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Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 26 : Heartbreak hotel

Aww mike cooked 4 her that's sweet. But wait he tried not 2 call her baby? He might aswell continue 2 call her baby anyway with his horny & pervy self. Him & those bedroom eye's lolz & agree with bev 100% that it was pretty twisted 4 her first ex 2 comfort her over new ex. Lmao! That was differen't & weird but at least michael was there 4 comfort. & uh ooh mikes not giving up until he gets those goodies from with constantly staring at her with those bedroom eye's he thinks he's slick. XD I can't wait 4 more :)



Author's Response:

HAHAHAHHA you're so funny! You're right Mike ain't slick with it but hey, it wants her back so he have to find a way to ake her understand without being to strong! The ost important is that, she gets it haha! It's hard for him to call her anything but Baby! He called her baby for like 2 year, old habits die hard. Mike is a big flirt and is she going to gave in?? Well you'll just have to read the next chapter! It's online by the way. Hope you'll enjoy :)

BTW, thank you again for ALL your funny review and you NEED to update Stuck soon because i need to know what Michael is planning with Inga's number!!!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 25 : The thrill

Wow I sort of felt bad 4 roshon in a way :/ but at the sametime I understand bev's point of view 2. She needs someone 2 trust...it's not fair 2 her either maybe roshon will move on & find someone else. I can't believe Mike&Roshon was both in her house at the sametime 0_0 I thought it was gonna be some kung-fighting up in there lolz but it was handled pretty well..hi 5 to bev 4 that. XD & aww michael is so sweet 2 be there 4 her like that I can tell that he my still love her. & btw michael is so hot in all that black oh gosh if I only I could touch him. :P



Author's Response:

I felt bad for Roshon too while writing this story but hey, you can be in a realtionship without trust! Damn that was a good idea, Mike and Roshon should have shown their funky fight and ask Bev to choose! I wish i would i've think of it earlier. *facepalm* myself. Anyway, thank for the idea ;) BJ know how to handle that kind of situation! Yeah, Mike desn't like to see her cry and the fact that another man is making her crying is heartbreaking for him! Mike is a sweetheart!

IKR! We is so beautiful especially with no makeup! Perfeeeect *BJsvoice*

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 24 : Where's the fun in forever?

Damn I guess roshon wasn't playing when he wanted out with her? Whoa he got real jealous of her & mike but he's her ex. & maybe mike&bev those a chance of getting back together again. But idk it all depends on there fate. If she let's michael go & move on maybe her & roshon wil stay together. That's what I think but as long as she's weak 4 michael then things will continue 2 be on think air 4 her & roshon. Come on bev choose wisely please. *begs with pleading eye's.* xD btw I like Bj's outfit :D



Author's Response:

Roshon ain't playing! He wanted her during the set of Liberian girl and he still want her! badly! He's not ready to let her go! Yeah girl, I know you like BJ's outfit haha :)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 23 : Best thing I ever had

Oh darn I defo gotta catch up. Lolz I'm glad there's a few chapters up now that I can take my time reading :D & thanks girl 4 really liking my story dang u reviewed every chapter xD your reviews were so funny to I was dying at your reactions 2 every chapter especially the first one to the last one about Tatiana, I couldn't stop laughing. & yes I have Migual Jontel as Mike's partiner. :) me & my sister loves him especially my sister she head over heels over that dude :P but anyways I can't wait 2 read these chapters yay! Idk but I get so excited everytime I see like 2 or 3 chapter up. I'm ready 4 more laugher & drama from #Team Bev&Mike. <3



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Glad you back to read the new chapter ;)

You don't have to thank me! I really like your story and it was my pleasure to review, rate, read and make you laugh with my coments haha! I have nothing against Tatiana but the way your portrayed her was too overwhelming for me! I looooooooove Miguel too! I'm actually listening to 'Arch & Point" while responding to your comment! Well i can't blame your sister, he is charming! And his voiiiiiiice. Humm

Hahah, get ready girl!

Reviewer: BritBrat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 16, 2012 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 25 : The thrill

Wow Mike looks DEE-LISH in that pic. Sometimes I wish he wore no makeup more often.

Anywho, I wonder if Mike is gonna try to get BJ back? He seems like he's not over her



Author's Response:

Yeah so handsome! With or without makeup he is perfect! Well we will see at the next update ;)

Thank you for reviewing

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2012 03:08 am Title: Chapter 23 : Best thing I ever had

I loved it girl! & that sketch they did at the awards was so funny xD & wow Boys2Men won :D I love that group they have such wonderful hits.

Oooh I see some type of love connection happening again with bev & mike. The sparks are flying I see. Michael misses her & he even proved it with his actions & everything. & like her friendship with Tyra, btw tyra was in michael's video black&white did u knw that? She was adorable & silly in his video. Oh boy roshon is jealous & annoyed now... he wants 2 marry her quick now so she could 4get about michael but I'm not so sure about that tho. Idk if she'll ever dust michael off the chemistry is still there. #team bev&michael ;) lolz & btw I love both dresses! I can't wait 4 more. Much Love!

Author's Response:

Than you! They actually won a award at this ceremony of the Soul Train Awards ;)

 

Here we go again! They can't help but missing each other! And the fact that he performs Remember the Time wasn't at random ;).Yeah I know, the morph thing is actually my favorite part and Tyra is so cute in there!! Actually that how I wanted my reader to picture her in the story.

Roshon truly believe that all she needs to forget about Michael is to marry someone else! Let's see if she agreed and even if sh's okay, do you think she will forget about Mike?

