Date: Jan 19, 2012 10:40 am Title: Chapter 31
I'm wondering when things will get more ... hmm ... shall we say ...HOT between these two ...
I would like to see MJ and Nikki interacting more as a couple. Michael seems to be more like a brother.
Author's Response: No prob. I always appreciate ur reviews because they're honest
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2012 04:32 am Title: Chapter 31
Shes needs to be a little more thankful for michael because he has really helped her out a lot lol:) & hold on she got that mary jane in her locker? Whoaaaaa were did that come from? Are the cheerleaders setting her up? Or even worst, is michael setting her up?
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2012 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 31
Oh my shit. This suck it can't be... I wonder who it was..
Date: Jan 18, 2012 10:59 am Title: Chapter 30
haha cool, loved it!
[Report This]Date: Jan 15, 2012 02:17 am Title: Chapter 30
she dangerous and michael jackson bad lol. cant for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: Jan 13, 2012 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 30
Haha love it:) ha they are hot messes but i love them hanging out together
Date: Jan 12, 2012 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 30
I was the same way when I got my eyebrow pierced. I was scared as fuck. I really didn't like mines so I took it out a month after. Great Update.:)
Date: Jan 12, 2012 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Not Tryiing To Be Rude But Will you Hurry Up And Update?! Because The Ppl Who Love This Story Are Waiting.....
(PLZ DON"T TAKE THIS THE WRONG WAY)
Date: Jan 10, 2012 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 29
Sweet, aewsome, love the new brenda!
Date: Jan 05, 2012 10:53 am Title: Chapter 29
lol at ''Don't Rape Me''
Classic
Update Soon<3
Date: Jan 04, 2012 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
a person tried to jack your story its called "alana's the name". its the same exact storyline as yours lol. crazy hu?
Author's Response: Omg really??? Hahaha I'm very honored. Im very happy to inspire
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2012 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1
GO BRENDA GO BRENDA!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
ut's your birthday it's your birthday..no it's not her birthday but i just thought about it when you said this...lol
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2012 03:18 am Title: Chapter 29
nikki is so funny. damn that was impressive. its so good i love reading your stories. cant wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 29
Oh snaps hah a lot of action in this chapter:) i lovee this story its humorus and i love funny
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2012 10:25 am Title: Chapter 28
I fricking love this story haha:) Please update? Thanks!