[Report This]Date: Dec 31, 2011 05:40 pm Title: WHO'S BAD?
Update please!!! ASAP!!
Author's Response:
Hi!
Sure,I will update as soon as I can...
THANK YOU for staying with me !
MUCH L-O-V-E!
Date: Dec 25, 2011 11:51 am Title: ,,We'll see...."
Yes I'm mad at you sweety!!...I was waiting an update lol.
No it's nothing, with my full time job I'm more busy and so I know what it is to have less time to write.
You did a good job on this one. Michael and Ariel are still so cute together and Amelia is still irritating. So good job lol.
I updated my story if you have the time to read.
Hugs sweety!!
Author's Response:
Hi !
Sorry for the delay ! I was...kinda busy...
How's your new job?
THANK YOU ENDLESSLY for constantly supporting and ecouraging me and all of us !
As I said MANY times,I try me BEST when I write a chapter for you...because.....you know,after all.............
WE'RE A FAMILY!
To be sincere,......Amelia starts to irritate me too :))
I DON'T like this type of humans...I don't think ANYBODY likes them....
I've read your new chapters,and let me tell you this : YOU'RE A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
You know what I;m going to say,don't you?
Hugs to you too ! BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGGGG hugs!
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2011 11:27 am Title: ,,We'll see...."
Giiiirl first of all; HOW could we be mad at someone as amazing, beautiful, sweet and LOVELY as you?? *_* of course you are forgiven; you shouldnt be saying sorry in the first place haha;D
But OMG I loved it! Haha the conversations between Ariel and Michael are too cute and omg Amelia better watch out; it looks like Michael has something planned haha.
I loved it; update when you can!! xD
With love always, Sabrina.:D
Author's Response:
Hi LOVELY Sabrina!
Well (blushing) .....I was and still am WORRIED about all of you being upset at me for not writing.....you know....because I TRULY CARE about YOU ALL in the most highest way I could !
You ARE my FAMILY!
We are TOGETHER in this...in ALL that Michael does...
Probably you've noticed that I am talking about Michael at present....well......that's NOT hard to explain : Michael NEVER died for ME....NEVER! NEVER EVER!
He's still HERE,with us......and I KNOW that you feel it too......we ALL feel it !
Hope you understand!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....I try my best to make them the cutest couple!
Yep...Amelia better WATCH OUT ! hmmmmmmmm....Michael.....we'll see what he has planned for her....will he need help? will Amelia succeed?
I ,,DON'T" know!
Or do I?
:))
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH ! I am GLAD and PROUD you loved it!
With L-O-V-E and MUCH L-O-V-E!
Alina.
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2011 10:40 am Title: ,,We'll see...."
Finaaaaaaaaaaaaaally a new chapter :)) <3. Glad that you updated<3
=)) how Ariel tried to convince Michael to eat meat was..... hilarious :))) aaand cute :X
But of course Amelia had to break every sight of happiness X( ; I would give her the ,,evil eye"
She's just so...hypocrite
And you haven't done a good job, you did a GREAT one <3<3<3
You left the final with so much suspenseeeee <3 and I love it!
Updateee <3; I'm eager to know what will happen!!
All the L.O.V.E in the world! <3:X<3
Author's Response:
:))
Yep....FINALLY a NEW chapter !
:D :D :D
Awwwwwwwwwwwww.....THANK YOU so much !
I try MY BEST to make this couple LOVELY ,FUNNY,SWEET and you know..this type of things...
What can I say? : I am the VERY romantic type of girl !
SERIOUSLY!
As I am used to ,,think" and say : ,,When something is good,it has to be at least ONE single problem which can disturb you. "
Have I done a ,,GRAT" job,as you said?
I.................you left me ,,Speechless"
Just like Michael does!
Yep...I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE the suspence !
But there are times I DON'T ! :))
WILL update VEEEEERY SOON!
ALL THE L-O-V-E IN THE WORLD TO YOU TOO!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
ALINA.
