjlifemate58 btw, just dropped in 2 say hi and introduce myself. Hope 2 hear from u soon. Congrats on ur first journal! 



Author's Response:

Hey girl, and thanks!

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2015 06:37 pm Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

Mine was the Surrogate (obviously posted here LOL) and the plot simply started off as a girl who applies to be a surrogate mother and ends up miraculously being selected by Michael Jackson. She dislikes him at first (and still does sometimes currently - as the fic goes on) but he grows on her and so on...

And girl, my writing started off the same I'm sure. I absoultely HATE that the old board (not Michael related) that I used to write for shut down a while back. What I wouldn't GIVE to go back and read my old fics and laugh at myself. I don't really remember that much detail of what the writing style was like but I vaguely remember the plots - all very shallow and pointless.

Like literally they meet, a week later they fall in love, they have sex one time, boom she pregnant and the next morning she wakes up with a belly the size of a watermellon ALREADY. Like that kind of stuff lol

The very first story I read all the way through (or at least until the last chapter available) on this site was "Complete Opposite" by AtMJsHouse.



Author's Response:

I remember when the Surrogate popped up in the recents tab. I honestly thought you had came from the old MJ board, but obviously not, lol. 

"All very shallow and pointless" --- I'm with you sista. Right witcha.

I totally just messed up AtMJsHouse story title. I thought it was called "Opposites Attract." 

Shoot, I knew it was opposite SOMETHING, I just couldn't remember it. I still go back and read though.

Reviewer: SkyWriter Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2015 02:11 am Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

Hey Brandy,

I almost want to go take a photo of the writing I was guilty of when I was younger. Its awful but forgiveable and if but nothing else, cute. My stories were so incredibly innocent. If I had to write the word SEX I used to write S_ _  hahahaha. or S * *... I was a very sheltered kid. 

The plot line of your first story is actually pretty cute. 

The first story I read was one about Michael and Lisa Marie Presley and I can't remember what it was called, but it was actually very good. At the time Michael was still married to LMP and I was a huge fan of her (now, I have realistic and normal ideas of her and I don't believe the sun shone out her arse like I did back then--- to say the very least *cough*) too. I also read another one called Fire & Ice by a writer called BlueSW who came to be a friend of mine. It was a really good story and she was an incredible writer who has now gone on to write professionally. 

So, my first fan fiction ever was about a girl (suspiciously described as myself) who wins a competition to meet Michael Jackson; all expenses paid trip to Neverland. Hahaha. And she goes (unaccompanied?!) and hangs out and ends up being his friend. For whatever reason, her parents abandon her (and this is where it gets good LOL), she ends up living with him and falling in love with Macaulay Culkin --- and somehow she gets knocked up (not to Mac), and Macaulay turns in to a drug addict (this is obviously the time period where I decided I didn't like him anymore??) and so she ends up in a love affair with Michael's nephew TJ.... And then she makes friends (she is about 15 all through this time btw lol) and she suddenly then discovers she can sing.... so Michael helps her launch her singing career and TJ gets jealous (LOL must have been the time his own career took a nose dive) ... and it went on and on and on for about 12 notebooks.... hahaha

Oh my.... I'm curious to know on what note I left it. I used to race home from school every day and write 10 notebook pages and then run to my best friends house (two houses away on my street) and we'd lay on her bed and I'd narrate it to her. And then I used to read to her in the bath ... and Im not even embarrassed to say, that even now, she is 30 and I am 31, that when I see her, she asks me to bring my latest fan fic and I still read to her in the bath.... LOL

#friendshipgoals <3 

Ace interactive blog, btw :) Love it! x



Author's Response:

Yeessss, #Friendshipgoals , lmao. 

Hahaha. Don't worry, I did the same thing except it was on the internet and you got warned about using that sort of language.

And thank you. It was a little cute girl-pop story as I call it. 

Lmao, I actually never really cared for LMP. I mean I chose to skip over those few chapters of Michael life and I've only made her the enemy in my story about once, but now I sort of want to kill her off because she just isn't my cup of tea, lmao. 

And your story sounds like it was a runaround! I laughed so hard when you said that she was about 15 at this time. Your imagination must've been running wild. Your story sounds like a story I read by this girl on the site i used to write on. She had put her crush in the story as the love interest and when the main girl broke up with Michael and got with the other guy everybody got like really pissed at her so her story went through like hell and back and all around the world. But your story sounded interesting too! Lol. 

And I was going to ask you did you mean like legit notebooks, but I see in your journal topic that you actually wrote in notebooks, like all the way out. And you had/have pretty handwriting by the way! I like your cursive with and without the IV in your arm. It's was still neat and legible. 

