[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2014 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 35: Hitting The Fan
I love this gif, let me steal it real quick...
"It's Olivia dear, but Dr. LaCroix for you. I want to speak to whoever is in charge here." YYYASS Olivia tell 'em. I swear it reminds me of janet saying 'no my first name aint baby, it's Janet, miss jackson is you're nasty!' haha.
I must say it at every chapter but I love Olivia and Michael so much. They are my OTP! Olivia always defend him and she doesn't care if she can get in trouble for that. She is his ride or die chick and I know that when shit hit the fan, she will still be here.
But back to the story... I still don't want to believe Olivia had Freddy killed because I refuse to believe she would be that stupid. So, if the Det. could do his job and stop harassing the Lacroix sister that would be great!
omg, what if it's the person that seems the more innocent? Like Celine...
I'm going crazy, I need to knoooooowww.
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Oh Lisa... I don't get it, did she try to make Olivia believe she wanted her kids back JUST so that she could be close to Michael? Or she really can't stop cocaine? And she stole his shirt. Oh Lisa....
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER GIRL!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Olivia didn't have Freddy killed. Julius did. Remember the chapter where Julius kills Tony? He killed Tony because Tony was the hit man and not only did he know too much, he bungled the job by leaving evidence (aka a body). Tony should have dissolved the body in acid or something a la Walter White.
I haven't explained why Julius had Freddy killed, the only thing I can say at this point is that Freddy was working for Julius......
Lisa didn't show up at Olivia's trying to get close to Michael. She just needed a friend (Olivia). But she does have a huge crush on Michael and it is growing by the day. Let's hope she sticks to the 'friend code' and doesn't go after Olivia's man.
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2014 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 34: The Shit
MAH SONG
OMG, Olivia and Mihchael are so nasty... And I love it, looool! I can't believe they are doing this while Lisa is depressed because of her divorce and trying to get her kids back x). I can't with them pretending Olivia is asleep!!
Poor Latoya, I knew her husband was horrible but I have never seen this picture before :/ And all the things he made her do...I think I know what's going to happen and I don't like it. I don't think Michael will return her calls at all now... :(
Author's Response:
Hey Annie! LMAO @ the gif. Where di you get that from? That chick has got some serious booty.
LaToya's husband was a complete slimebucket and he ruined a large portion of her life. There will be more LaToya in future chapters, she is going to have a key role in some of the events that transpire.
Thanks for the review my dear!
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2014 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 35: Hitting The Fan
Ha! I so knew there was something sneaky about Miss Presley! That rehab stint did her no good since she wasn't committed to get cleaned up. I hope she doesn't get Olivia in trouble with the cocaine being in her house.
Author's Response:
Yep, Lisa if off the wagon. Not sure if she was ever entirely on in the first place. What is the statistic? The average addict goes through rehab at least 3 times before cleaning up for good. I think I heard something like that on Intervention. But don't worry about the cocaine, it is the least of Olivia's problems.
[Report This]Date: Mar 10, 2014 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 34: The Shit
I'm at a loss here, what are Andy and Julius planning exactly? Damn, them meeting with that dick Jack tho.. It doesnt look good. :S
Damn I need answers and fast! Which means you've got to upload a new chapter...
Thats Michael trying to seduce you in to updating uh huh ;)
Author's Response:
I am DEAD at the gif of Michael 'seducing' me.
It worked! I started writing again after seeing it so thank you.
As for Julius' plan, you'll just have to wait and see!
Thanks for the review love! And I can't wait for you to update "I don't know what to tell you" I am on the edge of my seat to see what Michael does next.
[Report This]Date: Feb 19, 2014 02:54 pm Title: Prologue
Sooooo, I watched Breaking Bad and Bryan Cranston was explaining the term "Chiral" and I can now say, I fully understand the title of your story and it's so accurate!!
Be back this week end to read the last chapters!
Author's Response:
HI ANNIE! Yes I am a nerd so I actually thought of the title before most of the story plot. You've probably noticed a lot of science in my story......
I LOVE Breaking Bad. I wonder how accurate the meth cooking actually is. I read that if it were truly pure it wouldn't be blue but clear.
I can't wait to hear what you think about the latest chapters. And thanks for the review!
Date: Jan 31, 2014 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 34: The Shit
wow, tsk tsk. so much chaos. i hope celine isnt found guilty, although obviously she wouldnt be because she wasnt the one who killed freddy...but still. and as for olivia and michael fooling around with other people in the room lol...
i remember a while back lisa marie was having some interest in michael. im not sure if she still is hung up over him, but if she is, it would be interesting to see if she decides to make a move, depsite him and liv being together...but dont listen to me, im just a girl who likes drama ;) as usual, wonderful chapter camille :) please updae soon!!
Author's Response:
Lisa Marie will bring the drama, don't you worry. There is a lot of chaos in this story but in the next few chapters I hope I can bring all the threads together and you will see that all the chaos is kind of related.
Date: Jan 30, 2014 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 34: The Shit
I'm confused now about Julius and his feelings towards his son Andy and Olivia. I assumed because its stated in an earlier chapter that he didn't care for Andy at all because first he's not his biological son, two he's a lazy no good bastard and three he fucked up his chance with Olivia. Now it's seems as if he's has a bone to pick with Olivia because of Freddy and Andy. Not to mention he's going to use Michael's sister Latoya and Celine too blackmail or hurt Olivia and Michael. For what purpose is Julius going through all these lengths to accomplish? What will he gain from all this drama? I could be wrong about all of this but from how the story is structured it doesn't seem as if Julius is a trust worthy person.