[Report This]Date: Dec 13, 2011 03:11 am Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
GAH! I FINALLY REMEMBERED!!!! LOL
I love the plot to your story...very cute. And the picture of Michael with the spider on the front....captures my attention every time I see it update!
:) I will try my hardest to start reviewing each chapter...it seems like my mind is in a hundred different places lately! LOL
Hope you update soon!!
Much Love,
Leah
Author's Response:
:))
THANK YOU so much!
For me,THAT spider is..........................................................ugh!
I DON'T like .....................them...........................................AT ALL!
...
I'm GLAD you like the picture! I try my best to post the best pictures!
There's no NEED to review on each chapter sweetie! I DON'T mind!
I do sometimes that too! I get ,,lost" in my world and you know...
I will try! I am SO DEPRESSED that I didn't update! But I will!
MUCH L-O-V-E to you too!
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2011 02:27 am Title: I love you !
Heeey girl so sorry i havent been reviewing; i think i became a *silent reader* for a moment because of my stupid phone which doesnt let me log in >.<
Omg Michael is soo sweet, those teddy bears are so cute! You know the second bear with a heart that reads *I love you*? My dad gave my mum a similar one to that on their anniversary hehe ^__^
Awhh Ariel and Michael have to be the cutest couple ever, i love them and i love you for being an amazing writer and such a lovely gurl(:
Much love always, Sabrinaaa:D
Author's Response:
Heeey Sabrina !
there's NO need to apologize for that !
I DON'T oblige ANYONE to review!
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww :X:X:X
you're so sweet for saying such BEAUTIFUL words towards them!
I try my best to create something SPECIAL....
Really? Well....I wish your parents LONG LIFE,HAPPINESS,JOY,MANY SMILES AND LAUGHS AND LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTS OF LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE ! AND TO YOU TOO!
OH,MY....THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR THINKING LIKE THAT OF ME!
....I don't think I'm a great writer though....
YOU are a LOVELY girl!
MUCH L-O-V-E!,
Alina :D!
Date: Dec 08, 2011 02:13 pm Title: ,,Leave me alone,stop DOGGING me around ! "
You are totally right....but that's it, some people are not so "open-minded", like Michael said once....and they think what they want to think...
Um, about talking to much, I don't want to be boring, really.....it happened to me to talk with someone about a thing that was bothering me, and that person looked like was paying attention....and suddenly he remembered that yesterday it was a show on Tv that he missed (for example)....and then he started to ask random questions that didn't have anything to do with what I was saying..
To be honest, when I wrote that, and I saw how long it is, I didn't wanted to post it.
Author's Response:
My dear,
I TOTALY agree with you...but that's how God let us on this planet.....
YOU will NEVER be BORING form ME !
NEVER
NEVER
NEVER
EVER !
GOT THAT?
GOOD.
:))
Please,DON'T apologise .....you don't have a reason to......
To ME....NO ONE is boring.....just....that,we...the MJ family...understand eachother PERFECTLY.....
never DOUBT that !
I KNOW what it feels like to talk with someone and that person wasn't paying attention to me....
....
NEVER doubt wheter or not you should POST your review....I WON'T oblige NO ONE to wirte a LONG or SHORT review....for me,reviews represent a way to communicate and FEEL what the other fans FEEL....
SO,next time you will wirte a review,please ....PLEASE....do NOT have second thoughts !
LOVE YOU!
AND THE FAMILY!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Nov 28, 2011 10:29 am Title: I love you !
Suspense suspense suspense <3 ,I love it!
Sooooooooooo sweet chapter :x. I was actually thinking which teddy bear I like the most, but I couldn't come to a conclusion :)),, they are all so cute :x:x
Michael and Ariel are SO in love :x:x
Updatee!!<3
L.O.V.E!! :*
P.S: I was wondering, you said that you're not so confident in your writing style,why? because it's great! really! I know that sometimes we can underestimate ourselves for no reason...
Author's Response:
Firstly :
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR SUPPORTING AND UNDERSTANDING ME! IT MEANS SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH !