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2015 03:57 pm Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

The plot of my first fan fic was about this girl named Jade which ironically is my name lol and Michael. As I mention b4 its called Give In To Me. And wathe plot is that Jade is a party girl who likes to have fun. So one night she goes to this nightclub in downtown LA. Jade is not best pleased when she learns that Michael Jackson is going to be there and she's whatever. So while all of the ladies are excited, Jade has an attitude so when Michael begins to sing GITM, her attitude changes esp after his starts singing...So you can just imagine wat happen next lol



Author's Response:

It sounds like they had a hate/love relationship going on throughout the story? Am I hot or cold? Lol. 

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2015 03:30 pm Title: About Me

Hi Brandy it's nice to meet you :)  Well I have loved Michael since I was 5. The first video that I watched was Billie Jean and I simply fell in love with it and him. I thought that it was so cool how the sidewalk would light up almost by magic as his walked on it.As the years passed my love for Michael grew. I would watch his videos and fantasize about going to his concerts. I dreamed about meeting him like all of the time. I started writing mjfiction in 2009. My first mj fanfic was called Give In To Me. I had watched the video and I was mesmerized by how sexy Mike looked in the video. And when his looked at the camera briefly I started blushing like no lie. GITM was never published online and I think that I still have it, but it's not good. Lol the only thing that I miss about high school was sneaking into the boys bathroom and locker room *snickers*



Author's Response:

Hey girly.

You should at least try posting it, I mean if you were up for it. You never know if it's good until you actually post it.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2015 10:29 am Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

See this is why you won most improved author. You so earned it!!! Congrats on that by the way. So proud of you. ;)

My very first Fic I wrote was called Art&Soul. It was about an artist. (Lol I always write about artists) That meets Michael when he comes to NYC to record the rest of his BAD album. She's Quincy Jone's god daughter. She was hired to do a mural at the Electric Lady Studios in the Village and he falls for her work when he sees it. Love at first sight blah blah blah. I still love it. I might rehash it. A friend on here asked me to. So maybe. Lol. 

The first Fic I read I thought was real. It was a one shot about this girl Yvette that said she worked with Michael on the Invincible album. They hooked up one night. Some people say it actually happened but I'm not too sure about that. It was a juicy story though. I was hooked from then on. 



Author's Response:

*bows* Aww, thank you so much.

You're an artist yourself right Tut? I love your stories Tut but I'm horrible of keeping up with them so it's like saddening, but once I catch  up I'll try to be better at keeping up. Anywho, your first fanfic sounds good I'm sure now it'd be bomb with you having more experience and stuff. I hope you think a little harder about redoing it. 

I've attempted at one shots, not my forte whatsoever so I let the pros keep to it.

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2015 10:20 am Title: About Me

Hey Brandy!!!

I got into Michael in Jamaica. A friend of mine had the BAD album and I borrowed it and never gave it back. Lol. There wasn't much Michael Mania there for Thriller so I didn't get to experience that. I remember when I came here I got a pair of Michael's LA Gear sneakers. The black ones with the buckles. You couldn't tell me jack. Lol. 

I got into writing fan fic in 2010. I used to spend every spare minute I wasn't working or spending with my family brousing forums till I joined MJJB. It closed not too long after I officially joined and I migrated to MJJE them MJJU. 

As for high school memory. Hmm I was pretty much devoted to my books and sports. I was an honor student so I had time for little else plus I was pretty sheltered. College however is another story. I wasn't a drinker still not but I grew quite a bit socially spiritually and politically. I'm happy with my life right now despite the difficulties I have but. I wouldn't trade the time for anything. <333



Author's Response:

Hola, Tut!

I've seen those LA Gear sneakers. Too bad I don't own a pair, lol 

Ooo, what sports do you play? I'm no wear near as active as I should be.

And I'm glad that you're confident about your life! I honestly wish more people were like that.

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2015 12:07 am Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

My first MJ plot that I can remember to date is one where it was a teenage girl and her parents were in an abusive marriage until one night her mother gets killed and her dad ets sen to jail and she was alone and Michael was her only comfort. I might start that one or something similar back up. 

The first fanfic I read on here was 2000 watts I loved that story but she never finished it.



Author's Response:

That could be a good story! 

Ahhh, I read 2000 Watts and it reminded of Opposites Attract but then as you get deeper you see that they're two different stories.

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 04:22 pm Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

Lol! I used to write wrestling fan fic when I was 13 (don't judge me) and my writing was about like yours in the beginning. Lol! 😂😂 

 

My very first MJ story I wrote is What Dreams May Come. I don't want to go into the plot of this because it's something I'm still working on and plan to post real soon. Baby Be Mine is actually the 4th story I've written. Hopefully soon I'll get my other stories out though. 

