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Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 08, 2014 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 117

Wow. He had to have seen this coming, he kept pushing her away. What else was she supposed to do? She was physically and mentally hurting herself over him and their marriage, and he still refused to give them an honest chance; he couldn't have expected her to take that much longer. He started fighting too little too late. The ball is in his court now, if he wants to get her back, if she'll have him, he's got a lot of proving to do. 



Author's Response:

Michael definitely saw this coming and Remi had been practically craving for lovr that she went and done kissed another guy because of this.  I agree thay the ball is definitely in his court and if he realiss how important Remi is to him, then tty might even stand a chance.  He definitely has a lot of proving to do. ;p xxx

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 116B

I'm glad she's ok. Good thing they found her in time. As for Michael I can't believe that he even had the audacity to get mad when he did the very same thing but worse! At least Remi didn't go forming an outside relationship with Pierre over her husband like Michael did with Remi to Lisa. He is smoking on that bs for real. Instead of checking to make sure she was ok he wanted to get mad because she told him the truth. I give her props for having the courage to tell him what happened with her and Pierre because he didn't even mention almost hitting second base with Lisa. He better tell Remi about his fuckery when they talk in the morning. Poor Skye for having to be stuck in the middle of this madness smh.

 

P.S. The flashbacks were cute a86;a039; I can't wait to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thanks for liking the flashbacks, they paint a simpler time with them. 

And you're right about Michael flipping out on Remi when she only just kissed him. He kissed and brought Lisa to their bedroom, that's disrespect to the highest level. He shouldn't have got mad on her and frankly he has no right to be angry. Skye's the most innocent thing in this madness, its heartbreaking! 

;P XXX

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 116A

Oh my lord! Michael...for real though? He's even worse than Remi. Even though I was side-eying him I do give him credit for stopping when he did because it could've been worse. I feel so sorry for Remi because she's obviously going through and Michael is still being stupid. I really hope she's ok :/



Author's Response:

I knowwwwwwww right? He's defo just did something worse than Remi but yeah I'm glad you pointed that he stopped himself before things got heated.  Here's hoping that Remi's incident will wake Michael up and make him appreciate and love what he's got! ;p xxxx

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 09:36 am Title: Chapter 116B

Gotta comment again, lol. Honestly, Remi's at that point like in R. Kelly's song "When A Woman's Fed Up". The total disrespect and disregard her husband have given and shown her has been ultimate. I don't blame her at all. Michael only wants to hear what HE WANTS to hear! It's fuck her feelings, only mine count with him. And, another thing: That hoe put her bra under their bed for Remi to find on purpose, knowing that this will put the nail in the coffin for Remi and leaving Michael to her. Cues my Shirley Brown-"Caught You With Yo' Pants Down". Fuck Michael and Lisa!

Look these songs up ladies if you don't know them and you will see the truth in them.

Author's Response:

Naaaaaaaah that's my jaaaaam doe! R Kelly laid it all out in that song LOOOOOOL

Back to serious stuff, Michael definitely just wants to hear what he wants.  He nreds to lay off that and wake up!! I agree with you, we can't obviously blame Remi for the way she os with him. I'm glad you clocked Lisa with the bra thing, its gonna vause hella drama if the wife finds out.

And Michael's practically living Shirley's lyrics right now! XD

;P xxx

Reviewer: PoohbearlovesMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 01:31 am Title: Chapter 116B

I was about to go MAD if Michael took Skye away from Remi. He has no reason to take her anyway.

Remi needs to toughen up and leave Michael's ass if they don't fix this whole problem. Because I am dying for them to get back together! So we can all be happy. Dammit.

Michael is stupid as hell now! I don't even want to say his name. He needs to stop messing around with Lisa Marie, and help his poor wife. She's dying without him and he knows it. But he just don't give a fuck.

Remi on the other hand is acting like a child. She always cries and all that kid stuff and she needs to get out of that.

Michael and Remi both need to get out of that child shit and act like adults like they should for their baby.

Skye doesn't even need to be in the middle of their arguement. So Michael was about to do a dumb thing right there when Remi told him the truth. He shouldn't be mad because he hanging with another woman already. Smh.

So I don't know who's side am I on for this. Because Michael and Remi are both getting on my nerves.

Michael with his stupidness!

Remi with her weakness!

Michael needs to stop being so stupid and Remi needs to stop being so weak.



