[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2015 01:05 am Title: Guilt and Desires...
And once again, I feel Felicia is getting the short end of the stick.....
Author's Response: lol I see that you are most decidedly Team Felicia! Lol Thanks for picking a side. Keep me updated on your opinion as things progress. I mentioned this in another review response, but this is the aftermath of a huge edit. Had I kept the original version, you'd have disliked Budge even more! Lol
Date: Apr 24, 2015 05:12 am Title: And Just Like That....
👌 I really don't know what I was expecting when you had to continue this but swapping?!! It was a bad idea from the start (not the writing of it but them doing it) because Budge is jealous as all hell now and Felicia is both dickmatized and lick matizado. Jermaine over her wanna colonize Budge's punanny and Michael gon miss Fe's all you can eat buffet. Man. But them sex scenes y'all wrote. GADDAMN!!!!! OH MY GOODNESS. they were amazing. Now that they're over swap fucking I'm intrigued as to how they gonna be around each other from March till June (on Bud and Budge's part) without wanting to just disappear for a quick minute and getting their freak on.
Author's Response: Hahahaha! We had fun with that topic, even though it eventually led to our author's arguments. And if you think the sex is hot now, you should have seen it before I edited it last year! I cut and rewrote scene that would have any porn actress proud! Lol Once we started competing with our sex scenes (and establishing what each of the guys' specialties were) they kept getting more and more elaborate. What you're reading is actually the more tame (my) version of the story. But Nicole's version? Whoooooooo!
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2015 04:39 am Title: You Sure You Know What You're Doing...
great second part to the story lol i think they all bit off more than they can chew lol looking forward to the next chapter keep up the great story writing
Author's Response: Lol I agree with you. Like a can of Pringles, "Once You Pop, you can't stop!"