The first MJ fic I've ever read is called Off the Wall written by my sister....it used to be on MJJB and I honestly can't remember what happened. 



Author's Response:

Lol, no judging this way!

 

Well Gabs, I hope you do post it soon, I'll try to read. I still have to start on Baby Be Mine. It's cool that you and your sister shared a hobby like this.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 03:43 pm Title: My Writing Was.... Take A Look

well the first one i ever read on this website was well.uh.you know what I can't even rememeber i have read so many stories on this website since i discovered mj fanfiction like two months i was afriad to actually do it...until i did it...some stories just feel like they jump into LOVE so fast im just like da flip?!?that's way too fast!..puts me off but i do admire  writers like daretodream, sky i because they do mj's character (how's his potrayed in their eyes) feels right to me..

..yes i have been reading on the sly..i might be doing that more who knows~

and im writing my own story for mj on this website I honestly think my writing sucks ..stay tuneed if it ever gets put on here....xD

well eh back to topic your writing aint too bad then much better than mine xD

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I think the first I read on here was "Don't Say The 'D' Word" but I can't properly remember her pen name. And I totally agree. Some couples in stories fall in love too fast and it can throw a writer off like that. I'm guilty of that when I first start writing... and I hope you continue reading on the sly, lmao. I'll read whenever you post it. I try to support people the best way I can. My writing can be pretty bad when I half-ass it. Lol, I haven't seen any of yours so when I do I'll let you know. 

Reviewer: HoneyToTheBee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 10:32 am Title: About Me

Hey Brandy!!! And yes I do always have the singer's face in mind when I see your screen name lol. 

My first exposure to Michael was in March of 1988 when my mom carried me in her belly to the BAD tour concert in St Louis (I was born in August of 88). 

To know that even as an unborn fetus that I was that close to him in the hottest stage of his life is good enough for me LOL.

I can vaguely remember having his Dangerous cassette tape in my possession as a child and loving Remember the Time, listening to it rewinding it manually and listening to it again and again. But my mom stopped supporting him after the allegations and from there he kind of fell off the grid to me. I seriously remember her sitting me down and having a talk with me about bad men like Michael Jackson who do things to kids that's like when she warned me about rape and not trusting strangers and all that. Thus, I moved on to Backstreet Boys, Destiny's Child, Britney Spears, etc.

I didn't really become a major fan until not this past June but like June 1st 2014 when on the radio they were honoring him on the month that he died. They played Smooth Criminal and I was drawn in immediately. I went home and Youtubed all his videos (Hearng Remember the time was SO freaking nostalgic to me that I cried). I didn't really want to fall into a Fandom for a dead guy but from that moment I watched all his videos he just would not stay out of my dreams and it seemed like everywhere I went for the next couple of days I'd hear his song playing in stores and even at the club I go to.

It became an inside joke with my BFF that he was following us around. Literally everyday for like a week we kept hearing his music randomly which probably was only such a huge coincidence because we were more aware as before we'd never have noticed or cared. 

Writing had always been a hobby/outlet of mine. I think in cases of celebrities especially ones no longer with us, we can't express our feelings to them to get then off our chests so we express them this way. I'm a closet writer though so none of my friends have read my stories. I used to write for Fanfiction.net for a video game I was into when I was like 15 and then a Backstreet boy forum at like 13 and I know my stories were terrible too. Recently though Ive started to come out of the writers closet though an a coworker and I are signed up for these creative writing classes in our town I'll probably want to scrap all my stories and start new when I've completed that class LOL because even now I know I could use some improvement.

Well, girlie there's my story!!! I'm not even going to talk about HS lol braces and acne that's about all I can remember.



Author's Response:

Like your bio says, you were totally there at that concert!

Ahh, I see. I hate that was the way of  your Michael Jackson obsession downfall but it's nice to know that you're back! Remember the Time will remain one of my favorite songs of his of all time. I don't know what it is about that song but I just love it and can listen to it on replay for hours, but I hear his song in the stores too! Especially when I walk in krogers. It's like they know I'm coming in there because it plays when I step through the doors, lol.

Your stories are amazing! And I'm sorry for being a slacker, but I really look up to writers like you, Sky, Tut, and Teddy. I'm hoping that when I'm older (hopefully soon) I'll be struck in the head with some good writing skills and be able to sit down and write me a best selling novel, lol.

Lol nothing to be ashamed of HoneyBee. I'm suffering from my achne now!

Reviewer: SkyWriter Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 07:11 am Title: About Me

Hey Brandy! 

Nice to see your first little blog. :) I always find it amazing to hear about fans who became so after his death. Its not a bad thing, but it makes me happy cos it makes me know that fans didn't stop growing in volumes when his life ended. It kinda feels nice to hear. 

