Date: Apr 02, 2013 06:31 am Title: Chapter 7
OMG great chapter please continue
Date: Apr 02, 2013 06:23 am Title: Chapter 3
I belive you girl they are so not crazy.
Date: Apr 02, 2013 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1
It's not horrible chapter i like it soo far
Date: Jan 03, 2012 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 3
ooo voices i hear them too and iam not kidding i was listening to ''leave me alone'' i was singing the chorus and i heard another voice join it at first i thought it was Michael's ghost but now iam confused.
Date: Jan 03, 2012 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
i know honestly you need to work on it and explain why Michael is angry i got mixed up in the story but everybody makes mistakes even iam trying to fix mine. lol is okay :)
Date: Dec 16, 2011 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know, this IS good for your first chapter or first story:) I'm loving it already and the suspence is killing me :) Please continue with this story :) <3