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Reviewer: MichaelJacksonPassionateWriter Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2012 02:43 am Title: Fever

I didn't get an chance to hear that song or see the music video. Is it good? I loving the new story. Why no romance in here?

Author's Response:

Yes :-) It isn't quite an actual music video...it's just an entertaining scene of Beyonce singing "Fever" in a bar on the movie "The Fighting Temptations." ^_^ Have you ever seen that movie before? And I'm glad that you love it. And unfortunately, the story has no romance. It's just an inside look in the point of view of a VERY horny Michael Jackson. lol

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 10:28 pm Title: Fever

Michael is pretty bold here, I love it! This is gonna be a good one, I can tell. Can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response:

Oh yes. Mike threw all of the shyness out of the window lol. I'm glad you like it. ^_^

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 10:10 pm Title: Got Me Boiling Past A Hundred and Two

Daaaaayyyyuuuuummmmmm! Haha. They got it in! Sasha probably won't be able to walk in the a.m. That's what ya get for trying to be bold. MJ had to give it to her. :p



Author's Response:

Yes girl! Sasha is gonna have noodle legs when they get up lmbo! She learned today. Mike don't play.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 09:48 pm Title: Got Me Boiling Past A Hundred and Two

Damn!!!!! It went down! Mike is gonna get sprung. To hell with Lisa's tired ass, how is he even thinkin of her at all is beyond me. Sasha has more body, better looking, and can put it down in the bedroom. Mike is tripping. Lol. But man their sex was off the chain!!! Wow. I need some of that in my life. Lol. 



Author's Response:

lol Mike laid it on her lol. "To hell with Lisa's tired ass, how is he even thinkin of her at all is beyond me."<--lol I know right? Sasha has is the whole package. Mike do be on that other stuff though lol. "Wow. I need some of that in my life."<--You and me both! lol and thanks honey! Glad you liked it :-)

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 09:10 pm Title: Got Me Boiling Past A Hundred and Two

Ooh wee that was a lovely way to burn! Michael should just dump Lisa. Lol. You know Bey was my first concert ever? I enjoyed her. And I'm sure Michael loved this sexy performance. Lol.



Author's Response:

A lovely way indeed. And maybe he will...maybe he won't lol. And really? I would love to go to a concert of hers one day...I'm not of huge fanatic of hers but she really is a great performer and a lovely singer. *_* Mike definitely loved that performance lol He felt the burn.

Reviewer: the-dreams-i-would-dare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 08:52 pm Title: Got Me Boiling Past A Hundred and Two

I have a fucking heartbeat in my vagina. A HEARTBEAT. IN. MY. VAGINA. holy motherfucking shitballs that was SO hot. God damn it!!!!! Like...I don't even know what to say. I'm so hot and bothered right now. Those gifs were a great addition to this chapter...GOD DAMN MICHAEL WAS A BOSS HERE!!!!! Now I'm gonna be a whore all night tonight, soo that's your fault. GREAT CHAPTER OMG. P.s. the heartbeat in my vagina is slowing down. GOOD DAY TO YOU, MA'AM.

Author's Response:

lmbo! nah i'm kidding but seriously a heartbeat in your vagina....yo nasty ass lol I'm glad you liked it honey!!! Sorry for the frustration...*coughs* no I'm not. The gifs were haaawwwwttttt. Anyway, thanks my love <3

P.S. You better pleasure yourself to relieve your frustration lol I'm jk.

Reviewer: AMALuvzMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 01:01 pm Title: Fever

Oh hell to the mutha fuckin noooo Lisa did not just say her ex's name during phone sex with Mike smdh at that dirty trash bag!!! lmfaooooo XD

OMG Mike is about to get some good hot sex with Miss Sasha lol good for him he needs to get his sexual frustrations out ;)

I can't wait for the next part XD

Author's Response:

lol tecnically she's still married here but either way it was still fuckedupdotcom for her to do that. You'll find out what happens with Mike and Sasha soon *le grins* Be prepared...it will be hawwwwwt!

Reviewer: Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 03:07 am Title: Fever

Lisa triflin!!!!! Beyond triflin, seriously! Haha. Things heating up already though...Mike finna get him some Poo-Na-Ne....

This is great twin. Can't wait for the next update :D 



Author's Response:

Triflin is the word! "Mike finna get him some Poo-Na-Ne"<--cutting up! I never heard that before! Anyway, thanks for reading twin. I'll be updating soon...possibly today.

Reviewer: mrsmj2011 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 12:30 am Title: Fever

Lisa is a dumb ass bitch. I can't believe that she did him like that. But it doesn't matter cuz he is getting his desire quenched by Sasha. Great story, sissy XD



Author's Response:

Ain't it though? She ain't riiiight she ain't right lol And you're right...Mike is about to get a touch of heat from miss Sashaaaa *purs* lol thanks for reading love <3

Reviewer: Smooth_Criminal Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2012 12:25 am Title: Fever

Ooouuuuu I'm so excited for this new story shy!!! Can't wait for the best update!! :D and omg Michael IS so bold!!! I love it!!! :D keep on going! ;)



Author's Response:

*blushes* thanks honey! I'll be updating really soon. And don't ya just love his boldness? lol it's VERY attractive. ^_^

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2012 10:32 pm Title: Fever

Ooh I can't wait to see what happens in that room! Smh at Lisa. Continue! 



Author's Response:

teeeheee *_* be prepared. Lisa is wrong! lol I'll continue soon.

Reviewer: the-dreams-i-would-dare Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2012 09:11 pm Title: Fever

Omfg Lisa is a dirty hoe skankass bitch!!!!!! And yeah I could tell she was sucky as phone sex cuz...ch lmao Michael was gettin ready hahaha but poor Mike :( ooooh Sash was gettin all up into Michael!!! I love his attitude in this story...so fierce, outgoing, and sexy. Me gusta!! I wonder what they're gonna do in his hotel room...hmm...watch Peter Pan? ;) CAN'T WAIG FOR THE UPDATE! This is great!!!

Author's Response:

lol that she is! She was just terrible at the phone sex. Askin' questions and what not. She was wrong for what she did though. And Sasha is FIERCE (did you see what I did there?) Mike is definitely a bold on in this one. He really is DANGEROUS. Now you know good and well that Peter Pan is definitely out of the question lol Mike ain't got time for that. He wants to feel *in Vincent Price's voice on Thriller* the feveeerrr...cutting up! Anyway, I'll try to update soon. I'm glad ya like it. <3

Reviewer: damonikalovesmj Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2012 09:05 pm Title: Fever

I love it so far! Smh at Lisa! How the hell you gonn yell your ex-husband's name during phone sex. It screams cheating! Lol. Looks like Mike is attracted to Sasha. :D and they are bold. Lol!



Author's Response:

*_* thanks! Lisa...she ain't right. She shouldn't have even agreed to it lol. And umhm...Mike is definitely feeling Sasha! I'm glad you like it!

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