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Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 02, 2016 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 4: What Makes A Good Story??

I agree with MJlegacy14.



Author's Response: She hit it spot on!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2014 08:44 am Title: Chapter 4: What Makes A Good Story??

If it flows coherently from beginning to end, reasonable/logical plots, making the slightest bit of sense as well as good charactization..when I say that I mean if a canon character is wildly OOC, provide a reason for how they became that way and also put disclaimers/warnings such as if the fic is majorly AU or inspired by a short film/movie Michael did, a parody or a spoof fic..there should be creativity but a fine line must be drawn between that and writing something that's a slap to Michael's face..and last but not least, proper grammar and punctuation..of course we all make mistakes but at least write like you're not failing English(am not targeting those with learning disabilities or who could barely read/write English, btw)..and also be sure to research if a certain sensitive  issue in a fic is tackled. There should be an even balance between dialogue, actions and description but on the other hand, one should try to show more than tell whenever you want to make a certain emotion vivid.

have learned all of this from more experienced authors who taught me how to write better..



Author's Response: I agree with everything you've said and I think I do a pretty good job of doing these things as well as certain other authors but our stories still get little recognition. It's really unfair. I don't know why but my stories just can't seem to reach certain audiences. I have a few faithful readers. Thanks so much for your input. It was very informative.

Reviewer: MJlegacy14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2014 08:14 am Title: Chapter 4: What Makes A Good Story??

I can answer that for you. Lol. Make it have lots of sex. Make Michael a bad boy. And most importantly,  make the woman/man a no nonsense type of chick. Thats what the readers want!



Author's Response: Lol!!! You pretty much summed up everything!

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