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Date: Aug 28, 2022 01:17 pm Title: Still I Cry Alone At Night

Tumultous but sweet story. :)

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Date: Aug 28, 2022 01:06 pm Title: I'm Lying to Myself

Stacy is a mess..lol

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Date: Aug 28, 2022 12:53 pm Title: Don't Judge of my Composure

This was hot..now hopefully they keep acting like grown ups and not small children. 

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Date: Aug 28, 2022 12:42 pm Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

Those two are like a roller-coaster..Michael might as well just begin anew with someone else if he's struggling THAT much

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Date: Aug 28, 2022 12:27 pm Title: It Doesn't Seem to Matter

Sheesh, those two..it's like, "for crying out loud"..but at least both of them finally acted like civilized grownups

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2022 06:28 am Title: She Promised Me Forever

Full of tension is an understatement..it was so thick you could cut it with a knife..but finally those two are gettins somewhere.

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Date: Aug 28, 2022 06:15 am Title: Secrets So Untold

"Throw down in the kitchen" reminds me of an episode of Parental Control..lol

Oh I get it..you are switching povs with the first person approach..you really pulled it off..

These two, though..not sure if Miss K interfering is a good idea but could prove necessary..and Stacy was such an annoying git..

Reviewer: LadyKeren Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2022 05:49 am Title: I Gave Her Passion

I love how you wrote Michael's pov and the premise is very intriguing in and of itself..it must be really awkward, though..poor soul

Reviewer: Vale79 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2020 01:20 am Title: Still I Cry Alone At Night

Bellissima storia.
Complimenti

Reviewer: Vale79 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2020 01:19 am Title: Still I Cry Alone At Night

Bellissima storia.
Complimenti

Reviewer: Gigi1971 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2019 10:15 pm Title: Still I Cry Alone At Night

That story was genuinely great. I loved it. Thank you so much

Reviewer: MJsHistoryBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 03:25 pm Title: Still I Cry Alone At Night

The end? No!!! It was so good.

But thank you for writing it.



Author's Response:

Yeaaa I had to end it off. I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thank you for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: MJsHistoryBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 03:23 pm Title: I'm Lying to Myself

"Who are you yelling at?"

She smirked. "Get away from me."

I arched my eyebrow. "Or what?"

"Imma kick you in your balls."

I shrugged. "Go ahead."

She looked at me as if I was crazy. "You think I'm jokin', don't you?"

I shook my head. "Not at all."

The truth was, I knew that she wouldn't hurt my delicate little soldiers. She knew it too so I don't even know why she wasted her time to make that little threat. Oh Tricey. Shaking my head. She tried.

 

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lmao these two are hilarious together. I'm glad they stop "fighting". These love making scenes though are making me hot. I need to open up a window.



Author's Response:

lol they finally got themselves together and oh gosh lol don't get too hot and bothered over there!

Reviewer: MJsHistoryBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 03:18 pm Title: Don't Judge of my Composure

She swallowed her food before she said "Because you keep lookin' at me and its making me uncomfortable."

"Triceeeey..." I dragged. "You know I like to watch you eat."

"Yea." She scoffed. "And every time that you do, I always end up dropping my food."

I snickered. "It's not my fault that you don't know where your mouth is."

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lmao that's all I have to say about that.

Their exchange was super cute but the way Michael was so persistent made my body shiver. He was so sexy and the sex scene, omg girl, you know how to write some hot scenes.



Author's Response:

the gif!! looooool I can't! Michael was determined to have Patrice before the night was over and *blushes* lol thanks.

Reviewer: MJsHistoryBabe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 25, 2013 02:59 pm Title: I Can't Take It 'Cause I'm Lonely

lmao Michael scaring Patrice. He's such a child. But seriously? Again? They want to start arguing again? Can they have one moment of peace? I have to give it to Michael though for being honest and admitting to her that he still loves her though Patrice reacted poorly about it. I hope she changes her mind soon and gives in to the fire. (See what I did there? lol)



Author's Response:

He's too goofy for his own good. They just couldn't stop the arguing...taking two steps forward only to take three backward. But you'll see what happens soon. And I saw what you did tsk tsk...smooth move.

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