Date: Sep 07, 2013 05:52 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
49th wow, excellent job done, Well hope you have a great week before you get back to it. Well i love to be able to give positive reviews :) Looking to new chapters
Author's Response:
yup alot is on my mind for this story and still a lot more to happen i haven't even gotten into history Era yet that's a whole nothere thing so I'll try, I'm glad you love to give them and i love recieving them they will be great chapters
Date: Sep 07, 2013 05:49 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Yeah I did have one like a month or two ago. but we had to give it back to Radio Rentals, as it wasn't working properly. but hopefully I can get one soon. Yeah it would be really annoying to have a line in a story and just hearing the word underscores repeated at you. Well it's good that you have back up chapters so you can post them whenever. and yeah actually you're right, it'r good to have other stories so that if you reach a road block, you can take a breather, so you can refocus.
Author's Response:
you'll get another I know they sell laptops for really cheep now like 200 dollars 295 look on amazon yeha it is anoying when it reads lines in the story yeah i try to keep back up chapters becuase i neverknow when i might have to go out or do what ever and not be able to write that day do ijust keep a backup and can post them on those days my readers see no difference
haing other stories does help ypu breathe unless you just need to breathe from the writting porcess all together becuase your burnt out and just need the time away from writting to get back to refocus
[Report This]Date: Sep 07, 2013 05:38 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Yeah definitley. Well I hope you're able to find a great combination off stuff that seems right, when you go back to school. I got holidays the last week of this month for two weeks, then I've got christmas holidays. Your welcome, but it's easy to love your story when you write it awesome :)
Author's Response:
I don't even know if I want to go bac any more my heart isn't into it any more maybe I have just been unnurtured in my talent in my field and no long feel like it's right for me and finding a job just seems impossible hope you have a great holiday and thanks for telling me that you think my writtings awsome it make my day to see reviews like this most of the time I get negativity in my life so this mkes me feel better to see that i male some people happy
Date: Sep 05, 2013 04:40 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
I wish I could read more than 1 chapter a day, so far I haven't been able to as I've been swamped with assignments, but I've got holidays real soon so I'll be able to read more an more. But I love how the story has been progressing and getting better an better. I can't wait 'till I get even further into the chapters :-)
Author's Response:
Yeah school or work can do that to you i don't have a job or go to school I'm looking and looking into etting back into school and i just need to find the riht combination of stufff to do that with what holiday or you talking about the end of year Christmas that months to come thanks for the loving of the story and thanks for the reviews
Date: Sep 05, 2013 04:34 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Oh that's too bad, cause I don't have a computer. Well at least I'm still able to read your story. I kinda prefer reading normally, cause if I miss something or just wanna re-read a part of the story it's easy. :-) Well it's good that you're just focusing on this story for the moment, cause it's like when a writer is focusing on multiple stories at one time, they get complaints on other stories not getting updated when the writer (like you) is in the groove of a story that they're trying to finish
Author's Response:
Oh yeah well if you get one it may make it easier to do, yeahs I like to read to but the natural reader has the ablity to scroll bak stop retuart wherever you want to reread the biggest anoyance is if someone puts a line divide in it reads that Line as a Million underscores
yeah that why i try not to work on to many at one time and I always have back up chapters so if i reach a road bloack and need to breathe from a story I can go write on something else for a while I might take a day or two off from this story because i just Wrote a MAJOR chapter that hasn't been posted yet but will be in 6 or so chapters but yeah some times you hit a wall not because you really have run out of idea's but because you need a beak from the story a few days to get you head right to continue
that why i like having two or more stories I'm working on becausei can take a break from it and go else where get a breathe of fresh air writting about something else and then come back I'm like on the 49th chapter of this story so I can take nearly a week off and still get back to it. but thanks for the review More to come MUCHA MORE
Date: Sep 05, 2013 04:34 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Oh that's too bad, cause I don't have a computer. Well at least I'm still able to read your story. I kinda prefer reading normally, cause if I miss something or just wanna re-read a part of the story it's easy. :-) Well it's good that you're just focusing on this story for the moment, cause it's like when a writer is focusing on multiple stories at one time, they get complaints on other stories not getting updated when the writer (like you) is in the groove of a story that they're trying to finish
Date: Sep 05, 2013 04:34 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Oh that's too bad, cause I don't have a computer. Well at least I'm still able to read your story. I kinda prefer reading normally, cause if I miss something or just wanna re-read a part of the story it's easy. :-) Well it's good that you're just focusing on this story for the moment, cause it's like when a writer is focusing on multiple stories at one time, they get complaints on other stories not getting updated when the writer (like you) is in the groove of a story that they're trying to finish
Date: Sep 04, 2013 01:42 pm Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
hey canyoufeelit what happen to you working on ur other story danse la'scive? that story only has 5 chapters. And this story has 42, y aren't u working on danse la'scive man? u should work that story a little more because that's a good story, u just can't quit on it now. just saying.