Thank youuuu girl, Annie :)

Reviewer: MikeyJackieLover Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 23 : Best thing I ever had

Hold on,.. Okay I love me some MJJ, but Boys II Men mm mm B2M, wooooooo all 4 of them is sexiness! Lol bt I think wen I read that they won I think I clapped a lil lol I ain't gone even lie. I dnt c wat Roshon mad about, that arguement wasnt even necessary. BOYZ II MEN.....HAHA RANDOM!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

We all have our guilty pleasure ;) They actually won the price and I wanted Tyra and BJ to introduce a price where Michael wasn't nominee!

Roshon his jelly because they were too close, but you know TV showed only what they wanted to show!

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 02:44 pm Title: Flashback - April to January 1991

Thank you so much I been wanting 2 knw 4 so long on how u upload videos on here I been dying 4 song 2 put videos up but I never even thought about asking anybody *hits my forehead* Loolzz &btw I replied 2 your review on my story thank you 4 rating it 2 if you like you can check out my story Stuck. :)

Author's Response:

You're welcoe. I proise i'll check out your story this weekend girl :)!

New chapter online BTW

Reviewer: thelostchild143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 13, 2012 07:13 pm Title: Flashback - April to January 1991

D: ohhh poor Mike... but BJ's right... she didn't deserve that... much love Xoxo can't wait for an update



Author's Response:

Yes, that was an eventful chapter :/

The new chapter in online ;)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 07:40 pm Title: Flashback - April to January 1991

BJ sure stood her grounds & let him go completly including the ring. I knw it had 2 be hard but she sucked it up with her tears. Maybe it was 4 the best anyway. & now she can be Bj & not just MJ's ex girlfriend or ex fiance or whatever ppl wanna consider it. He may have opened a few doors 4 her & all but now she's finding herself & being her own person without Michael's fame. I think it may have worked in her favor in a way. Some things happens 4 a reason sometimes. & roshon is a good expirence 4 her maybe it's good Bj&Mj take some time apart from eachother anyway. &btw I love the outfit :)



Author's Response:

Hey girl! Like usual thank you for reviewing, rating and reading :)

You're right. She needed to find herself and being attached to Michael wasn't helping her at all! Yeah you're right she is now a supermodel and Michael kind of help with that too...

For for Roshon is just an experience? Yoiu believe that she is meant to be with Mike right?

I know you love these outfits :D!

xoxo Annie

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 22 : It ain't over till it's over

Yay! I see that u updated :D &btw how do u post youtube videos on here? I never asked anyone before. Lolz

Author's Response:

Well my youtube is in french so'ill try to translate but basically you click on "Share" > "Insert"> you copy the code and past it on your story :)

And don't worry if when you preview it the code is still here, when you add the story the video appears!

I hope it was clear girl :)

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 22 : It ain't over till it's over

So much has gone on between bev & mike but now it's bev & roshon. I wonder how long they will last? Even tho mike had broken her heart I still believe that could be a wee bit of hope 4 them again. But atleast she moved on tho. & btw I love Lenny :D



Author's Response:

You're right on time for the next chapter i've just posted it!

Yeah you're right! Everybody thought they were perfect for each other but it seems like Beverly is made for Roshon. But who is made for her??

Yes BJ is a big girl and she is not ready to spend her entire life crying over a guy, not even over the King of Pop!

Ayyyy, you need to know that i'm in LOVE with Lenny! He is just so... I don't know! This song was perfect for BJ&Mike!

Thank you very much for always being here for rate and review my story girl!

But what do you think will happen at the Soul Train ?

xoxo Annie

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 02:48 pm Title: Prologue

One Direction fans need a good beat down. Seriously I hate deluded One D and JB fans, don't even get me started -__-

 

Lenny Kravitz  --- All I know about him is that song he made with MJ that went on to the Michael album ahah (embarrassed)


THIS GIF RIGHT HERE THOUGH *__________*

543

 

(If I dont reply back I've passed out on the floor, K?) XD

 



Author's Response:

Lenny Kravitz its... God i don't know how to describe it. You should listen to his songs. The ore famous is Are you gonna go my way :)

Me likeyyyy. It's from My Lovely One right?

Damn i'm now pregnant with twins!  haha

THAT FACE !

God he is perfection!!!

Imma pass out

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 02:31 pm Title: Prologue

LOL OMG YES THE POUT, OH DEAR LORD. Seriously that last gif slays me EACH TIME.

 

LOL Haha I remember that song, YES SHAME ON YOU.

 

(Girl... I used to have all of P Diddys songs on my phone and on CDs, and I used to be madly in love with him so I'm even worse that you ahahah. Don't tell anyone ;P)

, <33



Author's Response:

I am on your Tumblr and when I see the One Direction thing, all i said was "BITCH PLEASE!" Directionners are crazy!

HAHAHA! The unbelievable, indescribable, BABY V!!! I can't help it I love this song. Sue me!

The fact that you have all P Diddy song is okay, but in love with him? Nu-uh! Hahaha!

This gif slays me !

I'm pregnant now!

I used to be in love with Lenny Kravitz and you know what? I AM STILL IN LOVE WITH HIM! So much sexiness should be illegal

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 02:07 pm Title: Prologue

ND YES DAT PICTURE IS HOT ;P

I don't think there's anything better than MJ biting his lip... Except for him grabbing his crotch ;P lmao I will stop with the silliness now. 

XD



Author's Response:

WHAT? There's something sexier that the crotch grab and the lip bittin...

THE POUT !

And especially the one at the end of Dirty Diana!!!

SPECIAL BONUS: The lip bitting pout

There's nothing sexier!!

PS : I was listening to old song on my computer and I found myself listening to Come back to me by Vanessa Hudgens. I know the entire, shame on me.

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