[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2012 01:29 am Title: Chapter 4: Jake
I love yor story so far and i enjoy yor writing style. Your Michael is amazingly in character, i get lost in your story while reading.
I find that pairing very interesting ! ok when Raine and Michael are the suspected couple. The age gap is huge but i doesn´t matter like i said before, Tatum and Michael... and when i´m properly informed, she was 12 and he was 17... and he said ( in an Interview or so ) that SHE did all that sexual stuff to him, and Michael was scared to death... scared because he’d never done anything like that.... It would be very interesting if Michael and Raine would explore each other their sexuality and maybe could learn from each other.( hint hint !!)... hmm only my suggestion.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it.
Anyway, I feel like you're reading my mind. I'm really considering doing that. I just didn't want anyone to feel that Mike was in the wrong but you're right. He was with Tatum and she was 12 or 13 at the time they went out or whatever. I'll think about having something go I between the two of them. As right now though, I'm not too sure. I don't even believe her mind has gone that far yet. Maybe when school starts she'll start to REALLY wonder about the opposite sex.
[Report This]Date: Feb 12, 2012 04:43 am Title: Chapter 3: The Encounter
Very interesting story ! The age difference reminds me slighly at the relationship between Tatum and Michael. Very intriguing, please keep going !
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll update it tonight
Date: Jan 28, 2012 11:16 am Title: Chapter 3: The Encounter
Their encounter was very interesting, in a park at night .... Michael should be surprised she did not know him.
Her mother will beat her why? She is angry with her r03;r03;husband and daughter will beat in? Poor girl, her father traveled she now alone.
Great update!
Author's Response:
Oh he was. Believe me, he really was.
The reasons behind her mother's actions will surface eventully.
Date: Jan 28, 2012 09:42 am Title: Chapter 3: The Encounter
Wow :)
Date: Jan 24, 2012 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 2: We Don't Need You
Great update!
Poor Raine is suffering, that his father will be out for a long time?
Date: Jan 24, 2012 05:14 am Title: Chapter 2: We Don't Need You
It's very good :) keeping working on it I love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jan 23, 2012 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 2: We Don't Need You
Continueeeeee as soon as possible !
Author's Response:
Will do!
Date: Jan 23, 2012 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 1: Rapper's Delight
Great start, I liked.....
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: Jan 21, 2012 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1: Rapper's Delight
its good :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2012 04:45 pm Title: Introduction
Good start :-)
Author's Response:
Thanx
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2012 04:40 pm Title: Introduction
I love this story! Keep it up! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you! I definitely will.
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2012 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Rapper's Delight
SO good! Continue as soon as possible :)
Date: Jan 20, 2012 01:36 pm Title: Introduction
Yeah u should
Author's Response:
I sure will. I'm working on the next chapter as we speak, well type lol.
Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 12:23 am Title: Introduction
You. Are. Writing. A. New. Story?!?!?!!
No.
No waaaaay.
AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH! I am so excited. I lovvvvve the intro. Seems like this is going to be sooooo interesting. I just, ack.
Love it so much.
YEEESSSSSS!!!!!! :D
Author's Response:
Yea dude!
The idea for this just slapped me in the face one night and I just had to write everything down! This is gonna be a funny one. Hopefully it's a successful as Closer Than Close.
Thanks for reviewing Leah
Much L.O.V.E.