Date: Jun 04, 2015 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 12
The description was good I could imagine seeing every part of Michael's apartment.
Date: Jun 04, 2015 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 11
Very descriptive. Good use of words.
Date: Jun 04, 2015 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 10
Good first date
Date: Jun 04, 2015 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
Strange new customers.it helps the story become more interesting to read.
Date: Jun 04, 2015 06:12 pm Title: Chapter 8
Who is this little guardian angel?
Date: Jun 04, 2015 01:23 am Title: Chapter 6
Getting exciting.
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2011 04:31 am Title: Chapter 12
I Just read all your'e chapters and they are amazing :) Can't wait for the next update
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Author's Response: i am in the process of writing the next chapter, today. :)
Date: Oct 12, 2010 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
this story is by far one of my favorites i really hope that you continue soon! I love this<3 please keep writing!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks. sorry I've been takin' a break. lol
Date: Aug 27, 2010 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
your wlecom keep going! update update!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Aug 25, 2010 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ho ho ho!!! Can't wait to read about their 'date' so to call it XP Great hun!
L.O.V.E.
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Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: Aug 24, 2010 12:58 am Title: Chapter 10
omg this is a grat story and i love that you included this oyung boy into it it makes it more fun to read about the relationship that the boy and his new found friend are espirencing together with michael,please update soon i cant wait.great job
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate that comment. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2010 03:02 am Title: Chapter 10
Awesome cant wait to read about the date..
Author's Response: believe me it will be great. I had loads of fun writing these upcoming chapters. Do you think I give Michael the right personality?
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2010 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 8
Very good. Very good. I can't wait to read more!
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Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jul 25, 2010 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 7
Good, good. This is getting very interesting hun! Can't wait to keep reading!
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