Date: Feb 01, 2015 12:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One
uh oh...can sense it though..when Svetlana finds out Michael lied to her..*goes and hides*
Author's Response:
Michael better go and hide lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 01, 2015 10:05 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One
Wowza I just finished reading all the chapters and I love this! I don't find the pace slow at all, in fact it's just right. It has a plot other than "michael and og get together" which makes it suspenseful. And now that Svetlana is an adult I wonder how much longer Michael is going to be bale to control himself? The sexual tension is climbing off the charts.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
and not much longer... it's a matter of time. But now he's lost her trust by manipulating her.
Date: Jan 31, 2015 10:46 pm Title: Chapter One
Mr. Depp , haaaay boo. Anyway, so gonna read this!
Date: Jan 23, 2015 08:42 pm Title: Chapter One
Oooohhh, I have been craving for a good vampire Mj story, this one is getting me hooked already!! :D
omg Jhonny Depp O3O heeee!!!
Author's Response:
Yay! A new reader! ooooh yeah Johnny depp
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2015 08:00 am Title: Chapter One
Yes!!! I'm officially living for this story! I can't wait for an update. Thanks for another awesome chapter!
Author's Response:
Aww thanks so much!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2015 12:01 am Title: Chapter Twenty
Ohhh, Michael, how long till you admit your feelings? You know that no one can keep Svetlana safe like you. If you are the man...vampire...whatever in her life. he can look after her in better ways than just being her bodyguard.
Author's Response:
It won't be too much longer.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2015 08:32 pm Title: Chapter Twenty
"I might have recognized the image from something I've seen on the National Geographic channel" I swear I laughed a little too long at this. DEAD!!!!
Damn Michael splitting her in half was a little too vivid for my over active imagination. Literally me right now ---> O_o X_X and a few other emoji symbols. Lmao
Yesssssssss Alex is back into the folds. I'm sure he'll be well needed too.
I wonder who Grayson's maker is?!? I'm guess here so bare with me is it also Michael's maker? I'm thinking it is since she's so blazè about a 300 year old Vampire and laughing out right at him working with a witch.
You better have a cookie ready for me if I'm right. Lmfaoooo.
You where on a roll tonight. Each one Fire!! More soon! <333
Author's Response:
LOL!!! He had to cover up his thirst with a jab.
Good guess!!!! I won't say yay or nay though lol
Right I was on a roll!! I need to roll out a few more chapters, I'm the writer and I'm already ready for this story to get into the nitty gritty! lol
Date: Jan 11, 2015 01:40 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
Awwww the last portion of the chapter was so touching. I'm feeling choked up. Grayson is bad news and needs to go..now I see why Michael wasn't keen on having him around Svetlana.
you should try writing a fic on Maestro one of these times. you would do great. <3
any way I could contact you off the site? would love to talk.
Author's Response:
I need to watch Ghosts first... LOL I'm a terrible fan... there's still so many things I haven't seen. I mean I've watched it I think when I was younger, but I wasn't a big enough fan back then to really appreciate it? I don't know.
But sure! my email is michaelalb1988@gmail.com.
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2015 10:23 am Title: Chapter Nineteen
Awe man. I feel for Lana. Alex is going to fall apart too. So sad. Poor Michael struggling to organize his emotions.
That vision is scary and it's the opening scene for the story right? I wonder what pushes her to that dark place. I hope it has nothing to do with Michael and he can come and save her. I hope he herds Sam's words.
Grayson needs to be dealt with.
My hope Michael expresses his feelings to Lana soon. Other people are starting to take notice that it's not just a father daughter/bodyguard employer dynamic anymore. If others can see it it must be strong.
More soon!! <333
Author's Response:
Yes! You're right its the vision from the opening. Which doesn't happen until year 2014 in the story so its still a ways before that happens. If it happens because Michael may be able to save her? We'll see.
Grayson is about to evolve into a huge problem. His maker is an even bigger problem.
Wait til Alex the love expert starts to see it. LOL Michael's really going to have to do something then.
[Report This]Date: Jan 10, 2015 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen
I have the feeling that there is something wrong with Stefan, too. Maybe he is the cause of Lana's suicide attempt. A good vampire is better than a bad human. I think Michal needs to admit his feelings for Lana for real and do something about them.
Author's Response:
Well I won't spoil it for you lol! thanks again!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2015 07:45 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
Sorry, I was too caught up reading this to comment, but now I take a little breath and I just want to say this is a fantastic story and I do hope Svetlana and Michael really get closer soon (you know what I mean). Meanwhile, please don't keep us hanging and tell us that Svetlana is safe and Grayson is caught soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!! sorry yo keep you hanging! Grayson is still out there... and Michael is still convinced that Stefan is the better man for her.
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2015 01:58 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen
Nooooo Ivana!! Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2015 10:51 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
I see you!!! Eighteenth B-day in Chapter 18 clever!!!
Lawd Grayson is a BIG problem.
Ivana!!!!!!!!! Noooooooooooooo as annoying and clingy as she was to Michael I know he's hurt she's gone. I know Lana will be devastated. I can't believe Grayson is so loose and open with what he is. I hope the government catches him...Well scratch that I want Michael to deal with his case. Blasted boy needs to find out just who he's messing with.
Samantha to the rescue. I guess she's not so afraid of Michael anymore. I hope they'll become close allies.
I guess with Ivana gone it kind of opens the space for Michael and Lana to be together. Intrigued is what I am. It's all so nail bitingly awesome!!
More soon <333
Author's Response:
LOL yeah you caught me!
Grayson is hellraisin' that's for sure. He's a HUGE problem now not just for Michael, but for allllll vampires. He's going to cause the government to increase their efforts. Samantha might still be a little leery of Michael, but she knows how important he is to Svetlana.
Thank you!!!
Date: Jan 03, 2015 10:01 am Title: Chapter Eighteen
man, to say Grayson is crazy would be an understatement..
ooooo, is that an attraction between Mike and Svetlana I sense?
by the way I just came up with an idea for a Vampire Mike fic..not starting right now though but planning it in my head. :D
Author's Response:
Write it!! Lol I love a vampire Mike and I'm sad that mine is like the only one up going right now. I've seen a couple past ones on here but none look like they're finished or are ever going to be finished.
Date: Jan 03, 2015 12:48 am Title: Chapter One
omg not Ivana Grayson is getting more dangerous.
Mike's gotta stop him. I LOVE THIS STORY!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!