Why is Julius referred to as Julian when is meeting with Tony? Is that just a mistake or does he have personality disorder?
Author's Response:
Julius (not Julian, that was a typo I went back and corrected it) is not trustworthy AT ALL. That was the point. You're right he doesn't care for Andy. He truly only cares about himself. His motivations will become clearer in the future but he basically wants someone competent to run his company and he thinks that person has to be Olivia. Why he's so eager to pass off the company is another thing entirely. I will explain in a future chapter (soon). Julius couldn't force Andy to marry Olivia so he's going to find another way. And now he sees his opportunity........
[Report This]Date: Jan 30, 2014 10:27 am Title: Chapter 34: The Shit
Whatever they're planning, it can be good. I think they murdered that loser, Freddy and try to pin it on Celine.
Author's Response:
You're right, they are planning something terrible. But I won't tell you what!
Date: Jan 22, 2014 12:27 pm Title: Prologue
Annie this is the wire gif that I meant to post in your last review. Not sure what the hell I did:
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2014 06:16 am Title: Prologue
Btw I was watching a video of Michael in an award show in Monaco and the actual Olivia is seated on the same row as him XD Its even Dangerous era Mike ;) "When fanfic meets reality" haha
I'm sure you've already seen it but what the heck :P
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UuZPYMNnOk0
Author's Response:
I've never seen this, this is AWESOME!
I chose Claudia Schiffer because she was at the peak of her career in the Dangerous era. I wonder if her and Michael actually ever met in real life?
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2014 06:10 am Title: Chapter 33: Wanna Be Startin' Something
As I said before, Celine is fucking mental daaammn. This girl is making me vexed lol she needs some kind of help! SHE'S ENGAGED TO HIM FOR GODSSAKE OMG D;
But I guess Olivia can't do anything about it, Celine needs to realise for herself... Lawd know's its a wonder why she hasnt already done so lol :P -__-
Is Lisa gonna be staying with Olivia or? (All I can think is "WARNING, WARNING, DRAMA!" lol)
Omg concerning Freddy, I don't know yet except for the obvious suspicion of Olivia... But idk if she'd have something like that arranged, it's possible? Idk hehe
Great chapter and I love this story Girl! I can't wait for more. ;) :3
, <33
Author's Response:
You will find out if Olivia is truly guilty in the next chapter.
Celine is dumb sometimes. She's one of those girls who sees a penis and a switch flips shutting off her brain. All too common unfortunately. She is the polar opposite of Olivia that way.
Lisa is going to be staying with Olivia and Michael for a short while....and you're right, drama is ahead. That's always the case with this story but hopefully the drama I have planned will shock you.
Thanks for the review and rate girl!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2014 06:02 am Title: Chapter 32: It seemed like a good idea at the time......
Finally they talked and made up :') <3
Seriously there must be something wrong with Celine because she's so in love with that trash Jermaine. WAKE UP GIRL he doesnt love you
And omg Lisa's mum is a bitch D; I actually feel sorry for her. Wow, this is a whole new portrayal of Lisa I've never come across before hehe well done! :3
Author's Response:
Celine is kind of an idiot.
I'm trying to make Lisa likeable in this story. Most fan fics make her too evil to be believable and it bugs me.
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2014 05:55 am Title: Chapter 31: Payback
Did Olivia just really kiss Jermaine to get back at Michael? EEEEK D; This shit is messed up especially since she's smarter than that...
She should have at least heard Michael out but I guess she felt out of control and was blinded by her anger, and unfortunately Jermaine was the closest means to do so ew. >_<
Geez this chapter was just frustrating and unbelievable, getting all my emotions twisted like that
Mean of you! *pouts* lol but seriously great chapter XD
Author's Response:
She sure did!
Yes she is smarter than that, but intelligence has nothing to do with it when emotions take over. And she was EPICALLY pissed off.
Don't worry, Michael sees right through her little show.
And the story wouldn't be good if it didn't upset the readers!
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2014 05:47 am Title: Chapter 30: Ain't No Mountain High Enough
DIRTY DIANAAAAAA, NOOOOOOO
Seriously this chapter surprised the fuck out of me lmao Diana is unbelievable!! And Michael, lawd I feel sorry for this man because he's about to face the wrath of Olivia... Not more than Diana though muhahaha
Oh and Jermaine just needs to be shot or locked away somewhere... Seriously he's the most creepy fucker ever right here lol
I can't stop laughing at the title of this chapter "Ain't No Mountain High Enough" and the picture you've put at the start *crying*
Author's Response:
Love the Michael gif! Seriously sexy.
Yeah I always laugh at the Diana Ross version of the song "Ain't No Mountain High Enough" because it sounds kind of obscene when she sings it. If you listen to the Marvin Gaye/Tammi Terrell version it is much better, mainly because they can actually sing. Diana, not so much. But I gotta give her an A+ for effort.
[Report This]Date: Jan 05, 2014 05:38 am Title: Prologue
Just caught up and omfg lemme just go back and review the last chapters because a lot of shit has happened which I can't wrap my mind over LMAO
You werent lying when you said there's more drama ahead XD
Author's Response:
Yup, this story is a massive dose of drama.