Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2015 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 2

Oh lawd, the spacing makes things so much easier! I'm glad you altered it as your writing deserves to be read by more people.

How did she get pushed up to the front?! That's a spot people are more likely to get pulled from then pushed into lol. I take it that this is a pretty AU story? How did he get from LA to NL so quick? Either way, she's lucky as hell!

Author's Response:

Keep reading. I'll be adding something at the end that should make more sense as to how she got to go to Neverland so quickly.