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Date: May 06, 2014 11:56 am Title: Chapter 18: Haunted - Part 1

Damn It Seem Like They Got Michael,He Not Gone Wanna Send That Family Away.

I Hate That Antonio Has The Power To Shake Her Up. He Bout Lame As Fuck,Like Niqqa You Still Mad About A Break Up That Happened A Long Tome Ago.

Man Him And Shana(Whom I Still Think Was The One In The Chair ) Disgust Me.

And Good Luck At Your Interview



Author's Response:

Don't it though... only a preyer and so atteiveness to detail can save him but WAY more shocking stuff is coming down the pipe line

yeah, but you gotta relaize she has some deep seedied issues with him and the way he trieded her mentally and Phyically she never really got over.... and you also have to rember men like him ARE controling bastards they must always have control at ALL Times and his contol was taken away from him, which makes him like those obsessive if i can't have you no one can... and he's channing that obsession into making her life a nightmare

Shana gets hers next chapter, antonio you will see with him... i'm not telling who's in the chair just know i didn't idenify race

 

Thank you... i went today i feel a whole lot better about it then i did before i don't wanna jinx it but i think i may have got it

 

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Date: May 05, 2014 02:51 pm Title: Chapter 17: Love and War... Space

Here I Am Thinking Shana Was Gone Be Cool And Laid Back. And She Running Around Acting Like A Straight Thot. Damn She Wants Some Attention, And Then Michael Dumb Self Gone Give To Her. Smmfh.

I Think Tommy Was Talking To Shana. 

And I Think Antonio Is The Ex She Was With In College.

I Still Don't Like Derek But I Don't Like How Michael Been Acting Lately Either.  

 



Author's Response:

Well Shana is sneeky, but don't worry, Michael gonna have words with her.... she ain't No Lisa, that for sure she may get in trouble for little sneaky shit but she isn't No lisa

Michael was in his business mind space and that side of him has NO time for BULLSHIT from her or his wife, just so happen janice was the first to talk so she got slammed with the Business end of the hammer

I'm keeping my lips zipped on who it actually was I could say NO i could say maybe not tell who was in the chair until the time is right

you would be Correct on that aspect you see in the forth coming chapter

Just keep watching with Derek and Michael is all i can say not going to give anything away

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Date: May 05, 2014 10:41 am Title: Chapter 17: Love and War... Space

 I don't know who it is coming after him after him now.They seem like they're coming from the 4 corners of the world. I'm glad they're tryna reconnect tho.



Author's Response:

Welp the question was answered in the next chapter... and I more then believe that how it really was for Michael.... he wasn't parinoid for show, people were REAKY after him

Yeah Michael and janice are reconecting, but don't get comfortable in that because I'm bound to pull the rug out from under you

It's A HOUSE DIVIED for a reason more to come 

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Date: May 05, 2014 12:16 am Title: Chapter 15: Let the Games Begin

I'm So Proud Of Janice She Handled Working With Shana Better Than I Thought Lol.

But I'm Also Glad That Shana Don't Want Michael.

&& That Man Directing Gay Porn. On The Low That's Just Nasty. 

That Picture Of Lisa Was Cute Though. Random Thought.



Author's Response:

yeah she WAS... that is until.. read the newest chapter

No she don't Want Michael... but that don't mean she won't be lurkin around on Janice though

YEAH i know that is discussting what is more discussing it that DEBBIE ROWE been with his ass for like 10 years, tell me that not disturbing, a guy does that to your childrens father and YOU STAY WITH THEM what kind of person are you

because shaffle showing michael that porn lead to more inquires when the trial came around trapping him in a bad siuation

the tabloid covers there will more of those as the story progresses

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Date: May 04, 2014 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 15: Let the Games Begin

Omqqeee I Missed This Story :) . I Know I've Missed Like Two Chapters But I Got An Excuse For That Lol. 

But Tonite Some Time After 2 In The Morning Imma, Read This And Review. 

Cuz, I Still Love This Story. : )



Author's Response:

good to here you were back i was about to send out a red alert for you because it was unlike you to to go missing for too long glad to see your catching up and there is a new chapter up for you

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Date: May 03, 2014 05:41 am Title: Chapter 16: The Way Love Works Out Sometimes... Slow Kisses

   Whatever this thing going on with Lisa Marie is gonna cause problems b/c Michael is acting hella guilty. I know he loves his wife but something ain't right.



Author's Response:

yes it most definately is, things about to get hot for our gang,,, lisa is a problem... or is she, nope your right soething ain't right  

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Date: May 01, 2014 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 15: Let the Games Begin

Damn, Janice is a bad bitch! She is a force to be reckoned with. This is getting good and dramarish! lol  



Author's Response:

DON'T YOU KNOW IT, Janice don't play when it comes to her man... and there is Most DEFINATLY more Drama to come in the coming chapters shit about to be turned on it's head get ready

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Date: Apr 30, 2014 09:57 am Title: Chapter 12: It's On Again - Pt 2 - London Bridge to Parliament

Damn Uri Bout Creepy As Fuck. I Really Don't Like Him. But Michael Seem To Digging Himself A Whole With This Lisa Marie Shit. Man He Act Like He Obsessed With Her.



