[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2014 01:16 pm Title: Part Four.
oooooh my WORRRDDDD THAT WAS SO HOT AND PASSIONATE!!! *__* I just love the way you describe Michael's features man, you explain him so justly! XD Bravo love and thanks for updating so quick! But imma need the next chapter now lmao you got me feening here. ;)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it :)
I like to examine Michael and allll of his features because I can never get enough of describing him. I just always want to get my descriptions down to a T. Especially with him :)
Thanks for commenting, girl! ;)
I'll try and post the last chapter tonight along with an update with my other stories :*
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:54 pm Title: Part Three.
Awe I'm glad Michael didnt take advantage of her, even though it's clear that was in fact his intention before she told him she's a virgin aha
YES YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE ONE SHOTS! :D This site needs more of them imo XD
I'm lovin this so far, I can't wait for when you update lovey <3
Author's Response:
Fuck yes, this site needs more one-shots!!! I will write more one shots! I am determined lol
I am so happy you liked it~
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:41 pm Title: Part Two.
Oh he is SO into her and she's defo feeling him, no matter how much she's tryna prevent it :3 This is too cute, and the main girl is drop dead gorgeous! :D
I can't wait to read chapter 3 XD
[Report This]Date: May 17, 2014 10:28 pm Title: Part Three.
That dang alcohol! It gets you in trouble everytime lmao
But Mike was such a gentleman... awww! So sweet. Hopefully things won't be wierd when she wakes up the next day.
And yes, you should definitely do more one shots!
[Report This]Date: May 16, 2014 04:18 pm Title: Part Two.
Ohh yeah. He definitely likes her. Goodluck to her trying to contain herself because I sure wouldn't be able to! lmao
Date: May 16, 2014 07:09 am Title: Part Three.
Aww Michael is sweet for not taking advantage of her while she's
drunk, lol I can't help but laugh because he was giving her those
full glasses of wine, like hellooo she's going to get a little tipsy Michael
I knew his nasty behind invited her up to his room for a reason, haha
saying he wanted to seduce her....mmhmm. Can't wait to see how
the next post goes.
Date: May 16, 2014 07:05 am Title: Part Two.
Omg this is sooo good, I love it,
Your writing style us really good also.
Anyway I've been looking for a story like this to come across
on this site, I haven't read one like this in a while on here.
I love the little crush Michael had on Arely already, it's cute.
- - p.s.that name Arely is cute, I've neve head it before.
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2014 03:51 pm Title: Part Two.
ahhh update soon!!! im hooked already!! and i love the song she gave her angels one of my favs by prince.
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2014 06:18 pm Title: Part One
I'm definitely checking back on this! And I think Arely is a beauty. Her character seems kinda sweet so I wouldn't mind seeing her pop up again.
Update soon!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2014 04:37 pm Title: Part One
Cute so far...keep going!
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2014 03:21 pm Title: Part One
Oh my gooood I loved it!
Normally I don't get so excited after reading just the first chapter, but for some reason I want to read the whole story right now! :)
Pleaaaaase update quickly! x
Date: May 07, 2014 02:07 pm Title: Part One
This was a great chapter can't wait until the next one! :)