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Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2015 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 7

I could just knock Mira over the head for kissing this asshole back. She see's he's playing games and she's there thinking about how fit he looks. Not cool. Now he could have invited danger to her doorstep because she has no discretion. Smdh. Girl get yo shit together!!!!  

Having dude up in her crib making her tea. Ugh. Lmao. 

More soon! 

<333



Author's Response:

Amira has always liked the wrong type of guy.....this has been her issue for a long time.  Its very frustrating lol

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2015 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 7

Hell yeah!!! She better keep his dumb ass out of her life. Talkin bout can I stay here? Nigga no!!! And I'm pretty pissed off that she kissed him back. What ever happened to knee a guy in the balls if he gets too close? I just want her to stay with Michael. He's a real man and is good for her. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

i am annoyed too.....it's like she has a mind of her own or something lol.  Got to remember she has always found him attractive even if he is serious serious trouble!

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 06, 2015 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

I have an idea!!!! How about in the next chapter, Rashid just stops breathing.-_-



Author's Response:

LOL..... I suspect Michael would agree with you if he knew what was going on lol

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2015 04:19 am Title: Chapter 4

Amira please don't be a bag of hair. Good grief girl she's digging herself a hole she's going to need serious help to get out of. If she's used to guys like Rashid why is she falling so easily for his tactics? She knows damn well there are several strings and her soul attached to that damn phone. If she feels as she says she does for Michael she would stay far from that git and give him back his damn phone. 

More soon! <333

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 4

Amira is pissing me the fuck off. I have a friend just like her. Always making the wrong decisions and shit. It's like she's trying to give Rashid ways to get to her. Good Lord. Just get with the nice gentleman Michael and forget about Rashid's crazy ass. I totally agree with Nicole 100%.



Author's Response:

hahahahahahahah.  Its bad because she sould be telling Rashid to do one. But that's not her style.....sadly.

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2015 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

Excited About This One!

Author's Response:

thank you <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05, 2015 06:13 am Title: Chapter 2

Gawd I can already tell Tadhid is the overbearing control freak type. Though it's not always the case with Arabic men but I see it is with him. Chalk it up to his upbringing. God only knows looks aside what she was thinking accepting that date now he's going to feel like he owns her after spending that dough.

I like the vibe between Michael and Amira he's obviously the better choice and sonit begins. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

it is with him.....he wants to 'run' everything. LOL.  I am writing the next chapter as we speak ;) 

Reviewer: TutThreeSevens Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2015 04:33 am Title: Chapter 1

Awe man. Love love love London slang! The mix of patios makes me smile. I'm from Jamaica and I know the slang there is heavily influenced by patios. Anyway I love the story already. That tug of war is going to be insane I can already tell. Michael with a British accent... Pick...me...up...off...the...floor!!! Lol. Yum. 

More soon! <333



Author's Response:

thanks :)  writing this makes me feel like i am at home again hehehe

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