[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2014 03:48 pm Title: The Deadbeat
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!! love this!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 28, 2014 05:11 am Title: The Deadbeat
It's interesting...Very nice story!
Keep goiing!
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2014 05:52 pm Title: The Deadbeat
Man! At first I thought, wow, Michael is such a deadbeat dad, what a palooka. Then, he went upstairs and cared for his son. But it seems to me like he does need help. I wonder where that'll lead to.
Continue soon.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2014 05:51 pm Title: The Kiss
"I wish I could help, but I'm just 12, what can I do?"
Uhh, kids are sometimes more brighter than most adults. So maybe you can fix it, Prince II.
I have a feeling she won't stick around long.
Date: Oct 27, 2014 05:49 pm Title: The Stare
I wonder what Sacymore looks like..Maybe like Barbra Streisland, or Judy Garland. Eh, I don't know.
Katherine Baywatch? Euck! She seems like a sex girl. And Michael is falling for her and ignoring the nice girl. :( I hope there's no more of here in this story.
But nice chapter.
[Report This]Date: Oct 27, 2014 05:47 pm Title: The Talk
Whoa, Blanket seems more pissed than he usually looks.. do continue.
Date: Oct 26, 2014 10:51 am Title: The Talk
OOOH DAMN Blanket is laying down the law!! I love this ides it has a lot of potential :)
Btw are you French by any chance? Haha
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting and reviewing. :)
And, LOL! Maybe. :)