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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2015 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 10

SShe realized that she had feelings for him. And, Chris had lied to her about a family emergency , unless the woman was his wife. But, Autumn realized that he was not going to spend her birthday with her and he lied to her so easily. She started thinking maybe her whole relationship with Chris was a lie. Besides now she knew that they both felt the same way about each other.Neither she, nor Chris had deep feelings for  one another. She found that her and Michael had feelings for each other.



Author's Response:

Yep! I guess it's safe to say in a lot of ways Chris was sort of a 'distraction' for Autumn. The feelings she had for him weren't that serious, especially compared to Michael. Michael definitely has her heart now :)

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 16, 2015 02:09 am Title: Chapter 10

I thought she lived in New York? How did she get to Neverland in 2 hours? Thank u for updating! It's my birthday today im turning 20 I feel so old. Finally he says why he decided to come over and comfort her:) loved how he said you make me feel normal and likes that he can be himself around her without her treating him like he's 'Michael Jackson'. Finally the sexual tension is going somewhere!This is literally one of my favorite stories on here. Please update more I love it! Wait when u said god u look so beautiful he was so quoting the intro monologue to I just can't stop loving you. Love the reference. 



Author's Response:

Let me start off by sayin HAPPY 20th BIRTHDAY!!!!!! Lol I had a feeling you'd question about the travel distance! So Autumn does live in New York but there's NO way in hell it would take her only 2 hours to get to Neverland, I just made up the 2 hour thing lol And yep the sexual tension between them is THICK!!! They're finally gonna give in to each other ;) Btw when Michael was talking about how beautiful Autumn was I never knew it was the 'Just can't stop lovin you' reference lol It does sound a lot like the intro! I'll upload more for sure!!!! Glad you're enjoying the story and once again HOPE YOU HAVE AN AMAZING 20th BIRTHDAY!!!!! :D

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