I started writing fan fiction when I was 11. I spent a lot of time in and out of hospital growing up and I used to write stories about being friends with Michael (this was before the internet was a thing! or before I even knew FF was a thing!). And trust me, they are so awful! (but a bit cute and innocent). In hindsight, I think it was my way of coping with what I was going thru at the time.  

When I got the internet I just read ff and never wrote until I was about 16 (Butterflies) and then I wrote a couple of others... some personal stuff, and now The Accused. I never thought I'd get back in to it after he died, but .. well, here we are!

HS memories! No great ones here. I hated HS. but I did meet my very best friend in HS back when we were 13 and we are both 31 now and probably closer than ever. That's my greatest HS win :) 



Author's Response:

Hola Sky!

Yeaaaa, I thought why not. I sometimes wish I would've gotten into him before he died. Although he stopped touring long before I would've even been able to go to one of his concerts.

At least you're able to associate something good (writing stories of being friends with Michael) with something bad (the issues you were going through at the time). It's always good to have something help you cope.

I'm glad you got the internet then, although Butterflies was written when you were younger I still find it a good work of yours. I'm slowly beginning to read your others also. I'm just looking for the right time because I have this thing where I start reading a story and forget about life completely. Exactly why I catch up on stories or start new ones during the weekend or during school breaks because then I can lounge around the house and do nothing but stuff my face, listen to pandora, and read. But, anyway, I'm glad you decided to return after his death!

You and your best friend are my role models now. I hope that my best friend that I've known since that age remains my best friend when we get in our 30s.

Reviewer: Gabby7 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 05:55 am Title: About Me

I remember being into Michael as early as 4 years old. My sister was a bigger fan than I was though. One of the earliest memory I have is seeing him on t.v. there was like a M.J marathon showing all his videos...me and my cousins used to pile up in front of the T.v. And just watch until bed time....I miss those day.

How I got into reading and writing MJ fiction...my sister. She used to read and write and I would read her stories, so I decided to give it a shot one day a few years back ....and I love every bit of it.



Author's Response:

Wow, you remember that? I sometimes have trouble remember what someone told me two minutes before...

Well I'm glad you took a shot! I've eyed your story... it's tempting to click.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 03:51 am Title: About Me

Lol we should both run for the sleeping president. I love my sleep way too much as well. Well I discovered mj around 08-09 and left the fandom..here I am again XD.

I miss secondary school at times just not the work involved.  Lool

Nice to meet u brandy ^-^



Author's Response:

Sleepers for the win!

Welcome back to the fandom girl... it's hard to stay away, i know!

Nice to meet you too Lorry! It's nice to know that you look at my stories "on the sly" lmao. Thanks girl!

Reviewer: mjsbadbabygirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 08, 2015 12:03 am Title: About Me

I'm the same age as you, about to go into my senior year on Friday. My fave color is pink and girl sleeping is my favorite thing to do. 

I found out about Michael the same way you did once he passed away and this girl I used to hang out with in Middle school was OBSESSED with him like she used to talk about him everyday. So I decided to do my research and found him so beautiful and so sweet and my mother she was always a fan since the Jackson 5 so I had her too.

I found out about MJfiction through youtube, I read stories of him on there and one of the authors said she was moving to here so I followed and wow it was amazing here. Myself I was already writing stories cause I was in love with Mindless Behavior and I wrote fanfic about them so I decided why not try writing about Michael?

I'm still trying to get the hang of writing though my other stories were good but now I feel as though I'm lacking, but I look up to your stories, I find them amazing. 

 



Author's Response:

Really? That's so odd that they start school on a Friday, but hey I can't talk. We started on a Thursday.
Have you already done all the gruesome stuff like ACT and putting in for Colleges?
I'm narrowing my options down at the moment since I had a little (a big) GPA downfall my Sophomore year. Here I am wanting to go into the medical field and I barely made it through Biology and Chemistry.

I remember those youtube Michael stories. Some of them were so explicit. My baby brain couldn't take so much of the information, lol. I shouldn't of been reading them anyway. I was little bad child sometimes.

Ahh, I used to like Mindless Behavior... well I liked one song...

I'm going to tell you my little Michael fanfic life story real quick.

When I first started writing on here I barely got reviews. I could write four or five chapters and get zero reviews consecutively. But I told myself to keep writing and improve my own skills which I did. If you look up writing tips on google or even read the Tips for Writers here on MJF by Redone, it's a HUGE help. But when you start to feel like you're lacking you can talk to me and I can try and help you out the best way I can. Or if you want to chat about stories I'm all for it. It's whatever. And thank you so much, I'm glad you like my stories so much.It makes me feel good inside.

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