Author's Response:

oh yes Uri is an ass that is why i couldn't resist what i had janice do to him in the beginning of chapter 13 i believe... who does like uri, No Michael isn't obsessed with her she contacted him remember but stuff is going to get uncomfortable wait watch and see 

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Date: Apr 28, 2014 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 9: Jon'Nee's Wedding day - Pt - 1

Ya Know I Got An Auntie Like Beverly Except My Family Always Hides From Her, Like We Don't Never Invite Her NoWhere. (Random Thought)

But Anyways, That Necklace Was Soo Pretty. Jon'Nee Wedding Look Sexy As Hell Lmao.:-)  



Author's Response:

I KNOW I had a Aunt just like her named BEVERLY... well actually she was a combination of My aunt Beverly and Aunt jackie.... didn't no one want to invite her NO WHERE, EITHER

Thank you I choose it just for her after I red that Raven symon favore colers were Burgundy and Purple and i made Jon'Nee buck while and freaky because well Raven symone is gay so yeah had to give a little bit to her being that way.

YES jon'Nees wedding look was perfect, but I actually studied fashion design for like 7 years so i can put together a Look I wish i could find a internship for Fashion and styling somehwere

But i do have a blog but haven't touched it inlike a year and a half i might go back to it though one day

P.S

Yes Jon'Nee is a hand full.... and Bobby will have his hands full but you gotta relize when people are in arelatonship like that he's probaby the one person that can tone her down.... he balances her out she does the same to him 

 

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Date: Apr 28, 2014 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 8:Jon'Nee's Wedding weekend - Pt - 2 - Day 3

I Can't Believe That Michael Would  Take Them Married Men To That Kind Club Lol. Yeah It Kinda Seem Like Michael Gone Get In Trouble.

Jon'Nee Spoiled As Fuck. Man Bobby Gone Have His Hands Full With Her.



Author's Response:

Yeah well he is married too... so hey these chapters are about the shit people can get into on a wedding weekend so i went ALL out

But real talk michael did go to a clube Like that with Eddie murphy..... Michael was NO innocent man

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Date: Apr 28, 2014 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 7: Jon'Nee's Wedding Weekend - Pt (1) - Day 2

Thanks For The Birthday Love.



Author's Response:

Yeah see if more people commented they wuld get love too... but hact cry over spilled milk

 

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Date: Apr 27, 2014 09:57 pm Title: Chapter 11: London's Calling

   I'm glad Janice read Uri cuz he was really getting on my nerves for even mentioning that man. Michael better be careful of inviting his ex in the fold b/c he know Janice don't play that!



Author's Response:

Yup Janice be that woman that Protects HERS she has to come off that way and lets face it Uri was TOO happy to call Bashier she had to cut that shit off at the ppast But the fact was yes Uri was the one that suggested to Michael to have the inteerview with Basher IN REAL LIFE if he had had a woman LIKE Janice in his life that would have been on bashers ass like white on Rice that interview would have Never happen.

Lets be real

Michael is careful but MEN don't think like woman do and sense janice was Burned with Lisa she got her eyes REALLY open Now she is LOOKING for someone to start some shit just know that will be handled in the nezt Chapter

More to come 

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Date: Apr 27, 2014 03:53 am Title: Chapter 7: Jon'Nee's Wedding Weekend - Pt (1) - Day 2

Awweee You Missed Me. But Don't Trip I Ain't Had No Internet, And Since Today Is My 18th BDay I Got You Later After The Party And Stuff :)



Author's Response:

AHH No internet I remeber that dreadful feeling not cool.... AWWW HAPPY BIRtHDAY DEAR 

mj

Michael and Baloons gif http://i1176.photobucket.com/albums/x321/laKidna/Michael%20Jackson/balloon-fanpop.gif

 

so for your birthday Michael singing happy birthday and Gifs

Have fim My gift to you is 4 new Chapters ENJOY LOL

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Date: Apr 22, 2014 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 6: De Paris... De Crazy Horse, Need I say more

I Love How Michael Explained About Calling Tommy But He Ain't Say Shit About Lisa Dusty Ass Calling.



Author's Response:

No he didn't and you know it dawnwed on me after I wrote that it wasn't out of spite or being Evil but it does look Wrong don't it... it only is going to make what happens in the coming parts of the story more intense

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Date: Apr 22, 2014 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 6: De Paris... De Crazy Horse, Need I say more

Damn Michael Ass Be Murdering Janice Va jay jay lol. 

Jon'Nee Ass Is A Freak Shit Her And Michael,  I Was Looking At My Phone Like God Damn With The Weed.

Bhudd Them Cupcakes Look On Point.

Bhudd Uhmm Naw Though What Do Lisa Gaul Bladder Got To Do With Her Getting The Dick From Michael????



Author's Response:

Yes Michael Knows how to put it On Janice... but that is how they are together... hot and heavy, do we not remember the first story, except now they have NO filters they can do what they want how they want 

Yeah Jon'Nee is a Freak but think about how her character has acted about sex scense we first met her expcially after she slimed down... Little note about her Character shes paterned after a girl friend I have know sense Highschool 

I Know right why is there a red velvet cake down stairs i been eatting on sense Easter inspired MUCH

Oh The gauk bladder comment... my Mj Fan Friend use to always say after looking at Lisa talk about her guall bladder being all messed up that 'Michael fucked her so good Her gaul bladder got messed up' hey she mentions it every time she talks about there break up maybe he did LOL but yeah that where THAT came from

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