Date: Jul 28, 2013 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Suffering
If anyone is here (I don't know why anyone would be though, this story is really old and hasn't been written on in like a year) I just want to let you know, that this is my new account.
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2012 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Suffering
Hello, Elvirus!
My friend Leahluv has absolutely GUSHED over your story and I checked it out. This...is incredible. I'm sorry I didn't find this sooner!! It's so detailed, absolutely incredible and I can't wait to read the next few chapters!! My story She's Out Of My Life is gonna have to wait until I finish yours!! Great job, girl! You just got yourself a new reader!! :))
Author's Response:
Hey there! :D
She did that? That's so sweet of her! And that's so sweet of you that you checked it out! :D Mj fans are always so sweet lol.
Omg thank you so much! You're sooo nice! I'm giggling all over the place right now lol xD
I just HAVE to read your story too! Thank you sooo much for being so kind and thank you so much for reading!
I'm sitting here with the biggest smile after reading your reviews. I don't know what to say! I'm just so happy you liked it!
You and Leah give me a lot of confidence, thank you!
Lots of love... Elvira <3
[Report This]Date: May 23, 2012 02:24 am Title: Chapter 1 - Suffering
Oh my God they're sooo cute! I love this story so much!! Can't wait for the next part please update asap :D :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :D You're so nice!
Thank you! <3
[Report This]Date: Feb 17, 2012 06:41 am Title: Chapter 1 - Suffering
Ahhh i am loving it so far!! I feel so bad about the state Kate is in because of her past relationship, she is constantly living in fear and its having a major effect on her and her life...
And Michaels love for Diana, awww even in real life he had a MAJOR thing for her like he had said in th Ebony interview and in his autobiography... Anyways i hope Michael does move on from her because she doesnt like him in that way... Update soon love! :)
Author's Response:
Yeeeyyyy, Thank you SO Much Sabrina! I feel so blessed by your comment! You seem so humble! =D
And I just wants to say Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for reading!
Ikr, Kate's ex really affected a lot. And In her situation it would be really hard to move on from what have happened, Since he swore he would come back. And Michael also needs to move on, but from Diana. I feel really sorry for him :( It's not easy to be in love with someone you just can't have.
Anyway, Thank you so much again! Lot's of love //Elvira
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2012 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Suffering
Oh......my.......GAWSH!
I literally squealed when I saw that you had posted your story. Like, OH MY GOSH!!!!!!! SO MUCH EXCITEMENT!
Anyway now that i've calmed down.
Elvirus, I knew that you were an amazing READER..but you are an INCREDIBLE WRITER!!!!!!!
Like, I am just....stunned by how incredible this chapter was.
The story is interesting, descriptive, and just has this...AMAZING flow to it and you pull emotions out flawlessly.
My heart ACHES for Michael when he's with Diana and I can FEEL Kate's frustration in her POV.
Ugh, I AM HOOKED ALREADY!
....AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
<3 Leah
Author's Response:
OMG Thank you soooo muuuch Leah =D
And I'm SOOO glad you like my story! You're just amazing!
Wiiiiiie! I got a lot nervous when I was going to post this xD I was thinking of you, and how you would react!
I was like: "What if she hates it?" And I'm so relieved that you like it. Cause I knew you were going to read my story.
Anyway I LOVE you and your amazing words. And I hope you wants to keep on reading my story, Cause you know I will keep on reading yours! Thank you SO Much for reading and leaving a response!
LOL, when I was reading your review I got crazy and just started laughing like crazy xD I know I'm a dork, but STILL!
Thanks again! Lot's of love //Elvira