[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2014 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 94
Very nice chapter. I loved it.
[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2014 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 94
Very nice chapter. I loved it.
Date: Nov 24, 2014 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Just finished reading whole story. You are great writer, I really enjoyed it.
I think it was a great idea from you - the leap in time, I didn´t expect it but I liked it and hope you will continue with the story yet.
I had the luck to see Michael´s History concert in Prague, in 1996 and it was amazing.
Author's Response:
Thanks. I appreciate your kind words. I'm so jealous of you..oh to see those gold pants live :)
Date: Nov 21, 2014 09:59 am Title: Chapter 94
Loved the chapter
Date: Nov 21, 2014 05:33 am Title: Chapter 94
Reading this made me feel like I had a front row seat. Perfect!
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 94
Pretty cool chapter. Awesome concept for a MJ show but, then again any concert by Michael is amazing. I wished I could had seen him live just once.
Oy Christina you had to f*ck it up. You know how Michael is a perfectionist. I still enjoy the You Tube video when he gets mad at his music director. The director missed the cue to go from IJCSLU (I Just Can't Stop Loving You) to SOOML {She's Out Of My Life}. Michael says Brad what are gonna do?? Is so funny. Or the other one where the stage is wet and he can't dance; so he starts sliding over the puddles to show the stage crew where they need to dry up the floor. Ahh Michael you are so sexy when your mad.
Really Sweet to pull his wife for the dance. I would have loved if he ever would had perform Lady in my life live. I love that song :).
Will be on the look out for an update. Love always Lummi <3 :)
[Report This]Date: Nov 20, 2014 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 94
Well done.
Date: Nov 20, 2014 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 94
What an awesome experience for James., and so sweet to have ash up there....I knew Christine would mess it up!!! Wonder if anyone will notice he looks like dad....can't wait to read more!!! Great job
Date: Nov 18, 2014 04:37 am Title: Chapter 93
Good thing she didn't run away...lol or she'd miss the concert. Can wait til the concert
Date: Nov 16, 2014 11:38 am Title: Chapter 93
I can't wait! If only it had truly ended like this... He deserved so much more than he got. He deserved better.
Date: Nov 16, 2014 10:31 am Title: Chapter 93
Love the way they're a reql loving family
Loved the chapter and story
Can't wait to see what happens next
Date: Nov 10, 2014 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 92
Keep writing.... I love it
[Report This]Date: Nov 10, 2014 08:05 am Title: Chapter 92
Ummm this time warp is OK. To me you are one of my favorite writers on this site. They way your bring your stories live I feel all the emotions that the characters go through. I personally would have loved, that this story would have continue in order. Cowboy & Sassy going on a honeymoon, the birth of baby James, the news on Abby's dad and finally the reveal of Ash being Abby's birth mama.
I can only imagine what would be like to be Michael Jackson's child but, Mr.James needs to knock it off with the Attitude. James is so blessed with a father like Michael :)...... I LOVE YOU MICHAEL!!! <3
Keep up the wonderful work and I apologize if I don't review right away; sometimes my phone is just nutty. lol :). I'm always here for you. Much Love Lummi <3. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks Lummi, I appreciate your vote of confidence. As for the story and going with the birth of James, Keith's death and Abby finding out that Ash is her mom I just didn't have it in me to continue to keep it going for another 20 or so chapters. People weren't reading and revising so I figured it wasn't worth my effort. It takes up so much of my time to write as often as I do which is most than most authors on here, that I just couldn't do it anymore and love it...it's very disheartening to put that much effort and for what...so I jumpped to a closer ending. Though I'm kinda liking the new James story
thanks again for your loyalty
Date: Nov 09, 2014 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 92
That's exactly what I thought! This has come up to a whole new thing and now it has heaps of potential to continue!
Author's Response:
It might be interesting considering no one really writes about this phase in MJs life
Date: Nov 09, 2014 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 92
Wow,you've used B Howard's pic for James....other than that,I'm waiting to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Yea, I was going to use an impersonator but they were all too old. Even he was too old but I needed someone.