[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 10:14 am Title: Chapter 5:It's On Again.... Part 1
Man Part Of Me Wishes That Michael Would Just Calm His Ass Down && Do The Damn Tour, But Then I Remember How Tommy So Disrespectful.
But Michael Aint Even Have To Call Him.
Its So Fucked Up How They Suing Him.
Man Michael Must Have Been Lisa's First Love Or Something Cuz This Dumb Thot Keep Coming Back. But Janice Gotta Act A Little More Confident In Her Rings. Michael Wifed Her For A Reason.
Author's Response:
Michael had right to be mad at Tommy.... I hope you looked at that speech because that really was a GREAT one, you will read in the new Chpater why he could not do the touring he wasn't being fical or a DIVO about it he had a REAL good reason
and your right Tommy did disresect him and Michael wanted his ass because of it.... No Michael didn't have to call him but he was in a mood so he felt like Charging at the bear
Yes it is and That is True a Fact Sony sued him for that much Money and turned around and denied it i need to add that fact into the that chapter
No Michael was NOT Lisa's First Love DANNY KEOUGH was and she still keeps his ass around to this day, see the issue with Michael is he put that "GOOD GOOD... Ooo NA NA" on her, so Much she had to get a new gaul bladder after dealing with him, you know how the saying goes "once you go BLACK you can't bo BACK" and I guess once you go MICHAEL JACKSON there just isn't anything after that
Janice is confident in her rings, she was just idolly jabbing.... you see a person that ISN"T confident runs away from a situation, she faces her head ON with it, janice id confident.... for Now anyway, stay tuned"
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 06:18 am Title: Chapter 5:It's On Again.... Part 1
You Gave Me Nightmares With That Lisa Marie Shit. Lol I'm Scared If Her As A Blonde.
The Fuck She Call For Though, When A Man Leaves You And Marries Someone Else You Don't Supposed To Still Want Him.
Author's Response:
LOL, I know... she does look a bit crazy
I love your reaction to the Phone call but you know what that means you have to keep reading to find out... this is deeper then you can wrap your head around right now keep follwing all the pieaces willl fall into Place
[Report This]Date: Apr 20, 2014 01:17 pm Title: Chapter 4: A Night at The Apollo
Damn Being Blonde Made Lisa Look Old At First I Didn't Even Know Who She Was.
Lmao I Kinda Thought She Was Madonna .
But Uhmm Janice Ain't Have To Speak Her First Thought Lol.
Author's Response:
Yeah But they were doing what THEY do... Idol jabs because that was all they could do in the situation at hand.
YOU THOUGH THAT TOO... HAHAHA i thought she looked like madon when i first saw the picks of her blond to and you know what her hair NATURALLY is that color blond look at the picks of her as a kid.... and wanna know something funny, michael screwed madona too LOL
No she didn't, but I hope you like the reast of what was going on in the chapter too.... new chapter is up it's getting deep
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2014 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 3:Welcome home... Taste so Sweet, American band stand
this is amazing start to this sequel. To see where everybody is in there life now. What kind of trouble is Quint is in and Lisa is back. And people are trying to cause problems for Michael and Janice. I like the fact that Janice don't play when it comes to her family the claws will come out if anybody even thinks to mess with her husband.
Author's Response:
Thank you
Missed you didn't see you much last time around, yeah i knew when i chose to do a sequell it was going to be this time frame because it was about them chasing 2003 and preventing it from happening
I'm still ddeveloping Quints problem and don't thing that Quint is the only one that is going to be scathed in this issue keep reading
Of COURSE people will try to cause proble isn't that what hollywood IS
they want to rumor when your datting then it comes out your ARE datting then they want ro rumor your engaged if your wearing a ring then they want to Know EVERYTHING about your wedding, then they want to know after your married are your cheeting he was seen with her she was seen with him they are divorcing then they Puff a whole bunch of smoke and then the people actually get a divorce.... that what the game is and now that there reationship is out they ALL are targets
Janice NEVER played when it came to Michael when they WEREN"T married and now she a force to be reconded with but that only works if she can keep her head and you'll be seeing what plays out in the coming Chapters
[Report This]Date: Apr 19, 2014 11:24 am Title: Chapter 3:Welcome home... Taste so Sweet, American band stand
Awee That's So Sweet, Janice Brought His To See Him Perform.
Man I Hope Lisa Ain't There.
All She Do Is Start Trouble.
Author's Response:
If you thought that was sweet it's going to be even sweeter in the next chapter
Well she wasn't there... but that don't mean were done with her... Sadly we haven't even STARTED
stay tuned
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2014 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 2:Wedding bells, Saturday Night Fever...Back to Business
Man I Love How Fucking Thirsty Diana Is, She Was Like That In Reality Too Though Rite???????
