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Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2014 04:16 am Title: KNOCKED UP?

Can you say CLIFFHANGER??????

Author's Response:

*smiles innocently* cliffhangers are fun.  thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: mjlover1972 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2014 01:12 pm Title: KNOCKED UP?

YES SHE IS PREGANT PLZZZZZZZZZZZ MAKE HER PREGANT PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

we'll see. thanks for the review.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2014 11:26 am Title: KNOCKED UP?

I was sooo trying to push that thought outta my mind but I knew it would be a possibility. For her sake, I really hope she's not. Bad enough she was the side chick, she don't need to be pregnant by his punk ass too. That's just a terrible life right there. And chile you know Imma read Mike's ass for filth each time. Lol. But seriously, I hope Cerise isn't pregnant. Talk about a complicated ass life! Damn! This girl has been losing so far in this entire story. I really feel bad for her. If she is by chance pregnant, I hope she is prepared to be a single parent. Or even better, Usher will still want her and be a father figure to her baby. This is a mess lawd. Whoo smh. 

Reviewer: oblivion Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2014 10:59 am Title: STILL CAN’T SHAKE YOU OFF II

oh no....i know she aint pregnant too. that would make things a million times more complicated.



Author's Response:

it definitely would.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2014 09:16 am Title: STILL CAN’T SHAKE YOU OFF II

Omygaaaaash Michael leave the poor woman alone! Ugh! Jesus Christ of Nazareth. I love it when people can't take a hint smh. Great chapter. Please update soon, don't keep me waiting lol. And I know that trick Tati ain't even pregos with her trifling lying ass. Ugh. 



Author's Response: Hmm is tati pregnant or no? Well see very soon.

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2014 01:46 pm Title: PROLOGUE

Oh my gosh I've been waiting for this chapter for forever!!!!! I can't wait to read it when I get off work. I love you and your work. Just to put it out there. You were are one of my inspirations! I used to get you mixed up with another girl on here. PeaceShanice, your cover art is sort of similar. I want to ask you to read my story AMOUR 

 



Author's Response:

oh wow!  that totally makes me so happy. I really appreciate it. I have actually started Amour but stopped because I don't have time to properly read and review. School and my offline life is keeping me occupied right now hence me adding this chapter so late. But don't worry I'll definitely start reading it again.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2014 01:32 pm Title: STILL CAN’T SHAKE YOU OFF II

Michael needs to fuck off. Like way off. Damn, ain't he there with his ho? He needs to tend to her. Like Usher said, he GOT HER. Reese probably needs some air or something. She will be fine. Michael is like an annoying flesh eating virus I swear. Hell he makes me nauseated, so I can only imagine how Cerise feels. Usher needs to take her home with him. She may have had too much to drink, and I know her nerves are haywire cuz Michael and his bony wack ass girlfriend are there. It really doesn't make sense to me that she's supposedly so pregnant, yet at the damn club. Chile whatever. I just hope Cerise is alright and Usher is there to take care of her. Which I know he will. Take her home Ush! And fuck off Michael. Take your bothersome ass on. Bugaboo ass. Ugh. Fuck him and his scorned feelings. Cerise needs to pay him DUST. 



Author's Response: I feel so bad the way you be reading Mike for filth. But it's so hilarious.

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 30, 2014 06:39 am Title: EMOTIONAL ROLLERCOASTER/I WANT OUT

The fuck this bony bitch want?



Author's Response:

lol

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2014 11:22 pm Title: IN LOVE VS LOVE

Poor Cerise!!! And fuck Michael for that LIE!! And fuck that lil bony BITCH, Tatiana!! SLUT!!

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2014 11:02 pm Title: TAKE A BOW

I'm readin, I'm reading...Don't you dare delete it, LoL!! I...Am...Loving...Story!!

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2014 10:37 pm Title: LOVE YOU MORE

That's what I'm talking about!!

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2014 10:26 pm Title: SHE'S GOT IT OUT FOR ME

Awww...that bony BITCH!! Beat her ass one good time Reese!!

Reviewer: TheBeatOfMikesHeart Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2014 10:18 pm Title: LIE TO ME

I'm soo loving the start of this!!



Author's Response:

thank you so much

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 26, 2014 10:42 pm Title: STILL CAN'T SHAKE YOU OFF I

Aw hell. Michael's narrow ass knows he knows how to overstep his damn boundaries! Damn can Cerise live?! He's not slick. Tryna still keep in touch with her family as a means to have a connection to her. I bet he's not buddy buddy with the family of the bitch he's with who's allegedly carrying his child. Negro PLEASE. He needs to go away for real. Ugh. Anyway, he's a non factor because Usher is back in the picture, finally!!! Please please PLEASE add more of him! I'm so sick of hearing about Michael's trifling ass that it's sickening at this point. I want more Cerise and Usher action. I so hope she's going to this party with him and look fly as usual. Even if Michael's sorry ass is there, I hope she pays him absolute DUST! I'm talking dust particles, wallpaper honey. Like he's not even there. Usher needs to be the one to whoo her off her feet and make her his. I so hope they go to that party and slay the entire scene. Flaunt that fire ass chemistry they have and I hope Michael seethes with envy. Watch her be happy with someone else. One who doesn't have baggage and bullshit. 



Author's Response:

Lmao! not dust particles though.  Now you know Mike's not goimg anywhere lol. But there is going to def be more of Usher.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 16, 2014 11:54 am Title: SWEETEST THING I’VE EVER KNOWN

Michael just keeps making me dislike him more and more. Cerise doesn't owe his sorry ass a DAMN THING! Not even a courtesy call or text. Nothing. He needs to understand that. And damn right, she can call Usher or any other man she wants because she is a single woman. And he's so fucking dumb. Sorry but I'm not buying this pregnancy shit from that bony bitch he's with either. It's just too convenient. It's like she's putting on an act. And smh at his dumb ass still telling her he loves her. I just can't. I hope that frail broad takes his ass through the ringer. Talkin about he didn't think he would lose Cerise completely. Wtf did he expect would happen? He thought he could keep both women, have his cake and eat it too? I hope Cerise learned a valuable lesson about being a side chick. The shit NEVER works out in your favor! I hope the next man (Usher) will treat her the way she's supposed to be treated. Fuck Michael. And as far as Maris, Imma need for her to stop updating Michael on Reese's business. Now he knows that she made it to LA safely, the updates needs to stop here. That's it. If she considers herself Cerise's friend, she will not be telling anymore of her business to Michael. He's not her man, her friend, nothing. So he doesn't get the privilege of being privy to anything pertaining to her. 

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