Date: Jul 17, 2014 10:06 am Title: Chapter 127
wow.......
Date: Jul 17, 2014 09:54 am Title: Chapter 126 tragic ending
I knew it, I just knew that you dropped a hint in chapter 111 about Mandy dying. I can see why people are upset. But, I don't think that gives them the reason to tell you that your writing sucks.
Through out this whole chapter, I had butterflies in my stomach.
I just hope Michael takes what Mandy said if anything happens to her that he will remarry.
Date: Jul 17, 2014 09:20 am Title: Chapter 125
Wow, the babies here at last. I wonder how Prince and Paris are going to take to their new brother? I hope that there's not going to be any sibling rivalry.
But, something tells me that there's going to be some most likely between Paris and her new brother. I could be wrong though.
Date: Jul 17, 2014 08:00 am Title: Chapter 124
Wow, she did it!!! She finally did it!!! this seemed to go on for more than nine months.
Oh, and what's ky jelly?
What did the doctor cut Mandy for?
Author's Response:
Ky is a lubricant used for exams
when a bay is born the do an episiotomy or you tear down south so delivery can occurr. So the head will come out
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2014 04:53 am Title: Chapter 128
Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeey by the way is there any way we could talk outside of mjfiction? Like email or twitter or something? :) I would love to talk to you!! <3
Author's Response:
Sure my email is mottley13@aol.com
[Report This]Date: Jul 17, 2014 04:50 am Title: Chapter 128
.............................................................what.
oh god. This was the best story I've ever read......omg. Mandy's dead? I seriously have no words for that. I'm seriously STUNNED. Okay, you're definitely my current favorite author. OMFG THOUGH HOW COULD YOU DO THAT?!!?!?
I'm thinking he'll end up with Jess....i like her. I loved Mandy! This is still so hard to believe! Now i feel guilty for silent reading because honestly, this is officially in that top ten list in my head.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 123
The sex being described as homecoming was very interesting. I've just never thought that it could be described as that.
I hope that no one heard them having sex/ making love, like the children. Oooh, that would lead to some veeeeery interesting questions on Paris's part.
Author's Response:
Still catching up I see..you're almost there ;(
Date: Jul 16, 2014 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 122
Good for Jess.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 121
Well, maybe it's a good thing that Jess will be with a man.
Date: Jul 16, 2014 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 120
Well, this review is now bringing your story up to 329 reviews, and my inrest is not fading, by any means!!!!! I can't wait to see how this story ends and where the new one begins!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jul 16, 2014 07:00 pm Title: Chapter 119
Oh my god, this chapter was so funny I'm actualy speechless!!!!!!
Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 118
OHMYGOOOOOOOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was sooooo funny!!!! Wonder how Michael's gonna get Mandy for this?
Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 128
Awww, I'm tearing up! What a great story. Ignore the negative feedback. No matter how sad a story ending is, that's what makes the story good. You appealed to our emotions which is what you were supposed to do. Great job and congratulations!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I've shed many tears over the past two days writing this ending. It's my baby and I'm proud of it. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hopefully the sexual can live up to this one.
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1.2 The Flight From Hell
I like mjluvr12many 's idea!!! Let's do that!!!
Author's Response:
Ok ..you can write your own story and do that but with my story she's not coming back. She's dead and the story has ended Time for a new plot and new loves for Michael..sorry. It can't go on for ever
Date: Jul 16, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 117
Wow!!!!!! How I would looooooooooooove a man to be like that with me!!!!! Can I have Michael?
Oh this will be interesting to see what Mandy's got up her sleaves with the sex toys!!!!