Date: May 16, 2017 10:23 am Title: You Better Give Credit 'Cause It's Nothing Coming Down Your Way
this has got to be one of the best stories on this site.
so glad that she's doing much better!
Excited for the next chapter
Awww thank you so much! That really means a lot. And I am too! Zaria is working on being herself again. *praise* And I hope you enjoy it!
Date: May 15, 2017 12:03 pm Title: No Matter What It Takes
I really hope she gets better soon. Michael is obviously suffering too, not to mention the baby...
Let's hope she does. That baby really needs Zaria. They both are suffering and handling it and completely different ways :/
Date: May 15, 2017 11:53 am Title: She's Killing Herself
What a terrible thing to have to go through and delicate subject to write about, and you're handling it really well! Great job!
It really is. That was my tougest chapter to have written as of yet. I was struggling so hard trying to write it out because I felt like I wasn't executing it the way that I wanted so it took numerous tries to make it how I wanted it. Not to mention just the thought of having to put myself in her shoes...it was realy tough. But thank you so much!
Date: May 15, 2017 11:44 am Title: This Is Gonna Be Harder Than I Thought
she's really going thru post partum depression, isn't she? Hope she gets help! great chap
Yeah, she's definitely taking that pretty hard. Let's hope that she does! And thanks dear!
Date: May 15, 2017 11:36 am Title: We're Gonna Make It Through
Absolutely heartbreaking, you really captured the despair of that moment!
That chapter was one of my top hardest to write. I was legit getting emotional but thank you! That was definitely my aim so I'm glad that you think that I was able to execute it well. <333
Date: May 15, 2017 05:44 am Title: It's Great to Be Here/I Need You...More Than Anything
Wow, that was incredibly moving and beautiful. Such a well written chapter!
Thanks so much! That was honestly one of my favorite yet most challenging chapters to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: Mar 12, 2017 01:05 am Title: Pure Gold
I'm back to this story again:))) I started like a week ago and went to where I left off which was like ten chapters ago. It was so worth it. Zaria starting her dream career and Michael is retiring🙄 lol Enrique being a good big brother and Kari saying words😱 The feeeels😩 Great overall story as always. :)
I'm sooooo late replying to this review! But yes, Zaria is finally getting what she wants! *praise* Michael and his "retiring" lol We all know how that goes. Enrique and Kari are such precious little kids, right? lol But thanks for the review! <3