Date: Nov 27, 2019 05:30 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
I’m honestly just waiting for the next chapter. I check everyday to see if you did. π…
Awww. I'm gonna update soon. It's just a lot has been going on in my personal life and I had to take a hiatus. But thank you for reading my story!
Date: Dec 27, 2018 01:08 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
Yassss I’m late as hell reading this but yass! I see this was published on my bday too but I was out of the country. I’m glad Zaria realized she was being an ass of a wife. Sis know she needed to clean that up as good as Michael is to her. Shoot he needs to be my husband lol. This was good chapter and I loved the trading places concept. She let him shoot her club up so I’m assuming sis must be watching that period app on her phone like a hawk (I bet she has one lol). No ovulation week huh Zar? I see you sis lol. Plan B game must be strong lol. But this was cute. And I am here for Michael being inspired to make In the Closet!!! And before I forget, lemme just say I am glad Diana’s bushy wig, lipstick stained teef ass got clocked and rightfully so. Michael handled his biz cuz lawd knows if Zar would’ve had to, Diana woulda been picking that nappy wig up off the floor, okuuurrr?? Lol anyway, this was a good update and I’m happy my two babies are doing well.
Date: Aug 21, 2018 04:55 pm Title: Disappointments and Confusions
Im with Michael. I have a dry opinion of Rene. Whenever I include him in my Janet stories its not for very long.
Michael knows best and he's definitely not someone who would be missed in any story lol
Date: Jul 30, 2018 11:59 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
Wooooo an update!!! You did not disappoint, my love. You included lots of fluff and a little angst, always a good combo. Diana is a damn MESS! I’m so glad Michael put her in her place. She needs to learn respect at her big age smh. Anywho, look at Michael though staying in his lane like a good boy π Zaria wanted him to mind his business and that’s exactly what he was gonna do lol also, Tiahna is the ultimate troll. She’s a perfect mix of her parents. The date night was super cuuuute. Of course you had to include some nasty magic making π They can’t control themselves. (And I caught the reference to that particular ~experimental sex~ they had not too long ago π‘π‘π) You need help lol ANYWAYYYY... Great chapter!!! Can’t wait for the next one
Well thank you, my love.
"You included lots of fluff and a little angst, always a good combo."<--I try lol balance is key!
Diana needs to go on somewhere with her petty ass lol She definitely wasn't expecting Michael reading her like a book.
"Anywho, look at Michael though staying in his lane like a good boy Zaria wanted him to mind his business and that’s exactly what he was gonna do lol"<--Zaria got what she asked for lol. Michael was like, <--
^^^ "Not today, Satan."
Tiahna is definitely her parents child lol. As for date night, I really enjoyed writing that especially at the diner but I really wanted to add more. Maybe we'll get more in a flashback or something later. And of course the rabbits had to make their magic lol wouldn't be right if they didn't.
" (And I caught the reference to that particular ~experimental sex~ they had not too long ago"<--
^^^ I knew you would lol
But anyway, thanks for reading babeeeee. I'm going to try to update really soon.
Date: Jul 30, 2018 01:24 am Title: Battle of the Lovelies/Trading Places
I missed you so much! This chapter gave me too much life, from Kari being a troll, Mr. Brown's cameo, to mentioning my favorite show! They made me so happy with how in love they are. Damn near made me wanna find somebody and settle down XD.
Great update, as always.
Aww thank you, love! I missed you guys too! Kari is a little troll lol. She definitely gets that from her parents. Mr. Brown's cameo was my fave to write lol I love him.
"They made me so happy with how in love they are. Damn near made me wanna find somebody and settle down "<--I know right?! I'm jealous of them lol
But I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the review! <333
Date: Sep 12, 2017 07:46 am Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
Rashad is such a punk ass Tweety Bird head havin ass bitch. Michael didn't mean any harm and I hate when Zaria hops on his ass like that. Like she hasn't made mistakes. I don't want Michael to feel like he can't do anything with Riq since he's not his dad, and Zaria's delivery was a bit harsh. Heffa gon make me slap her high yellow ass! And yassss at Rih, I mean 'Ayanna' lol. Looks like Zaria has made a new friend. Anyway, I do wonder what will happen next in her lil modeling career or whatever, shall be interesting.
Every time you call him a Tweety Bird, I cackle lol. And yeah, Zaria was a little hard on him but she was scared. She gotta learn how to make better choices with her words when she's emotional like that. Poor Michael didn't have to get fussed at like that :(
"And yassss at Rih, I mean 'Ayanna' lol. Looks like Zaria has made a new friend."<--lol yes, indeed!!
But there is more to comeeee. Thanks for the review!!
Date: Sep 10, 2017 03:47 pm Title: Unintentional Revealings and Damning Consequences
I missed daddy Michaeeeel, he's so cute I cry π I knew Michael was gonna get in trouble as soon as he said he was going to the jewelry store! Poor Riq was so confused lol But bye at Michael making Riq promise not to tell his mother about it tsk tskkk. I wonder if Riq will accidentally mention that promise later on. I know Zaria will flip her shit on Michael even more for that. Rashad needs to go, along with his little fiancé too π‘πΌ Can't stand either of them smh. And my god Michael and his clingy ass!!! He's a man in love, I can't blame him lol but he doesn't need to be up Zar's ass 24/7 πππ oh and I deadass though we were about to have another problem like with Tatiana with this Ayanna girl when Zaria was like "it's a date" π ANYWHO, great update. Can't wait for moreeee
Daddy Michael is the best *gushes*
"I knew Michael was gonna get in trouble as soon as he said he was going to the jewelry store!"<--That was a given, wasn't it? lol He tried it. Little Enrique didn't know what to do lol. Poor thing.
"I wonder if Riq will accidentally mention that promise later on. I know Zaria will flip her shit on Michael even more for that."<--
Not you including the fiancé in your hate for Rashad lol. I can't with you. And you're right. Michael can't be up Zaria's ass 24/7 lol. He gotta let her booty breathe every once in a while.
"I deadass though we were about to have another problem like with Tatiana with this Ayanna girl when Zaria was like "it's a date"<--lol. Nah! Yana is far from Tatitana lol
But thank you for the review, my looooove <333