Date: Nov 20, 2021 01:49 pm Title: Part One
This is definitely a favorite of mine, it makes me smile like an idiot lol. Michael and Arely are so cute together!!
You are a beautiful writer, thank you.
Date: May 09, 2016 01:09 pm Title: Part One
OMG you should definitely make more one shots between them this was very great!😊
Date: Aug 11, 2015 10:55 pm Title: Part Five.
I really enjoyed reading and re-reading this story. Please write more stories! Kay
Date: Aug 11, 2015 10:48 pm Title: Part Four.
I like how gentle you have him treating her. This is a very good story. I enjoyed reading and re-reading it.
Date: Aug 11, 2015 10:28 pm Title: Part Three.
I think that you are a good writer. The more you write the better your skills will be.
Date: Aug 11, 2015 10:07 pm Title: Part Two.
I like reading your story.
Date: Aug 11, 2015 06:28 pm Title: Part One
I enjoy reading your stories.
[Report This]Date: Oct 17, 2014 08:17 pm Title: Part Five.
lovely short story i truly love it it was hot and beautiful keep these stories coming
Date: Aug 25, 2014 03:16 am Title: Part Five.
Brilliant! I love this - great work :)
Looking forward to what you do next xx
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2014 05:56 pm Title: Part Five.
This was just.......so lovely, and beautiful, and sweet and PERFECT!! Michael was a complete gentleman, and so damn sexy and sensual. Shoot, you had me fannin' myself and everything over here, girl......
Date: Aug 17, 2014 05:11 pm Title: Part Four.
Holy shit... That was so hot! I so wish I can lose my virginity like that! I love your story. :)
Date: Jul 11, 2014 12:25 am Title: Part Four.
please go on...... not just for the next chapter but more..... i wish to see a relatioship between arely and michael....... pretty please with sugar,caramel chocalate fugge and waffles with honey and cream on top........ okay that sounded childish....... but seriously, please go on
Author's Response:
I will make a series of one-shots featuring Arely and Michael :D
That actually sounded really yummy just to be honest with you xo :DDD
But I will make a series for them so don't worry! Thank you so much for reading!
Date: Jun 07, 2014 04:18 pm Title: Part One
Great stuff, I really enjoy your style. Looking forward to more!
Date: Jun 07, 2014 02:23 pm Title: Part Four.
That was HOT, girl!!!!!!! Can wait for the wake up...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading!!~ Thank you! Sex scenes are my fave so lol!
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2014 01:18 pm Title: Part Four.
Oh I forgot to answer the question in the end notes regarding Arely; sure that sounds like an ace idea! You should certainly do more stories with her but also not limit yourself so, if you want, do other girls with different personalities or whatever you know? XD
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Author's Response:
Lol no prob.
I'm happy you like the idea and you are right!! I should have more girls with more personalities, of course. :)
That's what I like the most about writing. The creation of characters and development. Amazing lol!
Thank you so much for commenting again :p
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