I Must Have Been Confused About Who Liza Was?????
That Wedding Sound Rachet Lmao, The Kiss Sound Nasty I Hope They Parents Didn't Attend The Wedding Lol.
But Naw Though Yo Readers might Be Waiting Til They Think Its Safe. i Do It All The Time To That Girl Annie . i Mean Like Her Stories Be Good But I Cant Read A Story About A Dumb Broad And Thats What I Personally Be Feeling Like. Lo:-) l
Author's Response:
Yes she is... but every story makes her that way... but under stand when i do things all things happen for a reason... and yes she was like that
Liza with the Z is Liza Minelli the older woman that they attened the wedding for... shes the great judy garlends daughter, from the wizard of Oz
I know it didn't didn't it there vow resile was on youtube but it has a cross clip with george bush they used for some news prgram so I cose not to use it it was making fun of gays
Yeah, i notice some reader wait till 20 chapter in to say something... but the new Chapter is up hoping to get the next one up tomarrow cross fingers
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2014 07:01 pm Title: Prologue: Girls Night Out... I Can Feel You
I reviewed earlier but i don't know where it went. Anywho, I can't wait to see what they get into next! Adorable children btw.
Author's Response:
I don't Know I think the site acting stupid some times.... Glad to see your back and catching up hope you see the new Chapter
Date: Apr 18, 2014 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 1:Morning Routine... Idol Threats
I Didn't Miss Chapter 3 But My Computer Gone And The Only Thing I Have Left Is The Tablet And It Was Acting Stupid Not Letting Me Review On That Chapter. But I Might Try Again Later.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know
more coming later wonder whwere everyones at... but you were my main reader anyway they will proably pick up on it later unless they want to be silent for now
[Report This]Date: Apr 18, 2014 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1:Morning Routine... Idol Threats
The Kids Is So Cute.
Damn I Hope Quiet Ain't In Too Much Trouble.
Man Michael Sound Like He Just Don't Get It. I Can Totally See Him And Janice Having That Conversation More Than Once. He Remind Me Of My Baby Cousin Always Talking About How She Just Wanna Play With The Kids. Lol 😃
Author's Response:
Yeah The kids are ADORABLE when I saw that baby I just wanted to eat her UP she was to cute
I'm still developing that story line for quint so we will see what happens with that, because your going to find out ALOT of back stories from ALL characters as this story plays out, it's like scandal in that way don't ever assume you know everything about everyone and now that they are ins the spot light ofcourse the skeltons in the clost are going to be coming out... Note to self use that stevie wonder song as a chapter leader LOL
anyway
Yeah with Michael Michael did it in real life so of course he's going to have to get hit in the head with it multiple times like a puppy that won't listen because he feels like he's not doing anything WRONG so be aware more to come with that
question
did you read the thired Chapter because this was only about the second chapter so did you miss there was a 3rd, the forth should be up later today or tonight I'm going to getting in on that one when I wake up from my nap later and ther is definat darkness coming i'm going to kep on waring you enjoy the calm before the stome because its coming for EVERYBODY no one is SAFE talk to you later
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2014 05:04 pm Title: Prologue: Girls Night Out... I Can Feel You
I'm Hella Happy For Jon'Nee But She Aint Gotta Act Like That.
And I Thought That Pregnancy Mellows All Women??????
Tommy Tryna Stir Up More Trouble, I Woulda Thought That He Wouldn't Tried Nothing Else. Oh Well. Lol
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&& I Did See That You Resonped To My Review But I was In Church All Weekend So I Couldn't Do Anything. Sorry :-)
But AnyWay I Thought That Was A Great Start.
Author's Response:
Yeah I Know she don't But shes Being a Bridzilla she'll get back to herself once the wedding happens but Jon"Nee was always the slightly loud getto one shes just gone a litle bit extreme
actually pregancy can can make some woman turn into the rath of hell some times all depends on what they feel emotionally
Tommy, Tommmy is tommy and Tommy's going to do what he always did Stir up shit until Michael gets him fired that is but it's going to get deeper and darker enjoy the light moments while they last because it will get deep and heavy and it's not call A HOUSE DVIDED for fun shits about to get REAL
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Good to know you daw the review let me kno what you think when you do get around to reading over there you can search the story titles and they pop up through google as well
Thanks for thinking it's a great start can't wait till you read the up date More is to come most definately
my mind is RACING right now I was thinking about working on another story I didn't finsh but this wone has me HOOKED in and won't let me go rill it's out of me