Date: Oct 17, 2016 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Man With The Creepy Smile
Thanks for continuing with the story. But with this chapter you seem to be hinting, that creepy Jeremy is going to rape little Ariana. I think you shouldn't go for that dirt. Let her be exclusive for Michael. No e can heal from such a horrible experience at such a young age. She'd be ruined. Please consider that for your story
Unfortunately, there will be something along those lines, however they will not be full out and explicit and as far as actual 'rape'. The reason I will be adding some type of sexual abuse is because I wanted to write something with full emotion in. I have already written up to chapter 13 and there has been two incidents. They will not be too bad, even though any type of sexual abuse is bad of course. I will have some relationship with Michael occuring in the story - I will not stray from that but there will be a few chapters where Michael has a mild appearance, but that will be purely because I will be building story. I apologise if what I end up giving you isn't up to standard. I have considered what she would be feeling. I don't want a normal girl with no feels or no character and something to tell as I have done before - I just thought it would be interesting. But, I will be adding that in since it's important to the title, and the story.
Date: Oct 16, 2016 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Man With The Creepy Smile
poor girl i wouldn't want to live with such a man either that is foul..i just hope she's able to defend herself somehow and stick with her feels to stay the hell away from a pedo like him!. don't say sorry at all it happens to the best of us when it comes to try writin 1k chapter. don't be so hard on yourself!
Date: Aug 09, 2016 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 6: Gone Forever
Well damn poor soul I can relate to her divorce with her parents minus the mum cheating..I just hope this man doesn't try anything with her..that is what worries me. Also mj needs to be happy with himself poor soul. A nice chapter as always hun <3
Aw thank you ! <3 xoxo Much more to come soon :D