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Date: Sep 25, 2015 10:38 am Title: Chapter 18: Team MJ & Kai

Wow! So is James their real father? Interesting thought...

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Date: Sep 25, 2015 09:58 am Title: Chapter 17: Hard Times

Uhmmp..

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Date: Sep 25, 2015 09:13 am Title: Chapter 16: Woah

Sometime you have to constantly be on guard.One person should have been on guard. Did she go out the window in another room. Was she in the same room as everyone else? She was probably in Michael's room, so they couldn't see her all of the time. They don't know when she went out.

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Date: Sep 25, 2015 09:13 am Title: Chapter 16: Woah

Sometime you have to constantly be on guard.One person should have been on guard. Did she go out the window in another room. Was she in the same room as everyone else? She was probably in Michael's room, so they couldn't see her all of the time. They don't know when she went out.

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 15: You're worth The Trouble

Great! Everybody is in love! I hope that it all lasts!

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 14: Just To Make You Happy

They both finally admitted that they both loved each other.

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 13: Love is Love

True love is hard to find.

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 12: Love After War

They really love each other.

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 11: Oh BROTHER!

Now more drama begins..

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 06:18 am Title: Chapter 10: Lord Be A Fence

Starting to get closer and closer...

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 05:51 am Title: Chapter 9: Trust me

Oh no!

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 03:30 am Title: Chapter 8: Honor

People get caught up living life through their circumstances instead of inspire of them.

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Date: Sep 24, 2015 02:46 am Title: Chapter 7: Doesn't Really Matter At All

It is a shame the trouble, people get into living through their circumstances. Mike and Kai really need to get through this... I've read this before. Each time it has been difficult to read.

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Date: Sep 23, 2015 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 6: Windows of OF My Eyes

What a mess..

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Date: Sep 22, 2015 08:10 pm Title: Chapter 4: Sorry You're Not My Kind Of Girl

Wow! Mike knows she's different. She's not like the girls he hangs out with. And, Kai is really falling for him. I enjoy the way you write.

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