[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2012 09:49 am Title: Chapter 5
Mike and Alex are just too cute. Sam knew what she was doing when she left those condoms out for them lol She ain't slick. That's fuckedupdotcom what Prince is doing to Ash. She just needs to go ahead and leave him and file for child support. I just knew that something wasn't right about Sydney. There is no possible way that she could not like Mike lol I just hope that she doesn't try to twist the story around and make Alex think that he came on to her like Alex's father did. I hope Alex hear's Mike out. This is madness!
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2012 09:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Dang Ashley grilled the mess out of Alex. She's a pretty tough cookie. Mike is good for remaining friends with her after she hurt him that way. It's good that he's stepping in to help with her situation though. Prince is an ass for what he did. I'm glad that the meeting with the family went great for Alex. I wonder how Joe is going to take it once she meets him. I was cutting up when Mike and Randy were going at it lol Anyway, great chapter honey <3 Can't wait to read why Alex is so distant ^_^ *goes to read next chapter*
[Report This]Date: Jul 30, 2012 08:37 am Title: Chapter 3
Aww that was a cute first date. Alex needs to quit lying to herself because she knows that she's feeling Mike the same way that he's feeling her. Sam is a trip! Mike is gonna have a lot deal with with Sam if he and Alex enter a relationship. And the story he told about Brooke had me cutting up. Girl loves her Prince lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2012 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn what that girl did to Mike was fuckedupdotcom. She didn't have to play with his emotions like that. Anyway, I see that Mike and Alex are making progress by opening up to each other. :-) Alex knows that she liked that kiss. lol
[Report This]Date: Jul 29, 2012 11:08 pm Title: Prologue
This is a great start. I hope Mike rememers soon. As for the flashback, that was pretty interesting. In most cases, it always ends up being the ones you don't have an eye for that you end up liking.
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2012 08:49 am Title: Chapter 8
Lol Michael is such a horn dog :P But it's so cute he realizes he's in love with Alex. I can't wait to see how their relationship blossoms.
Date: Jul 16, 2012 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 7
Rick! The two faced bastard, Ugh. What in the world is wrong with Sydney? Alex it's time to face that you can't possibly face on your own for once. Michael loves you and it's time to place some trust in that he wouldn't think it would be a burden to help you and would do so without question. -Ends lecture to the character- lol
Or she could lie to him and go live in Encino or Neverland with him for a while, although that would be the worst thing to do that would come back to haunt her. On the lighter side, once she moved in with him Michael would never want her to leave. X3
As usual, love the update. <3
Author's Response:
I hated to turn Rick's character bad...I really liked him lol. And Sydney just has some internal issues going on. As for Alex, it's just a pride issue going on...and she just doesn't wanna seem beggy and whatnot lol. Hmm...moving in together? Interesting....
Date: Jul 16, 2012 10:32 am Title: Chapter 7
That did not just happen !! =O Oh wow. What an eventful chapter.
Can't wait to see what happens next !
Author's Response:
You know Michael has to be a drama queen! Lol, maybe they'll be best friends again soon :
[Report This]Date: Jul 16, 2012 05:41 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw snap Mike done slipped up and said he loved her. Alex better give it up soon :P
I hope his love is genuine though because what he told Ashley about guys saying they love their ladies is a little alarming.
Author's Response:
Lol, of course she's gonna give it up! Who can resist Michael though? Lol, and I think he was just talking out of his neck...you know, just saying it so he can talk Ashley out of getting married :(
Date: Jul 13, 2012 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
I thought that was gonna be Sam behind that door, but I thought she would totally flip out on Michael...huh, good thing she figured the whole thing out. :/
Ah, finally we meet Prince! :D That was really cute and Ashley finally got that 'I Love You' she's been longing for. I hope that Prince's heart is in synch with what's coming out of his mouth though. Looks like what Katherine said to Michael might be true, it must have been really hard on him to be in that situation, watching Ashley pregnant again but this time accepting the proposal from the very guy she left him for. And his girl fawning over Prince probably didn't help, as funny as that was. XD
I hope Michael's okay, and Thanks for the update ILykeCowz! :3
Author's Response:
Lol when I was writing, I was thinking of making Alex walk in...but that wouldn't comply with the direction that I wanted this story to go in. Yesss, glad you liked the proposal!! I thought it would be soooo cute to have him wait until he proposes to finally say that he loved her. And I agree with you...Michael still has something for Ashley, but hopefully that can change with him being with Alex :)
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2012 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
I agree with Katherine, I think Mike still has some unresolved feelings for Ashley. Great update!
Author's Response:
Of course he says that he doesn't have feelings for Ashley, but when you've been around somebody for as long as they have with each other, you don't have a choice but to allow him to have a piece of your heart forever. Hopefully he can get past that ^_^
Date: Jul 10, 2012 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 5
Thank you all for your reviews! I really appreciate them ^_^
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2012 08:47 am Title: Chapter 5
I just want to say that even though this story doesn't have a lot of reviews yet it's still off to a great start and I love it so far. I think Michael is hilarious in this story and it's refreshing because I've never really seen him protrayed like that.
One comment I will make is that I'm a little weary of Mike and Ashley's relationship. Even though he says they're best friends, the fact of the matter is he was once in love with her and your feelings never really completely go away. They even conceived a baby together so they have a lot of history together and I'm sure Mike will always have a soft spot for her in his heart. I hope this doesn't cost a lot of conflict in the future between Alex and Ashley, especially if Mike is in a situation where he has to choose between the two.
Anyways, keep up the good work and keep it coming!
Date: Jul 09, 2012 10:21 am Title: Chapter 5
I like this story, a lot. And what the hell is going on with Sydney? The way she pounced on Michael was completely random and soo uncalled for. If that's who I think it is at the door then...it's about to go down. XD
Date: Jul 09, 2012 02:33 am Title: Chapter 5
LOVE IT!!! MORE PLEASE!!!