Secondly :
:)) yes,I love them too.....BUT not because they are made by me...it's because that would be my ideal couple...it's in my vision....
yep,the bears are cuuute !
Well.....to answer your question......um........I....I...I was never confident in me.....because I often understimate myself....something in my head tells me that I can't do it.....but it's just a bad voice.....for example,my gift from God : painting and drawing.....there had beeen a few people which told me that I could go NO WHERE with it....they make fun of it....but it hurt me
DEEPLY....because you know,.....it's...it's MY talent.......it's a SIGN form God....it's HIS creation.....everything I paint or draw....it's from God....it's HIS creation ,NOT mine......
And it just stabs your heart when you hear that......and it brought me in a little depression state......but I THINK not KNOW....that it's ok now.....I'm trying to ,,recover" from it.....
Only God knows our minds and souls....He knows us BETTER than we or our parents do....
THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH AGAIN DEAR!
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-V-E!
P.S. : Please,write a story too!
Date: Nov 28, 2011 09:48 am Title: I love you !
Oh they are too cute!!
I loved when Michael took her at the airport. It was funny and so romantic...
I didn't like to see this Amelia at the end of the chapter...I'm waiting for the next update sweety.
Author's Response:
Hi dear!
Tu es tres belle!
( with my francais,I don't know if I spellled right :)) )
Awwww....merci beaucoup !
Michael will do many things to surprise her...you will see !
about ,,miss wanna-know-anything " ....we'll see what's going to happen
THANK YOU VERY MUUUUUUUUCH FOR ALWAYS COMMENTING!
Je t'aime !
Beaucoup d'amour !
MUCH L-O-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Nov 27, 2011 04:36 pm Title: I love you !
yay new chapter. aww michael bought ariel flowers and teddy bears he such a gentleman. wonderful update by the way. that amelia chick doesnt quit does she hmm. u two make me sick she doesnt care about young love. i love the pictures there so beautiful. :D m.u.c.h l.o.v.e
Author's Response:
New chapter ! YAY :))
THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO ENDLESSLY dear!
hE'S A GENTLEMAN,ISN'T HE?
....yes,about the last part...well...I wanted to add some suspense....:D don't strangle me!
thank you for your lovely comments!
I try my best when I pick the photos!
LOVE YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!
MUCH L-O-O-O-V-E!
Date: Nov 27, 2011 03:06 pm Title: ,,Leave me alone,stop DOGGING me around ! "
I totally agree with you. The WROST thing in the world is insulting what other people love. They really do not care, you know...This summer, on Michael's birthday, I wached Mtv all the day, because they dedicated all the program to him (:x). It was the happiest day from all the vacantion. My feet hurted from all the dancing and jumping, and I cried half and hour from happiness. Grandma' was in the same room with me as I wached Akon speaking about Michael. And then my older cousin came in visit. I greeted him and he asked me what I was doing. I told him it's Michael's birthday and I'm watching Mtv. Then grandma' asked him if he likes Michael, and he responded ,,No, he's just a big fool". I turned as red as a tomato, and I tried to find something good to reply to him...but I didn't,and I continued to watch tv, but I couldn't concentrate anymore. I was so angry. I cannot explain how much. Then my anger turned into saddness...How could someone judge a person without even knowing him/her?? It's so stupid!
Later, I told my mother about what my cousin said, and about how I could't give him a reply. And I gived her some examples that ,of course, after he left, came into my mind. She told me that Michael's not my dad and that I'm not Michael's family to tell him anything in Michael's defense......yeah....I didn't tried to make her understand because I knew she wouldn't...
Another day at school, I was talking with one of my classmates about Michael. Another 2 classmates heard me and begined to cotradict to one another about the things that Michael used to bleach his skin. I am so tired of all of this stupid rumours...Wherever I turn my head I hear people talk about all of this garbage, I really can't understand what is their problem. He did whatever he wanted to do with his personal life and this has nothing to do with his music, his creation. If someone hears his name, she/he already throws opinions about how many plastic surgeries he had, and what not. People should leave him the hell alone, he had enough of this.
