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Reviewer: Lovethe_jacksons215 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24, 2014 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

Love it when are you gonna update i love this so much even though it has 2 chapters i still love it :)

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 10, 2013 03:28 am Title: Chapter 2

I wonder if Janet is jealous. If she was then she surely wouldnt show to him.

Reviewer: Keepitinthecloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 01, 2012 03:20 am Title: Chapter 1

Thats funny. Janet and michael grindin' on each other that was nasty but it was funny

Author's Response:

Right! They were spazzed out by that, but it's cool. For now anyways. ;) Thank you for reviewing! 3>

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 17, 2012 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1

Shit just got real. Ha. Good so far. I have some ideas, but i'm not sure. I love that mob stuff. Love it. But anyway this is exciting!



Author's Response:

Thank you! XD

What are the ideas you have?

Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 16, 2012 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

Lol!

I smiled and turned around, but regretted it.
"Michael?!!!!"
"Janet?!!!!!!"
"What the hell?!!!" We both said at the same time.
Honestly it was dark in the house, so we really couldn't see each other. I knew his shoulders felt familiar.
"Ewwwwwwwwwww! Shit! This was fucking weird!!"
"Tell me about it! I can't see why any gurl would dance wit you."
"You did."
"Shut the fuck up! You know damn well as I do that that was a fucking accident. So don't even start shit," I said with my arms crossed.
"Yeah whatever. Let's just forget this ever happened, aight?"
"Whatever."

^ That's my favourite part! Lol! "Ewwwwwwwwwwww! Shit! That was fucking weird!"

I like this story already. Update update update!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! We appreciate your review! And yeah! That's my favorite part too! I laughed to myself while I was writing it. :)

Thanks again!

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