Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:18 am Title: Chapter 27- Backtracking .....
This chapter was a little sad, reading that Michael and Semaj have been separated at the time and seeing Michael slowly go back to his old ways. Until Semaj calls Michael and gets him to stop. I like how Simone and Semaj patch things up about what's going on between them. This was a sad, but good chapter.
Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:13 am Title: Chapter 26- The Calhoun Laws
I love how Semaj is changing Michael. How he's not getting into as much trouble as he was before. The fight between Semaj and her parents have me on edge. I'm very eager to see what happens next!
Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:10 am Title: Chapter 25- Real Gun, Water Gun, Same Thing
Officer Willow worries me, but I've said this before in a previous review... you're very good at telling different point of views. It tells exactly what's going on at the point in time from both Michael and Semaj. Nice work.
Date: Jul 30, 2016 08:06 am Title: Chapter 24- Momma's Havin A Baby, Semaj Is Going Crazy...
A lot happened in this chapter that kept me on edge. Semaj's fight with her parents, the fight with Lonnie and Michael telling Semaj that he loved her while she was sleeping. This was absolutely great!
Date: Jul 30, 2016 07:52 am Title: Chapter 20- Troll Doll Look-A-Like
When Semaj got in the car with Aaron and Tucker I got a little worried as to where they were actually taking her. I was happy that Michael didn't get jail time and Michael's question for Semaj at the end! Great job!!!