I am so happy that someone umderstands me,really.
L.O.V.E :x:x
P.S: sorry for talking so much, I just got so revolted about this. I was searching on the ProTv site about the trial of his doctor, and I already found stupid tabloidic news. Whenever I see a title like "The 'real' life of Michael Jackson", " Michael Jackson's hidden secret revealed" and more, I go like "Oh no, not again"... it's SO stupid.
Author's Response:
My lovely Theodora,
When I read this...it just BREAKS my heart.....seriously!
i KNOW what it feels like....I know very welll.....
I watched it too!
Let me tell you this ( about what your mother said) : When you have a lover and let's say it just happens something bad to you,if he loves you truly,he will jump imeaditely to your side...right?and he ISN'T from YOUR family! so....???????????? I just simply don't get why your mother said such thing...it's TRULY sad and depressing....But God knows what's the best for us...
My dear,
KEEP THE FAITH,DON'T LET NOBODY TURN YOU DOWN !
God knows everyone's soul!
I just DON'T get it : why they comment to him if they DON'T know him AT ALL? THEY'RE JUST SIMPLY JEALOUS !
But we are a family !
Whenever you feel sad,you can ALWAYS come to me and tell me anything sweetheart ! all of you can !
I will be here !
you can talk to me anytime,at any hour!
My,my.....what did I tell you? DON'T apologize for writing ,,so much " ...I LOVE IT!
As I said earlier,I know what you feel.....that's life.....
ALWAYS remember this :
,,Just call my name,and I'll BE THERE! "
MUCH L-O-O-O-V-E!
Date: Nov 27, 2011 01:53 pm Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
haha wow you are so nice!!! and thank you my dear! i did find it....and it is now on my computers background :D keep up the great work with the story!!!
Author's Response:
Dear,
There's NO need to thank me....not at all ! :)
I try my best for you!
Wow...I wish I could post too a backgroung with Michael......You see..I have windows 7 and it isn't the originaly copy.....and I could post a background for a month ,then they forbid it....and now,my background is BLACK.....eh....I don't know what to do about it...at least I have many pictures with Michael :*
THANK YOU FOR COMMETNING! YOU'RE TOOO NICE!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
[Report This]Date: Nov 26, 2011 10:47 pm Title: ,,I was in the bed when I was doing that..."
This chapter was amazing. Not mentioning Ariel in the interview was the right thing to do. Michael will tell everyone about her when he feels like it. He just needs time.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SWEETIE!
Yes,I think that too.....They both need time to think about revealing their relationship to the world....
But they will see what's going to happen ....
MUCH L-O-O-O-V-E!
Date: Nov 21, 2011 09:14 am Title: ,,'Cause you cameras can’t control, the minds of those who know That you’ll even sell your soul just to get a story sold"
Yes an update!!
I know how it is to be busy so don't apologize, sweety.
I loved this chapter. they're so cute together. I'm happy she agreed to be more in the spotlights if their relationship become public...
But even if they loved each other more than anything, I'm not sure it will be easy for them...
And what about the fact that Michael was her neighbour?...Will she find out later?
Author's Response:
:)
Yes,an update!
yes,I had a hard time with school but now it's all almost gone.....
Awwwww......THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUUUUUUUUCH!
Well....as we ALL know.....being a celebrity is not quite easy....the life is not always ,,pink"
Sometimes,it's blue ,green,yellow,red .... you know :))
Yes,about the neighbour thing....well......I LOVE to keep you in SUSPENSE!
:))
MUCH L-O-O-O-O-V-E!
Date: Nov 20, 2011 04:31 pm Title: I hope you all will enjoy it!
thank you for telling me about the picture!! sorry i haven't commented lately!! Your story is absolutely wonderful. keep up the great work!!!!
Author's Response:
Absolutely NO problem dear! no,NO...you DON'T have to worry about not commenting.....
THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCH ! You are a great person!
MUCH L-O-V-E!
P.S. : I hope you found it!