Date: Dec 19, 2011 11:27 am Title: Chapter 26 + 100 POUNDS HEARTWEIGHT
Oh it's so sad...Their first Christmas together would have been so great I guess...
Poor Michael, crying...I hope they'll be able to find a way to be together...
Author's Response:
Yeah mikey's so sad about this... well, you'll see soon what happens - I'll update ASAP, because now school's really busy right before hollydays, YEAH and we have a french test tomorrow, your language - quite difficult :)
Date: Dec 19, 2011 01:58 am Title: Chapter 25 STOP MEANS GO ON
What a good chapter!!
Michael wanted to do his surprise but finally he was still quite ill at ease for her to do it...
I'm really waiting for the day where Michael will really take control and will do everything by himself...That the idea to make love will come from him...And nothing will stop him.
I think it will be amazing!!
Author's Response:
Haha, yeah ... that day has to come ;)
But i think Michael did that well because it was his opinion ... yes :D
Thank you for the nice comment, made my day ;)
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2011 10:22 am Title: Chapter 25 STOP MEANS GO ON
Hey girl. Hoottttttt, and I see you used those handcuffs again. Naughty, naught. ;)
Author's Response:
heyyy mikespyt, yepp I use them a lot :D I'm just a freaky fan :D haha, well I think Susan really needed them ...
Date: Dec 17, 2011 02:34 am Title: Chapter 24 CONTROL
So sweet chapter...
Michael is still very marked by what he lived with Lisa, but Susan played it well.
Now I'm waiting for Michael's surprise!!...It will be very interesting I guess...
Author's Response:
Yeah Michael's just shocked by what Lisa did...
Michael's surprise will come very soon , yeiii I finally catched the story and now I'm totally addicted to write it :D
Thank you for the nice review, and yepp the surprise is interesting HAHA, Michael's just such a hottie <3
Date: Dec 16, 2011 09:07 am Title: Chapter 23 FUN AT NIGHT
Oh God, this last sentence : "Now you tie me!"
A dream...Just to think about Michael saying that!!...Ok I calm down lol.
This chapter was really nice and I'm really happy that Michael feel so at ease with Susan. Enough to use things that meant torture for him some time ago.
I'm waiting for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Yess ;) haha that last sentence <3 <3 <3 A DREAM !!! Haha, you know that he wanted to do that at THIS IS IT, I have the dvd and there its in the outtakes, did you knew that ? Did you see the film ?
Next chapter's coming super soon :D haha, I'm nearly done with it, its much fun to write it :D
Date: Nov 29, 2011 09:42 am Title: Chapter 22 SURPRISE
Girl, in my reply to your review on my fanfic, I asked you for an update of yours and here it came lol...I didn't see it before to answer you lol
It was a sweet chapter....Too bad that Michael has to go on his tour, without her.
This room looks really great, a very king size bed...Hmm...interesting lol.
I was surprised they slept in separated bedrooms even if they slept together. But it was a very nice surprise...
Author's Response:
Yeah, I was really late this time ... I was reading your story and then I was writing on my other one(s) and I totally not forgott, but I was not IN the story... you know, with thoughts I was on the other one :D
And I thank you very much, yeah its so bad that he has to go on tour, but I love his tours and they just HAVE to be in this story. And yes, thes sleeped in separated bedrooms til then. But their rooms were right next to each other and Michael always wanted the door to be open.
And don't worry, now i'm " in " the story again and I'll update more often, sorry again - much L.O.V.E.
Date: Nov 11, 2011 09:12 am Title: Chapter 21 TEASING
Great chapter.
I'm happy Michael still trust Susan and I was happy to see that he did the first step for a sexual thing...Even after all he went through...
I wonder what will happen next.
Author's Response:
Yes, happyly they still trust each other, they just belong to each other.... and oh yes! If you want something special to happen in my story just write me what. I'm open for ideas from my readers ! I think I need a bit longer for the next chapter, so don't worry about this story would end. It makes a lot of fun to write it, especially to get nice reviews :)
Date: Nov 10, 2011 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 20 STILL LOVE ?
