Reviewer: Annie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2013 11:46 pm Title: LIE TO ME

And I forgot to tell how much I love the page setting of your story!

And yes this is Tatiana! Self high five lol


I found Michael very cute on the first chapter. Lovey dovey with Cerise and I was almost wondering if Tatiana would be the other woman in this story. He said he loved Cerise so this is the first thing that came to my mind. I thought Cerisa was the official girl. But now that I learn that he is dating Tatiana. And for 2 years... Michael...


And when I read "She was being overly sensitive for no reason at all", I immediately think of a pregnancy lol.

One part of me feels bad for Tatiana. Yes, she is a pain in the ass but she was here first so if she goes completely crazy once she find out about Michael  and Cerise, I will understand! And that was so sad when Michael answered by "Me too" when she told him she loved him! From the moment when he didn't say "I love you more", Tatiana should have had doubts lol

I love the fact that you use Alicia's song Unthinkable is one of my favorite from The Element of Freedom.

“And I’m talking about Fivehead.”


Now that I read this chapter, I don't know how I feel about Cerise! I wish you coud enlight us on how it began between Michael and Cerise. Cerise obviously knew Michael was dating someone and it bothers me!

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

i'm so here for those gifs. lmao. cerise has her character flaws as does mike snd tati but you will see. you'll see how they met as well.