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Reviewer: WriteLOVEOut Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

I love this story! It made me laugh when Mike is all like "Eat that, fatty" but he is being really creepy it makes me want to see what he is going to do next! So update soon!

 

New reader ova here! :)



Author's Response: Yeah that part was so funny Segan did great on these first three chapters credit goes to her for it! :) I hope you enjoy this new reader! &thanks for your support! <3

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 3

OOOOH! Shit just got real!

Lmao, I was SO hyped when I saw the update, this is way better than those horror movies ;)



Author's Response: Yep, yep it's gonna get realer then real soon it may be thriller ;) lol We thank you! Segan done a good job on this so I'm thanking yall on her behalf. Lol

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

I always like ths humor in this. XD & I can't believe Victoria told Cindy 2 take her sexy cloths off. Like if Michael saw her in them his mouth literly drop he would probably rape her right there. Who knws with Michael & omg here comes the stalkerish sh**t! Look what cindy got herself into now. Great chapter girly! Your doing an amazing job like always. ^_^ <3 <3



Author's Response: Yep who know's with him ;) thanks me 4 leaving a review!!! Lol xD

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 3

I Absolutely LLLOOOOVVVVVEEEE THIS STORY OMG KEEP WRITING FOREVER. this is now my New favorite story. And pleasuring think I'm crazy, it's just that I like to see Michael in a different, creepy, dark way. I don't know why but I just do soo yeah KEEP it up live laugh LOVE- Southern_ cutie 



Author's Response: Ikr i like seeing him portrayed in differen't ways to i agree! & thanks so much 4 the support! <3

Author's Response: Ikr i like seeing him portrayed in differen't ways to i agree! & thanks so much 4 the support! <3

Author's Response: Ikr i like seeing him portrayed in differen't ways to i agree! & thanks so much 4 the support! <3

Reviewer: deleeshisj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

Sorry to ask but is Cindy a gold-digger to be worrying about his job? In that case Victoria would be best for him. LOL

Author's Response:

Nah, she's not a gold digger, she just wants the best for Victoria because they're best friends. lol

Reviewer: deleeshisj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm not taking sides.......But This creepy handsome guy don't have the best job in the world but what gives Cindy the right to judge him?

Continue!!!!!

Author's Response:

Yeah, true. lmao >_<

I'll update soon!

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

wow he want her and only her



Author's Response:

True. ^_^

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 3

Damn if Victoria knew who Michael wants LOL
"I'de better pick that up" GUUUURL we know what you did thre. This the bend & Snap



Classic :)

Poor Victoria, she is trying hard to catch Michael's attention when all she has to do is laugh ta make Mike smile :) She must be super pissed now

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“Um, I was wondering if I could talk to you?” He asked.

“Oh, well sure.” Victoria asked, smiling at him and shooting an excited look back at me.

“Not you.” He said, shaking his head, his dark curls bouncing even secured under his hat. “You.”



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OMG, Cindy is in deep shit now haha! Can't wait for the next chapter <3



Author's Response:

LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOO @ THE BEND AND SNAP AND THE OOH, BURN GIFS! LOL Is the second one from Easy A? Lol I'm glad you liked it. I'll update soon! <3

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 05, 2013 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 3

WOAH! wasn't expecting that.

Oh gosh, he IS on the creepy side.

Vctoria was right.

Hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Lmao, yes he is. I'll update soon! ^_^

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2012 10:59 am Title: Chapter 2

I LOOOOOOOOOOOVED IT! That's so funny that Victoria is attracted by Michael! I wonder what he is going to do. Update as soon as you can :))



Author's Response:

Lol I'm glad you liked it! You'll see another chapter soon! ^_^

Reviewer: Annie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 31, 2012 10:49 am Title: Chapter 1

New reader :)

Daaaaaamn, Michael is so creepy! I wonder what he is going to do next. Really loves it, hope you'll update soon



Author's Response:

Wow, a new reader! We're glad to have ya. ^_^

Yeah, Michael is a creep. lmao I'll update soon. Thanks for the review (s)!

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh sorry! I meant missmj2012! Haha, my bad.



Author's Response:

Oh okay. lol It's cool. ^_^

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Hey, you should post stories on your other account!

It'll be 2013 in 2 days time.

Lol.



Author's Response:

Ummmmm.....what other account?

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 2

Girl! this was great! ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks. <3

Reviewer: deleeshisj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 13, 2012 09:15 am Title: Chapter 2

This is a brilliant story keep going!



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks, kid! I'll update soon!

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