That's hilarious that, THAT is the first thing he says to her, is ask where her clothes are. I love how you made him convinced that he was going to convert her to being a moonwalker. Does he expect to eventually fangirl over him like her sister does? Way funny. Is he really that chill with her having totally bashed him or is there more to it? You could also put in there that it's refreshing for him to see someone be themselves around him, and not so call 'fangirl', kiss his ass etc or you could put in that he's heard so much worse and she's entitled to get opinion but he hopes to prove her wrong. Are you going to explain why he decided to come over to check on her and why he gave her his number? Does he just want sex, does she intrigue him? Anyway love what you have so far it's really funny. Also if she does end up liking his music it should be because she relates to it on some level like the messages they portray. Say have you ever read King by InLoveWithMichaelJosephJackson? It has a similar premise to it, your story reminded me of it but that one is unfinished which is awful cuz it's soo good:) please update more often I LOVE this story