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Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2013 06:35 am Title: Chapter 35:Award shows, interviews and Curruption OH MY

Michael can't catch a break for shit! More drama for your mama coming up!



Author's Response:

No he can't and yes there is so sit back and realx because it's about to get MESSY

Reviewer: MJ4EVER1980 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2013 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 25: Dangerous release party... vulture are moving in

Lisa Mother was always a bitch great story, Sorry I haven't been commenting...



Author's Response:

Yes Yes she was is and ever shall be if michael had stayed married to lisa that woman would have made his life a LIVING HELL

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2013 01:16 am Title: Chapter 34: Superbowl... there is Hope

Dang. Jack reminds me of Ike turner ... Just so mean!



Author's Response:

Good anlogy i never would have thought of that but he has ALWAYS been like that 

Reviewer: April J Jackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 04:25 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes

Excellent job!

Author's Response:

Thank you can't wait to hear what you think of The latest Chapters 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 01:54 am Title: Chapter 33: The Dangerous Tour pt 5 - Hardly Breathing BECAUSE She's out of My Life

Awww!! So many of my tears have been jerked! Shana!! Come Baaaaaaack!



Author's Response:

Ahhh that was the point but as the saying goes 'Breaking up is hard to do' and if Both people weren't ready for that it's REALLY hard on them both

Reviewer: April J Jackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2013 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 23:Vacation...The Plot Thinkens

Love this whole story! I'm still reading with all the excitement and curiosity in me, and I love the plot that you've done and that. an I'm only on chapter 23, but throughout it all so far, I love the amazing work you've put into writing this story :-) ~April J Jackson

Author's Response:

As i said before it comments like these that keep me Posting stories if every writter with little coments got this inparation a lot of story's wouldent go by the way side

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2013 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 32: The Dangerous tour Pt 4 -Dangerous

Daaaaaaaannnnngg!! & SHE PREGNANT! Let's roll out some drama!



Author's Response:

Always i felt that was a great Plot twist right when everything is so right to have it all get swept right out from under you, we know the truth but the Character does not so the Chatacter has to have that interal debate with self about it 

Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2013 08:56 am Title: Chapter 32: The Dangerous tour Pt 4 -Dangerous

Oooowww. that hair on sticks is getting on my nerves! She finna mess up a good thang. I hope Shana remember what granny forewarned her about. I'm finna sit back and wait because this finna be good as hell!

Author's Response:

Oh yes it's going to get better and worese and better again Tatiana is FAR from fisnished but i will tell you this Tatiana intention was never to do any harm to Michael and his Career she was jus stuck in her ast Fanitacy with him and wanted to get One more sexual escapde and jump start her Career what followed well she was NOT in agrement with but hey she got hooked up with jacks we all know what Jaco did to latoya so stands to reason if he has another object to put his anger into he's going to do it 

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2013 05:02 am Title: Chapter 32: The Dangerous tour Pt 4 -Dangerous

Awe man thats crazy.



Author's Response:

It Really Was I got the idea from something i read and i thought that it would be a Perfect Plot twist for this story this one was actually more Dramatic then the original that i read because more was going on 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 03:35 am Title: Chapter 31:the Dangerous Tour P3 - I can't let her get away

Gotta love Michael's granny!



Author's Response:

I felt she need to be a tough No nonsense Woman that could put Joe in his place 

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2013 05:49 am Title: Chapter 30:The Dangerous Tour pt 2 - Who Is It

Hmmmm interesting 

Reviewer: lewisshan13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2013 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 29:The Dangerous Tour p1 - Brace yourself

Oh hell yeah. They finally did it. Now we gotta do something with hair on sticks. She's tryna mess it up for everybody!

Author's Response:

I said this before I'll say it again you had me DYING with the hair on the stick comment 

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2013 03:21 am Title: Chapter 29:The Dangerous Tour p1 - Brace yourself

Daaaaaaang!! It just got hot in here! I need a fan!



Author's Response:

isn't that the way it's supose to be when you expreince that MAGIC of michael jackson

Reviewer: MJLover_98 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 20, 2013 07:58 am Title: Chapter 27:Tatiana Thining bout BEING my baby... don't mater if your BLACK or WHITE

Dang, Tatiana is such a snake! I can't believe Michael actually had sex with Madonna...



Author's Response:

Yes she is But shes Not as Bad as One Might think as the story Progress you see her motives are not THe same as Jacks 

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Date: Aug 19, 2013 03:22 am Title: Chapter 26: Remember the time... In Africa

Dang, the part w/ Michael & Shana had me Niagra Fallin'!

 

PS: what's the name of the book where you got the part about michael jumping on Jermaine?



Author's Response:

I called a friend of mine when i saw your post she have me the link a while back to a page that listed ALL the jackson family books for downloadable reading and it wasn't Deed de jackson it was Enid Jackson who wrote that particular book I cna't rember the name of it and I'm sure it's on that page my friends computer crasjed last month so she doesn't have the direct like and i have been looking for it ALL day so  searxh Enid Arnes Snapp Jackson though she went by Enid jackson and look up on Etsy and there is a woman Marlos Maldenado that also wrot a book but i'm not sure if that particualr scens was in it I wish i could do more but i'm kicking myself on that much that i can't find the damn book and i had the link and can rember the page clear as day

Oh well look it up if you find anything let me know

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