Date: Sep 04, 2013 01:49 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
Well it's true, you're a talented writer, but your welcome :-) Can't wait to get to the deep stuff. Yeah I know what you mean, you just keep on writing until you feel like the story's complete and that you don't need to add anymore chapters. I'd love to download the Natural Reader, but I'm not I'll be able to as I'm using my phone, but I'll try and let you know if it works. Thanks for telling me about :-) Chat to ya later
Author's Response:
you know I don't know if it natual reader works on phones but if you buy it you can use it on you comouter and convert readable files to audio files... Thanks again for the complent and it will get deeperyour right I do write until the thought is complete I just got a complate about not working on another story becuae i have been working on this one because I'm in the groove on this story and not that one,
can't wait to hear your thought on things
Date: Sep 03, 2013 04:34 am Title: Chapter 1:In the Studio With Michael Jackson
omg this is so good i'm already a fan of your story the kids are hilarious i'm laughing almost all the time :D
Author's Response:
Thanks and if your just startiing your in for a Bumpy ride because it gets ALOT deeper then the kids
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2013 03:52 am Title: Prologue: A dream is a Wish Your Heart Makes
LOL, Well continue your amazing writing :-) Thanks! Love the story, still a bit behind, as I'm only on chapter 31. Love the long chapters! Talk to ya later Awesome writer!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the complement it will get even better, it deep storrand you haven't even hit the deep stuff yet it comes after 35 yeah i just write until the thought i believe should end the chapter comes up then it ends if that 8 10, 20, 30 or 44 pages then so be it it's all about reaching that certain point you know
but it is good to down load the Natural Reader softwear and it will read too you it what i use to check my grammer look it up and check it out
[Report This]Date: Sep 02, 2013 05:35 am Title: Chapter 29:The Dangerous Tour p1 - Brace yourself
Great chapter/s!! Still loving the story :-)
Author's Response:
of course that's what I do..LOL but I love hearing from you
[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2013 08:41 am Title: Chapter 37:Tabloid Junkie
Can we say desperate much?! I can't stand these mofos. I hope the kids can counteract what's about to happen. Me think it's gonna get worse before it get better.
Author's Response:
Ahhh YES i think we can... LOL!! can you image what it was like in Real life for michael serously, The Kids will do there due dillgence to counter act what they can but ther is some CRAZY shit coming down the pipe line... and yes it's going to get MUCH worse and MUCH better depending on how you look at it.... so stay tuned
Date: Aug 29, 2013 06:44 am Title: Chapter 36:Grandma Martha... Family day, Back to Business
Aww... I love Granny Martha!
PS Happy Birthday Michael!!
Author's Response:
She will be Missed.... and i hope you go write you First encounter with MJ experience on the topic i created for his BDay but now i just want to keep up for the fans
Date: Aug 28, 2013 08:15 am Title: Chapter 33: The Dangerous Tour pt 5 - Hardly Breathing BECAUSE She's out of My Life
I know I have been a little silent with my feedback. But I just wanted to let you know I am still with you don't get discouraged. You are a great writer and I love this story. Its one of my favorites on here. So if I don't leave a comment its nothing personal. I still love and adore your talent for writing.
Its getting better everyday. Oooooh Tati is something else. Whoa! Blackmail now, really. In the words of Kanye West "How could you be so heartless" Oh and I feel so bad for Mike and Shana. She is preggo and mad as hell. And he is getting deeper in some bullcrap and he don't even know it.
Author's Response:
It happens alot of people forget to comment i do it to sometimes you fall in LOVE with story you get absorbed in it you forget to thank the person that put there effort in to wrtting it, it can be hard not to when you have THOUSENAS of read couns and you know people are reading but no one is saying anything
Yes Tati is something else but she just being Tati and I thought blackmail would be a twist no one would see coming from her Funny i only remember Kanyes "she ain't a gold digger but she ain't messing with no Broke Ni***" that aplies for Tatia toobut she is one, Yup Michael and Shana gotta clim to get back Let me tell you they will get it together it will take time but when it's ment to be it's ment to be.
Oh yes when the bad guys work against you they REALLY work AGAINST YOU, I was inpired by a video of what ACTUALLY happened to michael but i put my own twist on it