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Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2014 07:51 am Title: CHAPTER 42 | Payback

Woah so u got alot of stories to do..damn. Imma miss Harper and Michael



Author's Response:

I knooooowww! I should finish one before I start another but I love this so much :/

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 26, 2014 06:46 pm Title: CHAPTER 42 | Payback

I don't blame Harper for paying Michael's ass complete dust. He deserves it. He thinks that because she's pregnant and the circumstances have changed, now he wants to apologize and make things right just because he's ready. Ha! Nope. It don't work like that. Harper doesn't work on his damn time, especially since he was the asshole who was in the wrong. So I hope his ass felt the burn of being paid dust. Harper needs to make him kiss her ass, literally and figuratively speaking. Lol. I wonder how far along she is in the pregnancy. I know she has doubts considering this is her first time being preggo and she has a thriving career, and of course she's not married. But this is the time where Michael will have to stop being a damn whiny diva and be there for her. Be the man, be her backbone and support system. Harper will be a sexy ass mama though, pure milf status! Lmao. Now michael better run over to Harper's house and be ready to kiss some ass! 



Author's Response:

Hey girl ;D I don't blame Harper either! Michael needs to learn that this is not how you treat a woman! I can't wait to know if Harper is pregnant or not. And we know that if it isn't the case, it's just a matter of time until Michael gets her preggo. We know he's not letting her go anyways lool

Thank you for the review <3

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2014 11:44 am Title: CHAPTER 41 | Clarification

FYI - Horning is either when animals with horns fight each other or (in slang) when a guy wakes up with an erection. I think you meant that she was "honking"

I'm so glad they worked out the Ethan drama. I hope that's the end of that....but I'm sketchy on that due to the pregnancy test....that better be Michael's.

I love seeing your name in the "most recent" list!



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you! I love this story I just got caught up with holidays, and now school and the other stories but the new chapter is here.

 

OMG, I knew it! If my ass has re-read the chapter before posting this typos wouldn't be here >.<. I'll correct it when I'm done with my other stories. Thank you Redone :D

Reviewer: halesjackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2014 06:21 am Title: CHAPTER 1 | Beautiful Stranger

yay you are finally back. I hope you'll update your other story as well.

I really love the story both of them:-)



Author's Response:

Hey you!  I promise I will update all my stories ;)

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 14, 2014 06:02 am Title: CHAPTER 41 | Clarification

Oh shit Harper is pregnant. Lmao thats why she acting crazy.



Author's Response:

LOOOL! Exactly lool

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2014 11:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 41 | Clarification

Oh yeah they definitely need to talk now. Harper could be pregnant? Oh my damn!!! 

These two are something else, i love it. Michael needs to work on his listening skills and not jump to conclusions. Stop throwing a fuckin fit everytime something bad happens.

Ethan can go on somewhere with his cocky ass. You shouldn't be cocky at all if you cant make a woman reach her climax, instead of them faking it.

I'm so glad you updated, I love this story so much!!!!!



Author's Response:

Yup, they need to talk because it's getting ridiculous! and now that Harper might be pregnant, they have to make up. Ethan is just... Whatever! It's not like he is coming back lol! Thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2014 11:00 pm Title: CHAPTER 41 | Clarification

Harper is pregnant?! No wonder she's been crying so damn much! What kind of super sperm does he have? Damn! Lmao. Anyway, he has a lot of making up to do and Harper definitely doesn't need to make it easy on him. He's been acting like a pure bitchified diva. So now she needs to return the damn favor. I can't believe she's pregnant though. Wow. I still want her to read him when they do get a chance to talk. Because no way in hell are they gonna continue the relationship like this, let alone bring a child into it. That hanging up the phone and running and jumping to conclusions shit is just not going to work. Harper needs to put her foot down and tell him he's going to stop that shit NOW. The ball is in her court now. She's pregnant and she's got the upperhand since she technically hasn't done anything wrong. 



Author's Response:

LOOOL, yes! She has been crying a lot lately! Oh, don't you think she read him enough on this chapter lol? You're right, Michael needs more ;-) Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 13, 2014 08:31 pm Title: CHAPTER 41 | Clarification

AHHHHHHH GIRL next chapter soon please!!!! Lol



Author's Response:

The new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 23, 2014 11:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

Comeback please



Author's Response:

I'm here! :)

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2014 12:06 am Title: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

I think I'm the only who believes Michael has a right to be angry with Harper. She knows Michael like the back of her hand and I honestly don't get why she's surprised at the way he reacted to the news about Ethan. Michael is very insecure about his relationship with Harper and on top of that he has major trust issues with most females. Harper should do herself a favor and remember that about Michael. Yes he's wrong for jumping to conclusions about what happen between Harper and Ethan but I think it's been also mention enough times in the story line that he's never felt alright with Ethan around Harper. Which leads me to think that if Michael was awear of the attraction between these two in the beginning of the story, why is he so surprised and angry that they slept together? If I look at it from that point of view then he has no right to be angry about that because he was with Lisa at that time. Michael should only be angry about the fact that Harper didn't tell him first and the fact that she is now being stupid and trying to help Ethan find a job. Seriously when I read the first paragraph of this chapter I thought to myself, how f**king stupid is this b***h? I was ready to reach into the story grab her and shake her like a British nanny until her common sense came back. Then I thought Janet would choke her out or at least slap some common sense into her but no such luck there either. Why the f**k would Harper go back over to Ethan's place after Janet came through and got her like that? She was warned that Michael was pissed and yet she still goes back over there, smh. Child done lost her mind if you ask me. 