Author's Response:

LOOOOOOOÒL!! Don't we aaaaaaall wanna be happy!! 

We want them to be happy but they're both making this hard for themselves. Michael nreds to definitely remember his wife and focus on rebuilding his family love.  On On the other hand Remi is acting a lil weak and she needs to remember that it isn't the first time she's been in a low moment. She has to be strong for not only herself but for her daughter!

 

 Let's just hope their talk comes out good...

;P xxx

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 12:03 am Title: Chapter 116B

Man they both are stupid as hell and need to start acting like adults. Hopefully this talk will accomplish something



Author's Response:

You're damn right! And lets just hope this talk has a great outcome. ...

;P xxx

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2014 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 116B

The truth and sad thing is, he didn't even really care! He's blaming all of this on her, when the fact remains he was emotionally cheating for a while now behind her back and he has the audacity to get up on his damn high horse!? Remi, divorce him and let her have his ass. Do joint custody and move on with your life. When he sees that another man is making you happy, he should wallow in it!

Author's Response:

LOOOOOOOÒL you show Mike no mercy at aaaaaaaaaaaall!! Lmfaooooo. 

And yeah yeah Michael has the problem of blaming everything on her, when actually she's the victim too. This whole Jordie Chandler thing really fucked them up and now its looking bleak for them. I suppose that divorce is an option at this point, least Remi has a reason for it. 

;P xxx

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2014 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 116A

This is bullshit! Remi, leave and let her have him! How dare he bring that woman over and into his marital bed! Fuck him. He deserves whatever Lisa does to him. Just low and dirty!

Author's Response:

Looooool Christine!!!!! 

You ain't letting Michael off with this one Hahahahaha!! And by all means I get where you're coming from, if he's so into ms Presley then why don't he just be with her? Michael had no respect bringing her in the bedroom and only time will tell if or when Remi finds out. Aaaaaaargh Michael maaaaaaaan!!

 

;p xxx

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2014 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 116B

At least she's going to be fine, physically that is. But, there she goes being childish again. She didn't have to throw that kiss in his face like that, smh. He was wrong for not being more understanding and sympathetic, but the things she said in response... wow, just wow. Michael has no right to be angry about that kiss, even though her delivery was off, at least she told him the truth. He's going to have to tell his side as well. Can't believe that once again they're bringing the baby into the middle of their mess, arguing and whatnot while she's sleeping. Neither of them are acting as fit parents right now, poor kid. *sigh* 



Author's Response:

Hahahahaha at you calling her childish when its true to some degree! There was nooooo need to to throw the kiss at him the way she did, it wss elementary and could've been told in a better way. I agree that Michael should have been more sympathetic when he saw her, even if he did he could have at least shown her because she's taken the wrong message. He definitely has to tell her bout the Lisa thing.  ALL OF IT. Just depends on where they go from here at this point. ..*sighhhhhhs*

;P xxx

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2014 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 116A

Wow, well can't really blame Lisa for being so forward. Michael has let on that his marriage isn't getting better and that he's developing feelings for Lisa; she's not entirely wrong in acting on that. But I'm glad he stopped himself before things went too far between them. Him and Remi are basically on an even playing field now, they both did something they shouldn't have been doing as married people. Hopefully Remi will be okay. I wonder what happened; was it an accident or did she do it purposefully? Can't wait to find out, great chapter as always!



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right, they are on the same playing field.  Remi learned right away that it was a mistake, Michael on the other hand. ...*cringes teeth* 

And yeah the accident was pretty sad, especially cos Remi thinks everythings her fault when that isn't the case! I agree that Mike needs to jump off this Lisa thing and remember who his wife is and what they've built together as a unit. 

And thank you for liking the chapter!! ;p xxx

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2014 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 115

ooh..can we get another update? After the last two chapters, I can't get this out of my mind, lol.

Author's Response:

This story is dwelling on my mind on a daily basis hahahaha I know exactly how you feel! I couldnt get enough so the next two chapters are up and batchin' ready to be read lol.

;p xxx

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2014 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 115

Oh gosh. This is craaaazy! lol I don't even know what to say. Like Remi...what in the world? And Michael...lord. I don't even know. I just don't.



Author's Response:

Looooool and yeah its gettin' more complex now with everything going on. Lets just hope everything works out for them.

