[Report This]Date: Mar 16, 2012 11:16 am Title: Chapter 6
AWWWW this chapter was very sweet! It came out great! Good job girly
Author's Response:
thanks, i apreciate your support and thanks for your help im becoming better each time.
:):)
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2012 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 4
awwwww! Michael is so sweet to her. he treats Nyla like a queen. i can't stand eva ugh! please update soon! :)
Author's Response:
oh yes more is coming so stay tuned:)!
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2012 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving this story!
I love Nyla!She's so sweet!
Thank u!
Author's Response:
yeah i like Nyla to:) more to come.
[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2012 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1
I've read all the chapters and your story is REALLY good!
Please post more soon!
Thanks!
Author's Response:
thank very much and yes i updated with two chapters. and i got another coming in a few days. thanks for anjoying :)
Date: Mar 11, 2012 05:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I really do love this story it's great.keep up the great work.
Author's Response:
thank you so much:)
[Report This]Date: Mar 07, 2012 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Alright, in the first chapter in the chapter notes, it says that you were using your phone to type this, so I can see how it's significantly harder to type.
But I'm still going to give you the honest review.
The first paragraph of the story was a major run-on. It was just one sentence. There's also no capitalization. There are some spelling mistakes too so watch out for that.
But because you're on your phone, I'm definitely not going to judge all of your writting by this piece. I'll probably check out another one. But keep the things I mentionned above in mind!
Author's Response:
thank youuu sooo much for your honest opinon i did all my stories from mobile cos i really don't have much time to stay on the computer that much so i lack perfect writing when it comes down to me wrting from my phone but i will keep in mind of what u just said to me about how i had one sentence i should of seperated them.
[Report This]Date: Mar 06, 2012 10:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Love it! Just wonderful
Author's Response:
thank u very much! :) im glad u like it.
[Report This]Date: Feb 28, 2012 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
i like this one so far :) mikey is a sweety on this one too.
Author's Response:
thanks for enjoying and yes he's so sweet and loving. :) more to come soon
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2012 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow i like this already i hope you update this one soon.
Author's Response:
yep i will soon thanks for your review. :)
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2012 11:55 am Title: Chapter 1
i like this so far and michael is really nice to nyla hope to read more soon.
Author's Response:
thanks for your review and yes more to come in the near future.
Date: Feb 17, 2012 04:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Dont get me wrong! Your story seems to be good but you should put some paragraphs ... is hard to read this way.
Author's Response:
thanks for trying to read my story and yeah i been doing this from my mobile which its not letting paragraphs go through some how but once i get a chance to use the computer i will edit it actually all my stories i will i just have time to be on the computer like that but i will definitly fix them thanks for your honest opinion :)