Author's Response:

Harper should have seen it coming. I don't think she would be cool with Michael employing someone he slept with! Harper should put herself in Michael's shoes before she acts. She is just making everything worse!

Thank you for the review Vicki :D

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2014 10:30 am Title: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

WHAT THE FUCK WAS SHE DOING IN ETHAN'S HOUSE?  OMGGGG 



Author's Response:

I KNOOOOW! ITS SO STUPID!

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 01:12 pm Title: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

DDAAAMMMNNN!!!!! I know Mike is angry but he's overreacting. He should have calmed down and let Harper explain instead of fuming; he needs to stop comparing his relationship he had with Lisa to his with Harper; that's unhealthy.

Harper is wrong too; Harper should have at least told him that Ethan and her had a fling in the beginning when she and Mike got together. But Michael shouldn't have overreacted, him and Harper weren't even together then. Michael has nothing to do with her past relationships.

I'm so glad you updated!!!! I love this story so much.



Author's Response:

It wouldn't have hurt to hear Harper's side of her story! But Michael was upset and I could understand. Harper should have known better. And you're right! Michael shouldn't compare these two because Harper actually loves him.

Thank you for the review, the new chapter is here :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 02, 2014 12:43 pm Title: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

Really Michael? You can't at least listen to what she has to say? Grrrr he makes me so mad. If you put him in a battle to the death with Diana Ross, Mariah Carey, Cher, Whitney Houston and JLo he would win hands down for the biggest diva of all time. No contest, not even with Miss Ross. Next he's going to throw his cell phone at his personal assistant's head because they bought the wrong type of orchid for his hotel room and his water isn't carbonated. He'll be sitting in jail for assualt, right next to Naomi Campbell only he doesn't have the excuse of being coked out. Granted, Harper is incredibly stupid. She has done everything to make him jealous that she possibly could. She should have known better and stayed away from Ethan after the last argument until she had a chance to talk to Michael and work things out. Once they talked, then he should have trusted her. But it still doesn't justify his mood swings. He's having a full blown tantrum like a 3 year old. Hell, a three year old is more mature at this point. This is not how a man acts. Just because Lisa and the rest of the skanks from his past put up with his spoiled rotten ass doesn't mean Harper should.

Once he calms down he'd better listen to what she says. And once he realizes what an idiot is, he'd better grovel. 



Author's Response:

Michael frustrates me too lol! I can't blame him for wanting to punch Ethan but he needs to sit and have a conversation with Harper. He hasn't taken the plane just to ignore her?!

"Next he's going to throw his cell phone at his personal assistant's head because they bought the wrong type of orchid for his hotel room and his water isn't carbonated. He'll be sitting in jail for assualt, right next to Naomi Campbell only he doesn't have the excuse of being coked out"

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LMAOOO!

They both have their wrongs and they need to sit down and talk. That's stupid to storm out of the room whenever they argue!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 01, 2014 04:39 pm Title: CHAPTER 40 | Misunderstanding

I'm sorry but LMFAOOOOOOOOOOO.. Get the fuck outta here Michael! Please. Are you fucking kidding me? These are all supposed to be adults behaving like this? Seriously??? I truly can't. Michael is a certified BITCH at this point. Harper is not his property or his child. She was out with Ethan but instead of asking her what's going on, and knowing how the press and paparazzi purposely makes things look, he blows up on her. Feeding right into their plan. Furthermore, yes Harper was being a bit naive. We know she's MJ's girlfriend and what's comes with the territory, but that doesn't mean she has to walk around with a bag over her head. She's going to be seen out and about with several people. She's becoming famous in her field as well. Furthermore, it all boils down to trust! The fact that he can so easily dump her seemingly over nothing doesn't sit well with me at all. Harper is not Lisa or any other bitch who's done him wrong in the past. He is supposed to trust her the same way she trusts his punk ass! I really cannot believe him. I can't believe any of them at this point. Please let Harper cuss Michael the entire FUCK OUT. I am so done with him at this point. She needs to grow a backbone, stop being so damn nice and GO IN on his narrow ass! Enough is enough. 



Author's Response:

Hey you :D!

Michael should try to listen to her instead of jumping to conclusions. He already hang up on her the other time, I think he pulled enough diva move for a lifetime. Harper loves him and she wouldn't go out with Ethan just to piss him off but she is still wrong. He needs to trust her. And I agree, she needs to read him lmao. He deserves it!

Thank you for the review and sorry for the very long wait! :)

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 16, 2014 04:52 am Title: CHAPTER 39 | Aftermath

What? That's it? Damn! I was looking forward to reading all night! I guess all good things must come to an end... Just update soon please!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Double review lol

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