;p xxx

Reviewer: giveintothefire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2014 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 114

Oh gosh. Michael is slipping for real. He better not try to open one door before closing the other. I mean, Remi is still his wife. He needs to talk to her. And now that he and Lisa have given each other confessions, it's only made matter worse. And I wonder what this Mr. Pierre is up to. Looks like we're gonna be seeing more of him so I'll wait to see how this goes but I'm still side eyeing Michael lol.

P.S. DONE at you using Pharrell lol. And I'm glad that you're feeling better!



Author's Response:

Yeah I get what you mean girl, Michael's slippin hard and he needs to keep his door open with Remi before he shuts it and opens to Lisa. Remi still technically is his wife, whether she has the ring off or not. I'm pretty sure Lisa's gonna act up soon but I'll leave you to find out ;) 

And the Pharrell thing HAHA!

 

Looking like "You too can prevent forest fires." LOL and thanks for being happy for my health loool ;p xxx

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 11, 2014 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 115

Damn, how did I miss all this drama?? Smh

The state of their relationship right now is so tragic and heartbreaking. Imma need Remi to stay strong and not develop anything with Pierre because regardless of how shitty her relationship is with Michael right now, they are still married. Speaking of, why in the world was she walking around with him holding hands and stuff like they booed up or something? That right there is the typical dumb Remi shit that got them into this mess in the first place. It's like she doesn't think before she acts which is so frustrating.

On to Michael. I understand how hurt he is by what happened but that doesn't give him an excuse to completely ignore his wife like that. How are they expected to make it out of this slump if he's not even willing to sit down and talk things out? What kind of shit is that? This is a marriage, not something you just let rot away. And now this fool has developed feelings for Lisa's desperate ass? No ma'am. He's hella wrong for that. All that time he's been spending with Lisa and her kids could've been spent with Remi working through their problems like a real husband is supposed to. Now the chick is in love with him and he's probably not far from loving her back. He has really pissed me off. That's another thing, how the hell is Remi ok knowing her husband is spending quality time with another female who he clearly has feelings for? Where they do that at?? Damn how he feels, he deserves an ass whooping for that! She needs to put her foot down and not let Michael run all over her just because he's upset. That is no excuse to act like a complete ass and she needs to stick up for herself before things get worse. I'm tired of seeing her let him blatantly disrespect her like that. If he did/does something with Lisa, I wouldn't even be mad at Remi for doing stuff with Pierre. If it gets to that point, they just need to call it a day because this whole relationship is just a complete mess.

Both of these fools got me mad lmao.



Author's Response:

Girl its crazy right now in Madness. I agree exactly what you said in the begining about Remi staying strong and not developing anything with this Pierre dude. She's still married and inlove with Michael, he's just struggling to understand that not everyone has bad intentions on him, including his wife. 

But anyway, he'll soon figure out whether the easy way or hard way. 

And yeah Remi was acting childish as hell with Pierre infront of Michael. What has Michael got to worry about with a guy like Pierre?

Well come to think of it...his wife lol. :/

And yesssss about your comment on Michael, how exactly are they supposed to prevail from this situation without any progression or attempt by him? He's treating Remi like a ghost in the house and only mentions or calls her concerning the baby, that aint right. Its definetly immature on his part and Remi needs to address that and stop letting him walk all over her. As we can see Lisa's slithering herself in the way and thats causing even more problems, lets just hope Michael realises what he already has. 

LOOOOOOOL at them gettin' you mad! they get me mad too when I write in their story direction lol.

;p xxx

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2014 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 115

Ooh....now, Remi is wrong, but I understand why she kissed the man. She's begging her own husband for love and he's denying her and she knows he has feelings for another woman. I know as a woman, that would give a blow to my self-esteem and worth. He's treating her like she's invisible. Wouldn't even acknowledge her new hair. He can be mad all he wants about a kiss during a vulnerable moment, but to treat your wife like she's the other woman...Remi's good, cause I would have fucked ol' boy right there in the garden! You're in love with another woman and expect me to just deal while you treat me like shit!? Fuck that and him!

Author's Response:

LOOOL I love how in your last review you were all Mikes wrong, now Remi haha but yeah I absolutely agree with you again. She's been longing for a mans touch, lets not forget that she has needs too just as well as Michael so I think both of them are in danger zone because they're craving for it. Michael's treating her like she's invisible and pretty soon he's gonna find out his consequences in a hard way. 

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL at you sayin' you woulda fucked him I am DONE! 

;p xxx

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