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Reviewer: I You We Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 09:52 pm Title: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

This STORY is so wonderful... your writing like a professional writer!!! Though they arent even touching each other this is so romantic!!! go on like that <3 Rose.



Author's Response:

Hey ROSE :))) Awww... girl you're always so supportive and sweet. Thanks a billion, it really means a LOT to me! <3 <3 you feel romantic? i'm so happy you're feeling like that!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 08:20 pm Title: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

I'm so excited! Michael and Carolyn need to be together! They're so cute. Hopefully the lack of distance will quickly blossom their romance. Can't wait for an update.



Author's Response:

Hey girl :)) ikr? ;) They are so sweet together arent they? lol! Thanks a billion hum for taking your time and reviewing! It means so damn much to me :D haha, lets see... where they all gonna end-up! I'll try to update ASAP luv and Thanks for your patience... ^_^ Much Love, Monisha :P 

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 05:41 pm Title: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

YAAYYYAAAY!!! Michael and Carolyn are going to meet!!!! WONDERful Chapter Monisha!!! Update ASAP please... <3



Author's Response:

Hey girl!!!! Thanks A LOT! LOL! Yeah they are... Finally! I need to make the story go more fastly lol! let me know if it is getting boring ;) Aww... Thanks again luv! I'll try to. Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 05:41 pm Title: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

YAAYYYAAAY!!! Michael and Carolyn are going to meet!!!! WONDERful Chapter Monisha!!! Update ASAP please... <3

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 04:27 pm Title: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

Mike and Carolyn are cute!! I can't wait for them to meet up agian.!!

Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Lol Arent they? ;) Thanks a billion hun... it really means a lot to me!!! Lets wait & see :D Much Love, Monisha :p

Reviewer: Ellah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2012 03:00 pm Title: Chapter A (6): Talks Till Dawn: Unchained Melody

Good job!!!! :) i liked the song its so perfect girl... keep it up! cant wait for the next chapter! seriously what gonna happen after they meet? ahhh!!! :D



Author's Response:

Hey Ellah....... Thanks a lot!!! It really means a lot to me girl! Its a great song isnt it? haha I appreciate your curiousness! lol! Lets wait & See ;) Thanks again hun... for reading and reviewing!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 23, 2012 02:32 pm Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

GIRL I NEED AN UPDATE!!!!!! :D



Author's Response:

Sorry girl I'm working on it.... But I didnt finish it fully ;( I'll try to update very soon for you....:) Now, please accept this Teddy :P Much Love, Monisha :P

Teddy

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2012 09:55 am Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

WOW .... just ...WOOOOWWWW....

This story is SO DAMN well-written, its like to read a book from a successful author in " real life " ... your story catched me, now I think is the time to say : I'm addicted

I so look foreward that Carolyn and Michael meet again, or talk again <3 This chapter was amazing, you have got so much talent in writing, it was like to whatch a movie *:* I love this story, you're gonna be SOOO successful, I think you'll come in the TOP 10 most reviewed or most read stories, you have 4 chapters and already 44 reviews !!! hahah I have 38 chapters and 56 reviews ^^

thank you for writing this story, better that TV and mum isnt mad at me that I always just whatch tv ^^



Author's Response:

HI Lisa!!! Girl I was waiting for your review lol! Thanks a lot Luv :) 

Woww!!! I'm SO glad to hear this girl.... It really means a lot to me!!!

I want them to meet again too, So Dont worry! They are going to meet again soooooon! ;) Awwww.... Thats so sweet of you Lizzy!  :) ^_^ Top 10! huh?!! You're so sweet *mwah!* Thank you love... <3 Dont worry girl, reviews doesnt make a story good! There are so many good stories in this website which lacks reviews!!! When I got myself out from this current trouble, I'm going to read all stories and review :D

Aw Your Most Welcome hun :) wow Thanks, I really appreciate it. Haha you're right! My mom also use the reason of watching TV to be mad of me lol! Much Love, Monisha :P 

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 10:20 pm Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

I love this story! It is so cute!

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot luv, it really means a lot to me!!! I'm glad you like it... :) Next Chapter contains phone conversations :D I want them meet again soon lol! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: DreamingOfMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 03:37 pm Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

Hey Thanks for the review!!!!!!!!!!! It reallly means a lot to me coming from you! yeah girl,i havent updated cause i kinda lost inspiration to that story :((((

Do you mind co-writing with me? I've asked so many writers and they all cant :( If you can please co-write with me, i really appreciate that!! :D

Wow.. your name is also Monisha?! what a co-incidence!!! My sister's name is also Monisha :P Thats why i used that name :)



Author's Response:

Your most welcome love.... dont mention it :) Oh... I see. Yeah its really tough when you have writer's block right? Yeah Sure!!! I love to... but updates may not be often :( But I love to co-write with you girl.... ;P 

LOL! Yep! your sister's name is also Monisha??? thats great!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: NancylovesMichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 01:06 am Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

Wow girl Awesome!!! I'm addicted to this story please go on... I feel like seeing the real Michael Jackson! I love the way you describing about all the characters like his brothers, father, mother...etc. This's the first story in this website which talks about his family. I know that it was a great time of pain for the Jackson family. Poor Michael... Jermaine's and Michael's relationship is explained well. I think this story is going to be very successful!!! <3



Author's Response:

Hey Nancy... Aw thanks a lot girl! I'm so glad to hear that... wow, you do? Thats so sweet of you girl :) Thanks, I thought it would bore you, but i'm so glad to hear that you like it!! really? I'm HaPpY! lol! Yeah girl you're right! Especially Michael! :/ God, what a obedient kid he was?! right? I would never do anything that I dont want to, even if my father want me to ;) well we all are lol!  Thanks again love, Jermaine plays important role right? ^_^ WOW Girl you're so sweet and saying all sweet things!!!!!!! Love you girl <3 <3 <3 Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: IAmOnlyLove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 01:00 am Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

Great Update! and the way you described Joseph is very real!!! good job... continue! please update, i cant wai to see what happens b/w Michael and Carolyn :D



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot girl. I mean it!!!    I'll continue and I'll update soon!!! Thanks for reading & reviewing.... Lets wait and see!!! Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: I You We Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 12:11 am Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

I LOVED this chapter!!! Your writing so perfectly, I feel like seeing a movie before my eyes! Great story girl... keep it up!!! Cant wait for the next chapter <3 Rose



Author's Response:

Hey Rose!!! Thanks a lot girl.... It means a lot to me! lol! You're so sweet and encouraging! I'll update ASAP :) Much Love, Monish :P

Reviewer: Michael_Is_Forever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

OMG, I haven't reviewed this in forever, i'm so sorry girl :P Ugh, i LOVE it, youur writing is so professional, which makes it even better ! 

I can't wait to see how Carolyn's and Michael's relationship progresses. <3

 

your doing so good, ugh i can't wait for the next chapter [:



Author's Response:

Hellooooo Christi, I missed you girl!!! Thats okay but I'm so glad you're back!!! Aw Thanks so much love, it really means a lot to me :)

Lets wait & see ;) <3 <3

Thank You pyt, I'll try to update soon :D Much Love, Monisha :P

Reviewer: Mjaxrox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 17, 2012 02:18 pm Title: Chapter A (5): Time After Time: Emotions & Confessions

I'm loving this so far! I can't wait to see how Michael and Carolyn's relationship progresses. Keep up the good work. I'm so anxious for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey girl!!! I missed you so glad to see you again :) Thanks a lot love, it really means a lot to me! lets wait and see ;) Thanks again, pyt... I appreciate it! Much Love, Monisha :P

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