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Reviewer: midnight musings Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 17, 2010 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 12

it was worth the wait! very nicely written chapter. I love the way you add humor to your writing :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I was nervous about this chapter. lol

Reviewer: midnight musings Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 04, 2010 09:54 am Title: Chapter 11

aww... why did the chapter have to end?

yeah I think it's time they got a little closer :D



Author's Response:

Working on the next chapter...

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2010 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 11

I love it, its really nice.. finally she got to go to neverland.

Food fight lol jk

They should get closer but in a sweet romantic way.

Author's Response:

Sweet and romantic or some hot smutty sex? LOLOL

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 31, 2010 03:04 am Title: Chapter 10

Awesome hum, wonder wats next.. lol

Author's Response:

The next chapter will probably be a long one. It should be up by the end of the week!

Reviewer: sioux Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2010 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 10

Have just read all 10 chapters in one go and really enjoyed it.

Looking forward to the next chapters. :-)

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. The next chapter is coming soon. :)

Reviewer: midnight musings Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2010 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 10

When do we get to read the next one? :)



Author's Response:

As soon as I write it! haha

Reviewer: midnight musings Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2010 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 9

I loved it! Keep writing. This is one of my favourite stories and I love how it's progressing! :)

Reviewer: Call_it_bliss Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2010 03:48 am Title: Chapter 10

I love your story plz update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2010 02:34 am Title: Chapter 9

Ahhhhhh freaking awesome, I love it.. it was him that danced with her and kissed her lol that was awesome and sexy. thank God it was the publicist and he didn't lie to her.. whoa wow she kissed him good.. back inside humm wonder whats going to happen inside Lol

Cant wait great job!!!

LOVE IT..

Author's Response:

haha Thanks! Glad you liked it. ^_^

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2010 02:31 am Title: Chapter 9

wait so was michael the guy she kissd inside or not im so confused but great update cnt wait to c wat happens nxt



Author's Response:

Yes, Michael was the masked stranger. :)

Reviewer: michaella007 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2010 12:47 am Title: Chapter 9

OMG that was exciting i loved t i was wondering how long it would take before they made contactkeep goin with it,let them play this game of freinds with benifits and then lets see what happens,hope oyu will update soon,i cant wait well done.



Author's Response:

Thank you ;)

Reviewer: jazz Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2010 05:49 am Title: Chapter 8

Can't be stopping so soon!



Author's Response:

Soon? This was my second longest chapter! haha

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 21, 2010 02:30 am Title: Chapter 8

Love this chapter, but who was other chick he went with? Did he lie to mia?

Author's Response:

You'll find out next chapter. ;)

Reviewer: midnight musings Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2010 10:59 am Title: Chapter 7

another great chapter. I loved the bit where michael asked a zillion questions. i can imagine him doing exactly tht.

enjoy your vacation and I do hope you'll come bck with another lovely chapter :)



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Aug 05, 2010 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Aww so cute

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