Date: Feb 05, 2018 08:47 pm Title: Get It Together
I really enjoyed rereading this one ππΎ
Author's Response:
Awww thank you, love! <333
Date: Oct 12, 2017 09:37 am Title: Not Happenin' Any Time Soon
Obsessed with this story !!
Author's Response:
Awww. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing! <333
Date: Sep 12, 2017 07:46 am Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
Rashad is such a punk ass Tweety Bird head havin ass bitch. Michael didn't mean any harm and I hate when Zaria hops on his ass like that. Like she hasn't made mistakes. I don't want Michael to feel like he can't do anything with Riq since he's not his dad, and Zaria's delivery was a bit harsh. Heffa gon make me slap her high yellow ass! And yassss at Rih, I mean 'Ayanna' lol. Looks like Zaria has made a new friend. Anyway, I do wonder what will happen next in her lil modeling career or whatever, shall be interesting.
Author's Response:
Every time you call him a Tweety Bird, I cackle lol. And yeah, Zaria was a little hard on him but she was scared. She gotta learn how to make better choices with her words when she's emotional like that. Poor Michael didn't have to get fussed at like that :(
"And yassss at Rih, I mean 'Ayanna' lol. Looks like Zaria has made a new friend."<--lol yes, indeed!!
But there is more to comeeee. Thanks for the review!!
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2017 03:47 pm Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
I missed daddy Michaeeeel, he's so cute I cry π I knew Michael was gonna get in trouble as soon as he said he was going to the jewelry store! Poor Riq was so confused lol But bye at Michael making Riq promise not to tell his mother about it tsk tskkk. I wonder if Riq will accidentally mention that promise later on. I know Zaria will flip her shit on Michael even more for that. Rashad needs to go, along with his little fiancé too π‘πΌ Can't stand either of them smh. And my god Michael and his clingy ass!!! He's a man in love, I can't blame him lol but he doesn't need to be up Zar's ass 24/7 πππ oh and I deadass though we were about to have another problem like with Tatiana with this Ayanna girl when Zaria was like "it's a date" π ANYWHO, great update. Can't wait for moreeee
Author's Response:
Daddy Michael is the best *gushes*
"I knew Michael was gonna get in trouble as soon as he said he was going to the jewelry store!"<--That was a given, wasn't it? lol He tried it. Little Enrique didn't know what to do lol. Poor thing.
"I wonder if Riq will accidentally mention that promise later on. I know Zaria will flip her shit on Michael even more for that."<--
Not you including the fiancé in your hate for Rashad lol. I can't with you. And you're right. Michael can't be up Zaria's ass 24/7 lol. He gotta let her booty breathe every once in a while.
"I deadass though we were about to have another problem like with Tatiana with this Ayanna girl when Zaria was like "it's a date"<--lol. Nah! Yana is far from Tatitana lol
But thank you for the review, my looooove <333
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2017 02:00 pm Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
How did I know Yana was gonna be portrayed by my Wife? Lol... I feel like it's a small tribute to her tho, since she just released her new makeup line.
It's cool that you incorporated the story of Michael almost getting arrested at Zales. People rarely talk about that in their own stories. Also, thanks for leaving Jimmy's jug head ass out of it. It means a lot, girlie.
Rashad needs to chill out and leave Zaria alone. He's lucky that she even lets him be around Riq. If it were me, Rashad wouldn't even be in the picture and I would make sure of it.
Great update!
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2017 02:00 pm Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
How did I know Yana was gonna be portrayed by my Wife? Lol... I feel like it's a small tribute to her tho, since she just released her new makeup line.
It's cool that you incorporated the story of Michael almost getting arrested at Zales. People rarely talk about that in their own stories. Also, thanks for leaving Jimmy's jug head ass out of it. It means a lot, girlie.
Rashad needs to chill out and leave Zaria alone. He's lucky that she even lets him be around Riq. If it were me, Rashad wouldn't even be in the picture and I would make sure of it.
Great update!
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2017 02:00 pm Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
How did I know Yana was gonna be portrayed by my Wife? Lol... I feel like it's a small tribute to her tho, since she just released her new makeup line.
It's cool that you incorporated the story of Michael almost getting arrested at Zales. People rarely talk about that in their own stories. Also, thanks for leaving Jimmy's jug head ass out of it. It means a lot, girlie.
Rashad needs to chill out and leave Zaria alone. He's lucky that she even lets him be around Riq. If it were me, Rashad wouldn't even be in the picture and I would make sure of it.
Great update!
Date: Sep 10, 2017 02:00 pm Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
How did I know Yana was gonna be portrayed by my Wife? Lol... I feel like it's a small tribute to her tho, since she just released her new makeup line.
It's cool that you incorporated the story of Michael almost getting arrested at Zales. People rarely talk about that in their own stories. Also, thanks for leaving Jimmy's jug head ass out of it. It means a lot, girlie.
Rashad needs to chill out and leave Zaria alone. He's lucky that she even lets him be around Riq. If it were me, Rashad wouldn't even be in the picture and I would make sure of it.
Great update!
Author's Response:
lol awww. That was your Riri intuition kicking in lol. It's so crazy because I found out about her makeup line after writing this lol. It was fate. And I definitely had to include the Zales stroy because I just feel like that's one of the stories that's so ridiculous lol. Idk which was worse, Michael thinking he wouldn't be looking suspicious or everyone's reactions after finding out it was him and the fact that it was over the news smh. The man could never catch a break. Poor thing. And I definitely had to leave Jimmy's fake ass, head ass, disrespectful ass out of that. He won't be making any more appearances in this story, ever. That bitch. As for Rashad, he stays trying Zaria. He gotta learn to stay in his place smh. But thanks for the review!!
Date: Aug 21, 2017 06:27 pm Title: Get It Together
Can we expect a new chapter anytime soon??
It feels like forever since the last update... I really miss reading this story.. *ugly sobbing*
Author's Response:
Hi honey! I'm sooooo sorry for the long wait but my life has been so busy lately with school and work. However, I have been working on a pretty lengthy update for a while now so hopefully I'll be able to give that to you guys as soon as I can. I promise! πππ
P.S. I appreciate the love! Believe me, I miss updating and reading you guys' reviews too π©π©π©
Date: Jul 02, 2017 07:26 pm Title: My Love and Me
I've read this chapter over and over again and it's probably one of my favorite chapters of any story on here. Zaria and Michael are just perfect together, as is your writing.
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story and particularly this chapter lol. It was one of my favorites to write! Thanks for reading/reviewing! <33
Date: Jun 10, 2017 12:47 pm Title: Get It Together
10/10 recommend this story, I really enjoyed it!! So good :)
Author's Response:
Awww. Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you're enjoying it!!! And thanks for reading/reviewing! <333
Date: May 23, 2017 08:31 pm Title: Can You Come Over?
So I binged this and I love itβ€
Author's Response:
Oh my god! lol A new reader! Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Date: May 17, 2017 11:51 am Title: It's A Secret
Wow, she's really doing this whole punishment thing, that's gotta be tough... :)
Author's Response:
She is lol and I know right?!
Date: May 17, 2017 09:34 am Title: Please Don't Hate Me
Definitely too good for him, he's been acting like a complete schmuck!
Author's Response:
She really is. He doesn't deserve her smh.
Date: May 16, 2017 10:23 am Title: You Better Give Credit 'Cause It's Nothing Coming Down Your Way
this has got to be one of the best stories on this site.
so glad that she's doing much better!
Excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Awww thank you so much! That really means a lot. And I am too! Zaria is working on being herself again. *praise* And I hope you enjoy it!