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Reviewer: mranda213 Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2012 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 1

congrads with the baby

 

 

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2012 10:19 am Title: Chapter 10

I loved the first version so much and I love this part even more. So glad Felicia is better can't wait for more! So glad you did an alternate version!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for continuing to read. I'm going to try to keep this alternate ending interesting.

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2012 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 10

I'm loving this! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Just a warning, things may slow down after tomorrow because I have to start writing on it again.

Reviewer: mikeslady1074 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2012 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 10

I love this story and I love this alternate ending.  Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: Thanks so much. There's just a little bit left before I pick up on writing it again.

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 12, 2012 07:05 am Title: Chapter 2

Uhh Ohhhh. Jessica seems like trouble!



Author's Response: Keep your eyes on her!

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 09, 2012 11:39 am Title: Chapter 3

I am so excited you decided to post an alternate ending! I love those cute little family moments. And can you say psychopath? I wonder what Jessica's gonna do to get her "family."



Author's Response: There are parts of this ending that I really love b/c I do wanted Michael to have as normal an existence out of the spotlight as possible. And Jessica? Certifiable. Keep an eye on her.

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