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Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2011 11:12 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh My God! I am so glad I know some French right now!! lol
Damn, I wish Michael knew it too so he could understand what she said and just do it..
So they're confused hah... Looks like they're starting to move past the just-friends-stage quickly!
Too bad he can't take her to the dance bcuz of Joseph... Damn that man always comin in the way of everything!! xD
Great job girl!

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2011 10:25 am Title: Chapter 7

Oh my GOSH! they nearly kissed this time for real... They're getting closer ;D
Until poor Mikey had a small 'problem' down south, bahaha x'D
I am so loving this story! Just hoping Blythe's not gonna come between them in the nearby future..
Her or anyone else for that matter.
I also feel a real strong emotional bond forming between these two lovebirds.
When Keisha mentioned how Michael's eyes were just like her father's, for some reason I got shivers..
I can imagine how much that must mean to her.
Loving this, again! Can't wait to find out where this is gonna lead to. x

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2011 09:43 am Title: Chapter 6

Aww, they are so cute!! Almost sharing their first kiss together.. ;D
I can't believe Blythe though! I'm gonna agree with Michael on this; she's just  being jealous!
But that was plain cruel of her. Especially when she mentioned Ki's father!
Even tho in the end it did only serve to bring Mike and Ki closer together..
I can rly see this going somewhere great! Wonder what that last sentence meant tho..
Why would it be a lie? Maybe cause he wants to be more than friends?..
Guess I'll just have to read the rest and see..
I'm really enjoying your story girl! Great job!

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2011 01:16 am Title: Chapter 17

Okay first of all, it's been a while since I checked down here since I was rly starting to lose all hope that you'd ever update again.

But when I woke up this morning, this may sound weird but whatever haha, I just felt a sudden urge to check again and see if maybe you had updated..

AND YOU DID!!!

I'm feeling SO happy right now! you have no idea....lol

Okay so now I'm gonna go and actually READ it x'D I just got so excited I had to let you know before I did lol x3

Thank you! This story rocks! You're a kick-ass writer girl!



Author's Response:

Thank you SOOO much! Your excitement makes ME excited!  LOL

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2011 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 17

uh oh i hope joe doesnt hurt mike

Reviewer: jsmoove87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2011 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 17

Oh yeeeeah.nice chapter girl! One Love P.J.

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 08:30 pm Title: Chapter 16

awwwww fave chapter

Reviewer: Sweetdreams345 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 16

You are such a great writer! I love the way you describe such simple things and make them sound so special! Please more

Reviewer: jsmoove87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whooooa son! Ki better chill with all that >:-/...ha kickass update One Love,P.J.

Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 15

I don't understand why your not getting more reviews.  It's such a sweet story!



Author's Response:

It doesn't bother me. I write because I love Mike, and I love to write.  Besides, I've earned my stripes, believe me.  ;-)

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2011 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 15

dang really ki???

Reviewer: mjjfan4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2011 03:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is such a sweet first love story. 

Reviewer: jsmoove87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2011 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1

YESH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You're back!! Great story as always girl. :) One Love,P.J.

Author's Response:

What's poppin' pumpkin!  LOL @ YESH...that's hilar.  *waves*

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 09, 2011 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 13

love this

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 05, 2011 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

I can't tell you how much I enjoy this story.

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