So now we have Karen in the story...Interesting.
I don't really understood Michael's reaction. Maybe he's still mad at her or maybe he didn't want to expose his private life, even in front of Karen?
I reallly want to know what Michael has to say to her...
Author's Response:
Yeah , Karen's now also in the story... you know actually I think she had a role ( and I dont know how far ) in his "real life " .... In the last time I saw many Karen Faye & Michael Jackson pictures, so I thought I have to pick her up here ;)
I'll update the next chapter, just when I finish this response to you ... so bye and now you can read the next chapter dear <3
Date: Nov 10, 2011 02:29 am Title: Chapter 19 IS SHE SICK ?!?
Again an intense chapter...
Poor Michael, always having to live this again and again...I really hope he won't have a grudge on Susan for what she did...I hope he will understand she was obliged to do it...
For your question, I'm 26.
Please read my stories maybe you could be interested...I don't oblige you anyway lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the suggestion to read your stories, I'll certainly read one !
Yeah... I think Michael has to calm down first from what happened and .... we'll see what will happen with Michael&Susan
Date: Nov 08, 2011 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 18 DELIVERED
Wow it's really intense...I'm really waiting for the next chapter to see how Michael will succeed to free him from Lisa!!
Don't need to thank me, even if it was nice from you, I just really like your story. You came with an interesting idea with Lisa torturing Michael.
So keep going!!
Author's Response:
:) Thank you for the compliments, dear. I'll update the next chapter very soon, probably this day. Its so cool to have such a dear reader like you are.
and yeeiii, Conrad Murray's guilty !
"Like Michael always said :
Lies run the sprint, but the truth wins the marathon. "
He's so right
Date: Nov 02, 2011 08:29 am Title: Chapter 17 THROUGH EVERYTHING
I read this part of the book for my story...Like you, Michael had to face the first allegations...
And I have to say you did it right...it's not easy to write on this kind of things...Well written.
I wonder how things will turn if he decided to reveal her existence...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all these compliments.... you're always such a dear reviewer !!! So nice to hear from you <3
I'll update soon, much L.O.V.E
Date: Oct 30, 2011 11:21 am Title: Chapter 16 WACKO JACKO
Yeah I'm reading this book right now...I'm at the end of the bad era but I searched a little for this part when I came to this in my story...
For exemple, I used the scene of the theather where Michael had to be photograph by the police...Like you, his girlfriend was with him during this moment...
I'm waiting for the next chapter...
Date: Oct 30, 2011 03:27 am Title: Chapter 16 WACKO JACKO
Sad chapters...You're going to write on this difficult part of his life, and it won't be easy...
I did it for mine and it was hard cause it brought a lot of bad memories, but I'm sure you'll do great!!!
Update soon :)
Author's Response:
A very sad times, yes your right.... I'll try my best to write it right. I read the book " Michael Jackson The Magic and the Madness " I think that'll help to write better because thats what really happened... Did you read this book to ?
Thank you for beliving in be :) And always revewing... makes me very happy !!
Date: Oct 16, 2011 11:44 am Title: Chapter 14 TWO BAD GIRLS
No I meant the fact that I said that Lisa was a bitch...I meant that my feelings needed to go out lol
Author's Response:
Yeeesss, now I understand , hahahha.... I'm so stupid :P
Date: Oct 16, 2011 10:37 am Title: Chapter 14 TWO BAD GIRLS
Oh my God!!! This Lisa is a real bitch!!!
Sorry but it had to go out lol...
Poor Michael, I felt so bad for him...I hope they'll find a way and that those 2 bitches won't publish the pictures.
I saw you changed the name of your story and the sum up...I think it will be a new interesting direction...Keep going!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, If they will publishe these pics and videos.... that would be damn mean ! Thank you, cool you like my new sum and the name ! But... what do you mean with , you had to go out ?