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Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 05:18 pm Title: Walking Her Home

This was too sweet and sad. It reminds me of Lady in my life the line "Even when we're old and gray" it's true, he loved her in old age up into her death.  lovely story. P.S. not sappy at all.



Author's Response:

Ooh yes that line :( Kind of sad, but also soooo sweet arghgh makes me wish he was my lover

Thank you so much! lots of love xox

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 03:45 pm Title: I'd Lie

Excellently done once again!! You are like the mistress of short stories! :-))))) You can write a story with my name? XDXD You don't have to though. Hmmmmm a story about like one of the songs Mike never made a video for. I always thought there was like mystery behind thatxD. Can't wait for your next masterpiece!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Of course I can write your name into one (but fun fact I am also the mistress of irresponsibility-in-story-writing, so it might be a week or so before I actually manage to finish it. I always start writing and then forget about it for like a week :O)

Lol oh and what is your real name? I stalked your profile and it just says "oh snap" haha. (Also, the pictures of Mike on your profile- WOOO MAN I JUST TOOK A SHOWER BUT I THINK I NEED ANOTHER ONE sooo hot)

Anyway, I will definitely write your name into a story, as a thank you for all your support and reviews! Lots of love xoxo

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 24, 2013 03:31 pm Title: Walking Her Home

That wasn't sappy, that was fantastic. I'm cryingg now actually. Tears are running down my face and its hard to stop them. You did an excelltent job once again and this story really pulled on my heartstrings. Thank you for this wonderful short story.



Author's Response:

Hah thank you so much! I admit it, I cried a little bit while writing it. I'm glad to have brought someone to tears, that's a powerful thing <3 And thank you for your wonderful review! xoxo lots of love

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2013 05:43 pm Title: Prank Call

noooooooooooo. y didnt u finish.u should write the whole story full time



Author's Response:

I decided to leave the rest to y'alls imagination this time ;) Personally, I love stories that leave you thinking about what happens next. I might write a sequel though, since some of you seem to want that :P

xoxo

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2013 04:09 pm Title: Prank Call

I have read about that. He called this hotel I think and disguised his voice as Diana Ross.



Author's Response:

omg that's hilarious! such a trickster hahaha :P xoxo

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2013 08:38 am Title: Prank Call

He flew all the way to her house for a Booty call. LOL... sorry but thats funny. I did enjoy the story though.



Author's Response:

Ahh now you're making him sound like some kind of player!! XD Think of it this way, they were already good friends, so it wasn't like they were just randomly hooking up ;) She must've been something special for him to fly all the way there haha

Thanks! xoxo

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2013 07:26 am Title: Prank Call

I loved it, thank you!! I wouldn't mind a part 2 sometime down the road though! ;)

You were close with the description: blue eyes and blonde hair. :)

I'm going to assume he showed up at my door wearing those sexy gold pants! *drool*



Author's Response:

Haha okay good, I just made a random guess and hoped it would be close. I was afraid you'd have like green eyes and red hair and that I'd be waaay off, but phew!

wooo imagine if he showed up in those gold pants. i'm sweating just thinking about that...

And I'm glad you enjoyed it! Maybe I will do a part 2 if I have time :) xoxox



Author's Response:

Haha okay good, I just made a random guess and hoped it would be close. I was afraid you'd have like green eyes and red hair and that I'd be waaay off, but phew!

wooo imagine if he showed up in those gold pants. i'm sweating just thinking about that...

And I'm glad you enjoyed it! Maybe I will do a part 2 if I have time :) xoxox

Reviewer: hejcslm Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 23, 2013 05:34 am Title: Prank Call

Excellent job!! Tjis was super duper secy and that ending was awesome. Lol If you ask us to continue in our heads, we'll have the naughtiest thoughts! XD Awesome story though and are you gonna update Scarlett(The CWH story soon)? Love youuuu!!! :-)))))



Author's Response:

Thank you! Hehe that's exactly why I left you all to imagine it ;)

haha Scarlett didnt get a lot of interest, I thought nobody was really reading it anymore, but if you want me to update it I'll definitely do that soon! Love you more :) xox

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2013 10:52 pm Title: Prank Call

haha it was cute, flirty, and awww they fell in love because of a prank call



Author's Response:

Haha thanks! I heard somewhere Michael loved to make prank calls and that he'd just dial random numbers and do it without people ever knowing it was him! Ugh imagine if he called you and you didn't even ever know lol! But yeah this was my little twist on it :p xoxo

Reviewer: EvelovesMichael Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2013 02:12 pm Title: Falling

awwwww that was so cute!! (i wish there was a sequel to this)



Author's Response:

Hmm that might be a good idea, actually! We'll see, but I also have a lot of other short story ideas in store,..

Thanks for the review! love xoxo

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2013 09:32 pm Title: Falling

Awwww cute 



Author's Response:

Haha thanks! :) <3

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2013 07:53 pm Title: Why Michael Jackson Only Wore One Glove

Naw,no bad use. great minds think alike I suppose



Author's Response:

I guess so! x :)

Reviewer: MJThrillerRockerChick Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2013 06:03 pm Title: Why Michael Jackson Only Wore One Glove

Oh, haha no I was talking about myself lol..I said "they were falling in love" sorry about that.



Author's Response:

haha that's okay, i kind of used it in the story too, when he said he fell for her haa my bad use of the pun :P xoxo

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2013 04:10 pm Title: Falling

omg omg that was amazing thank you sooooooooooooomuch



Author's Response:

You're welcome! Glad you liked it!!! :) xoxox

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 09, 2013 03:58 pm Title: Falling

Aww, that was so sweet! And FYI....his visit to Gary is something I watch on youtube all the time! Hearing MJ say "Look at those titties" just about had me dying of laughter! LOL

I can't wait to read mine! I hope it's hot but just as sweet as this story at the same time! I'm greedy, I guess!! ;)



Author's Response:

Ahaha i love that video!!! And when he says "get your buttocks to the house" hahah

I've got to think of a good storyline for yours.. hmm.. :) I'll do my best

xoxoxo 

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