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Reviewer: mjiscool Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2013 06:31 am Title: Chapter 7

OMG great chapter please continue

Reviewer: mjiscool Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2013 06:23 am Title: Chapter 3

I belive you girl they are so not crazy. 

Reviewer: mjiscool Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 02, 2013 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1

It's not horrible chapter i like it soo far

Reviewer: Sweetdreams345 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2012 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 3

WOW! :O

Reviewer: mjfanforlife Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2012 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 3

ooo voices i  hear them too and iam not kidding i was listening to ''leave me alone'' i was singing the chorus and i heard another voice join it at first i thought it was Michael's ghost but now iam confused. 

Reviewer: mjfanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 03, 2012 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1

i know honestly you need to work on it and explain why Michael is angry i got mixed up in the story but everybody makes mistakes even iam trying to fix mine. lol is okay :)

Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 16, 2011 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

You know, this IS good for your first chapter or first story:) I'm loving it already and the suspence is killing me :) Please continue with this story :) <3

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